Scratch

Heres mine. Still in alpha though.


http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/pipercubjl/2621398


PS thanks for doing this. You are very kind.

Doesn't this belong in Requests?

>Note from BlackWhite<

I may get in 1 of these, 2 if i'm lucky, today. Tomorrow, I'll probably be able to get the rest.

Keep the games comin', though!

Last edited by ROSMan (2012-06-25 08:15:14)

pipercubjl wrote:

Heres mine. Still in alpha though.


http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/pipercubjl/2621398


PS thanks for doing this. You are very kind.

no problem 

Crypt
A BlackWhite Demo Review
9/10 (Fantastic)
(Demos get a weighted score, which means they get points simply for potential.)

Pros:
> Your game captures the scene it wants to capture. It certainly seems eerie.
> The static effect and the lighting idea were awesome. They made the experience and gameplay better.
> Very nice menu and art.
>The story is good, even though you only get a glimpse of it.

Need To Add:
> If you're going to have a static effect, make the switches and things a specific color or color scheme. I thought the lever in the first level was a crack in the wall, like part of the art.
> You should include some way, even like hitting a lever, to destroy enemies. I suppose it'll be hard to advance the plot without creating a way to destroy them.

bump

Last edited by ROSMan (2012-06-26 15:17:25)

brinkbrink wrote:

brinkbrink wrote:

This> http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Felseisen/1242567

ROSMan wrote:

>Note from BlackWhite<

I may get in 1 of these, 2 if i'm lucky, today. Tomorrow, I'll probably be able to get the rest.

Keep the games comin', though!

So posting it a second time isn't going to get it done any faster.

Last edited by ROSMan (2012-06-26 14:57:30)

brinkbrink wrote:

This> http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Felseisen/1242567

Rix's Adventure
A BlackWhite Review
8/10 (Very Good)

Pros:
> Like the story. Adds a lot of effect.
> Skill was definitely needed. Also, good work on the ways the bosses attacked, each one was different.
> Nice art style and title screen.

Work On:
> Change the sound effects to things outside of the Scratch sound selection.
> Make the shorter things the dragons say take less time to say. It was a bit annoying waiting like 5 seconds for them to say "RUN RIX!"
>Tidy up the graphics a bit, y'know, make the lines smoother...

TO SUM UP:
> The pros are things that many games on scratch don't have, and the negatives are just small fixes that could tidy up the game. Good work!

Last edited by ROSMan (2012-06-26 15:55:15)

SciTecCf wrote:

Can you please review Gray by Scorpion_Studios? Thanks!

Gray 1.0
A BlackWhite Review
7/10 (Good)

Pros:
> Good concept. This has never been explored before.
> Like the level idea, and the shop.
> Good soundtrack and sounds.

Work On:
> Need to make the instructions a LOT more reader-friendly. I felt myself getting a headache. Create illustrations, or at least breaks in the type, to keep the person reading.
> You have to talk about the shop in the instructions.
> Cut each point requirement in half. It took way too long to get to level 2. I almost lost interest.

TO SUM UP:
> Build on this fine arcade game, like more types of dots, etc. My biggest problem was the instructions.

ROSMan wrote:

SciTecCf wrote:

Can you please review Gray by Scorpion_Studios? Thanks!

Gray 1.0
A BlackWhite Review
7/10 (Good)

Pros:
> Good concept. This has never been explored before.
> Like the level idea, and the shop.
> Good soundtrack and sounds.

Work On:
> Need to make the instructions a LOT more reader-friendly. I felt myself getting a headache. Create illustrations, or at least breaks in the type, to keep the person reading.
> You have to talk about the shop in the instructions.
> Cut each point requirement in half. It took way too long to get to level 2. I almost lost interest.

TO SUM UP:
> Build on this fine arcade game, like more types of dots, etc. My biggest problem was the instructions.

Thanks for the advice, ROS. We'll try to incorporate this in the next version.

bumpity bumpity bump

I Saw Herobrine!!!!