the story line still needs work!!! i've got this so far-
Neon is a quiet square at 4-Sides (a school). He is a nerd who usually gets called pixel for being smaller than everyone else. He fancies a girl in his class, who has beautiful sharp corners, and a perfectly equal-sized body of a true cube. (You try animating a square in 3D- they'd have to be a cube or a very thin cuboid).
Neon tries to impress the girl, but accidentally bumps into Sharpy- A triangle with attitude! Sharpy also fancies the girl, and challanges Neon to a fight. However, when Neon runs away to a bus stop to get home, Sharpy follows him. Without thinking, Neon panics and Sharpy is ran over after being kicked into the road. Neon runs away, being chased by citizens down the streets.
Next, he is thrown into a black sedan. They take him to their hideout which is full of orange cubes. Although Neon killed Sharpy, who was an enemy in disguise, it was not enough to prove himself worthy of becoming a member. So, he had to complete a mission to find the machine, where he too could become an orange cube. However, at the last minute the group tell him "Now this is a peaceful place, so enter without any weapons". It was a trap! The machine was fake and he was weapon-less. However, he uses his learnt skills to beat the super group, and decides to travel around the world once he is safe.
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Borrego6165 wrote:
the story line still needs work!!! i've got this so far-
Neon is a quiet square at 4-Sides (a school). He is a nerd who usually gets called pixel for being smaller than everyone else. He fancies a girl in his class, who has beautiful sharp corners, and a perfectly equal-sized body of a true cube. (You try animating a square in 3D- they'd have to be a cube or a very thin cuboid).
Neon tries to impress the girl, but accidentally bumps into Sharpy- A triangle with attitude! Sharpy also fancies the girl, and challanges Neon to a fight. However, when Neon runs away to a bus stop to get home, Sharpy follows him. Without thinking, Neon panics and Sharpy is ran over after being kicked into the road. Neon runs away, being chased by citizens down the streets.
Next, he is thrown into a black sedan. They take him to their hideout which is full of orange cubes. Although Neon killed Sharpy, who was an enemy in disguise, it was not enough to prove himself worthy of becoming a member. So, he had to complete a mission to find the machine, where he too could become an orange cube. However, at the last minute the group tell him "Now this is a peaceful place, so enter without any weapons". It was a trap! The machine was fake and he was weapon-less. However, he uses his learnt skills to beat the super group, and decides to travel around the world once he is safe.
Good, good...
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For it to be entertaining, it has to be serious and action-packed, whilst having jokes inserted here and there. This will take me absolutely ages, so for now get your team to animate that collab thing I already wrote- that'll keep you busy for a week or so. I'll try to write up this script any time. When I made the Ugha comics, one was drawn and planned out on paper on a bus on the way to school, another was done during a Geography controlled assessment (yes- very controlled) and the other was done at break when I go to the school library.
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Yoshiboy wrote:
coolhogs wrote:
OK, team...
Now, let's animate Borrego's other script...
I won't be of any help for now, until Borrego finishes the Neon script.Ok, what kind of animation? Slide show?
do the best you can
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Yoshiboy wrote:
coolhogs wrote:
OK, team...
Now, let's animate Borrego's other script...
I won't be of any help for now, until Borrego finishes the Neon script.Ok, what kind of animation? Slide show?
Yes, a slide show...
And I'll upload it when you're done...
XenoK, I really need you!
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coolhogs wrote:
Yoshiboy wrote:
coolhogs wrote:
OK, team...
Now, let's animate Borrego's other script...
I won't be of any help for now, until Borrego finishes the Neon script.Ok, what kind of animation? Slide show?
Yes, a slide show...
And I'll upload it when you're done...
XenoK, I really need you!
Cool! AS LONG AS THE NEON STORY IS ANIMATED. I don't want a script which will have so much time spent on it becoming a slide show.
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sorry, had an idea for a new story in the Ugha series and juts had to spent all day turning it into a comic! sorry! i'll continue on the script tonight
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I'm creating a game, where you build a spaceship, and you take the spaceship to space, and you have to dodge asteroids, get coins to get power-ups.
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Hello this is great!
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