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ExtremelyGamer wrote:

Billybob-Mario wrote:

Can you please review Blimp Wars?

Originality: 10/10
It is a very original idea with a blimp getting hit by turrets. I don't know what else to say here.

Graphics: 9/10
The graphics are high revolutionary, but the ground is sometimes edgy.

Programming: 9/10
The programming is very complex, though the ground generator sometimes makes very weird shapes, maybe you could improve it?

Sound: 8/10
You have a great amount of sounds, but you could improve them, the explosions don't sound too realistic.

Difficulty (8/10), Length (10/10), Control (7/10): 8/10
The difficulty is okay, as it verges from 1 turret to more! Though it is a bit too easy as  you have better weapons such as directed missiles. The length is never ending which is very good in a game. The control is a bit too small and I sometimes end up having the missiles explode right after I press space. The blimp flies too slow and both bullets are a bit too slow.

Extra points I'd give you: 36/50
The game is well done and complex, but it needs quite a few tweaks and it is not too addictive.


OVERALL: 80/100

Thank you! The game actually does have an end (somewhat) with a boss, if you get that far. I will see if there is a way to improve the world generator and sounds.

  my project
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/katzisc/2654829

NOW ASK FOR YOUR REVIEW HERE: http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic … 16&p=1

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ExtremelyGamer wrote:

katzisc wrote:

  my project
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/katzisc/2654829

Can you please ask for the review here: http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic … 16&p=1

Originality: 8/10
The game's to too original, as I saw a few of these on the site. But the bouncing bomb is original!

Graphics: 9/10
The graphics are okay, but the game can lag at some points.

Programming: 9/10
Sometimes, the cars don't disappear and I take that as a glitch, the programming is good, but news some lag and glitch improvement. At some points it's impossible to survive.

Sound: 8/10
The sound is ok, but there are lots of bangs at the same time, which was disturbing to my ears.

Difficulty (8/10), Length (10/10) and Control (7/10): 8/10
The difficulty is ok, but at some cases it's impossible to survive and it kind of stays at the same difficulty. the length is great as it is never-ending. The control is ok, but it's unstable. There's a bit too many controls

Extra points I'd give you: 36/50
The game's ok, but not too fun or addictive. You could add a few new elements to make this game a lot more funner!


OVERALL: 78/100

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Portal Race

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

katzisc wrote:

  my project
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/katzisc/2654829

Can you please ask for the review here: http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic … 16&p=1

Originality: 8/10
The game's to too original, as I saw a few of these on the site. But the bouncing bomb is original!

Graphics: 9/10
The graphics are okay, but the game can lag at some points.

Programming: 9/10
Sometimes, the cars don't disappear and I take that as a glitch, the programming is good, but news some lag and glitch improvement. At some points it's impossible to survive.

Sound: 8/10
The sound is ok, but there are lots of bangs at the same time, which was disturbing to my ears.

Difficulty (8/10), Length (10/10) and Control (7/10): 8/10
The difficulty is ok, but at some cases it's impossible to survive and it kind of stays at the same difficulty. the length is great as it is never-ending. The control is ok, but it's unstable. There's a bit too many controls

Extra points I'd give you: 36/50
The game's ok, but not too fun or addictive. You could add a few new elements to make this game a lot more funner!


OVERALL: 78/100

thank you very much for your evaluation to me is very helpful

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/puppetest/2666857

It's not done yet

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

bluecat600 wrote:

review one of mine!

Tell me which one! I'm not the best at picking...

review my first project

amiaia1234 wrote:

i would like to have http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/amiaia1234/2610846 reviewed by Green23 and ftf841, please!

They are not reviewing at the moment, only me now, as they are either too busy or on holiday.

ExtremelyGamer wrote:

amiaia1234 wrote:

i would like to have http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/amiaia1234/2610846 reviewed by Green23 and ftf841, please!

They are not reviewing at the moment, only me now, as they are either too busy or on holiday.

Well you thought wrong ExtremlyGamer!!!

amiaia1234 wrote:

i would like to have http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/amiaia1234/2610846 reviewed by Green23 and ftf841, please!

I'm not sure about ftf841 but here is my review:

Addictiveness: 1/5
Well, there was no addictiveness.  Sorry 

Programming: 4/5
Scripts are very organized and simple.

Controls: 4/5
(No comment)

Graphics and Sound: 3/5
You could have added some more color and also a stop button to stop music.  "This Old Man" is a little out of tune...

Theme: 4/5
(No comment)

Overall: 16/25
This project needs more stuff like a volume button for example, it was okay but could be better.  Just improve it some more and it will be great.

Criteria:
1/5: Needs lots of improvement and work...
2/5: Still working, needs some improvement
3/5: Your doing great!  Keep going!  You almost meets the standard.
4/5: Great job!  Your there! Keep up the good work!
5/5: Exceptional quality!  Expert stuff.

Last edited by green23 (2012-07-19 22:23:23)