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#1 2012-06-23 14:12:50

leondoubleh
Scratcher
Registered: 2012-01-29
Posts: 21

Can someone review my project?

Itz this game http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/leondoubleh/2514307
controlls and stuff are in the describtion.
Comment in the project plz , not this  smile

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#2 2012-06-23 14:35:06

scratcher5000
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Registered: 2012-02-19
Posts: 100+

Re: Can someone review my project?

here i made it a link, to make things links (as a new scratcher) you must do this: [url,]Insert link here [/url,] (but take out the commas). and btw it's totally fine that you didn't do it because you're a new scratcher.

anyways here's the link da link

My quick review!:

The game was pretty good considering you're still a new scratcher (although you've technically been on scratch a month and ten days longer then I have). Controls were pretty straight forward and graphics were pretty good.

you might wanna make a menu screen though and sometimes the player gets frozen.

Another thing you might wanna do is make a mode where it is in fps mode (first person shooter, NOT frames per second). my final thing is you might want to change your spelling mistakes like acoure (its spelled occur)

anyways good job... big_smile  and keep on scratchin'

Last edited by scratcher5000 (2012-06-23 14:41:12)


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#3 2012-06-23 15:31:00

leondoubleh
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Registered: 2012-01-29
Posts: 21

Re: Can someone review my project?

Thanks ill try keep your tips in mind  smile

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