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#101 2012-06-15 08:21:48

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Animeboy975 wrote:

Lilcat22 wrote:

have you read cupcakes? it made me puke!

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ahh! da pwitty veiw!

Really? I watched the video, and i love it. *evil smile*

Was that MistrDavey's video? Because that one kicks the butt.


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#102 2012-06-15 08:45:18

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

nama wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Lilcat22 wrote:

have you read cupcakes? it made me puke!

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Really? I watched the video, and i love it. *evil smile*

Was that MistrDavey's video? Because that one kicks the butt.

Yeah. It's gross when you first see it, but if you watch it over and over again, it gets funny. NEVER watch shed.mov though.


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#103 2012-06-15 08:47:24

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Animeboy975 wrote:

nama wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:


Really? I watched the video, and i love it. *evil smile*

Was that MistrDavey's video? Because that one kicks the butt.

Yeah. It's gross when you first see it, but if you watch it over and over again, it gets funny. NEVER watch shed.mov though.

i got as far as the part where the things on the wall were about to initiate a musical number
it was just too silly to go on

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#104 2012-06-16 12:07:51

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

bump


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#105 2012-06-16 15:30:23

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Fairly Odd Parents Theory:

Timmy Turner is always neglected by his parents like you see in the show, he has a psychotic baby- sitter, and a teacher who hates him. Timmy has two pet goldfish that he talked to and were his imaginary friends and eventually thought they were real which is why as a kid grows older they forget they ever had them. Timmy pretends Mr. Crocker is trying to capture his fairies as a reason for hating him. Fairyworld is a made up place Timmy came up with for his imaginary friends.


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#106 2012-06-17 13:36:00

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Andres-Vander wrote:

The original Jeff the Killer is based on an actual serial killer (I won't link to it since it's a profiling of a serial killer, but you can find it easily yourself)

I hope that killer is DEAD or not in MY STATE. I don't want to see a guy without a nose stab me to death while I'm dreaming about candy.


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#107 2012-06-17 14:39:55

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

[deleted it myself because I didn't know that it was disrespectful for some people]

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#108 2012-06-17 14:42:06

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Spite, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

To be continued...

weve got 5 pages and samid probably just doesnt want to come
if this was made by you dont post it here, post in in my thread in making and creating!

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#109 2012-06-17 15:13:29

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Spite, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

To be continued...

That's not a creepypasta that is Genesis from the Bible with a slight twist.

Maybe Samid11 is just upset that her thread was closed down. Why doesn't she request to have it reopened and make sure people don't fight like they did before it was closed.


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#110 2012-06-17 15:24:04

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Garr8 wrote:

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Spite, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

To be continued...

That's not a creepypasta that is Genesis from the Bible with a slight twist.

Maybe Samid11 is just upset that her thread was closed down. Why doesn't she request to have it reopened and make sure people don't fight like they did before it was closed.

It did say 'To be continued'.

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#111 2012-06-17 19:25:04

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

AvatarAang4 wrote:

A new creepypasta thread, huh? Somebody please repost the good non gory creepy pastas from the first few pages such as Jeff the Killer, The Theater, and Pokemon Dead Channel

Jeff The Killer isn't gross? Well, I think it's sad, cruel, disturbing, and outright stupid, other than how Jeff looks. O_O


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#112 2012-06-17 19:29:36

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AvatarAang4 wrote:

Sid Meier's Civilization 5

I went to play Civilization V, one of my favorite games. I took a short while to load and the everything was normal at first. When it got to the opening scene where the old man describes his vision to his son, the man looks ill and his son  looks normal. But instead of the old man describing a glorious empire his son would build, the man said "Son, I had a vision of our people's future. It was terrible, terrible" He looked straight at me and said "You should have chosen not to play this, but it is too late now"
The son, who did not seem to notice me said "Father, who are you talking to?" It was getting to awkward, so I skipped it. I chose a new game on a small world. I claimed Alexander of Greece as my nation and founded Athens in what seemed to be entirely desert. I built scouts to explore my region and I met the City- State of Tyre. It had its normal diplomacy screen and everything, so I exit out. I would try to conquer Tyre later. Eventually, my scouts found three other civilizations: Napoleon of France, Ghenghis Khan of the Mongols, and the jerk Ghandi of India (I am not trying to be rascist. I have nothing against RL Ghandi or his culture, the game's Ghandi is a butt hole.) I struck up trade with Ghenghis Khan, who, unlike the real Khan, was extremely peaceful. I soon back stabbed him and took all his cities early. Right after i subjugated Karakorum, his capital, Gandhi appears and declares war on Napoleon (I thought Gandhi was a pacifist.) He went blitzkrieg on France and Napoleon, being French, surrendered easily.  Gandhi appeared on my diplomacy screen and declared war on me. He was a world conquering dictator! I asked Tyre for a military alliance, but the diplomacy screen said "Get Out! Hurry!" I exited the screen thinking it was a glitch. Gandhi popped up again, but this time his skin was pitch black. His eyes were tiny and bloodshot. and stared into your soul, and he had an eery grin. He said "YOU MUST DIE!" He sent a chill down my spine. I was just recovering from my war with Ghenghis Khan when Gandhi's Elephant Riders appeared out of nowhere and took the city of Orleans. He even had Giant Death Robots in the medieval time! I gathered the few forces I had and charged. But my units never had a chance to move, right when I gave them the command, they immediately fell dead. Tyre's diplomacy screen appeared again, which was weird because i did not click on it. It said "He is unbeatable"

I tried turning off my computer, but it was no use and kept making beeping sounds. I could have sworn that I heard the computer "breathe." Gandhi popped up again and said "You told people I was a wimp for being a pacifist! I will show you the true might of Gandhi!

Tyre's screen emerged again and said "You're too late"
Gandhi conquered my nation and the computer released and ear shattering scream and it shut off. The Civ 5 icon is still there, but I never did click on it again, knowing Gandhi now has his own empire and has vowed to destroy me if I see him again.

Tell me what you think!

WHAT???? I knew Civilization 5 has glitches, but THIS isn't very believeable. I know this is a story...

AND ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN IN A STORY, AND THAT'S WHY STORIES ARE FUN, FUN, FUN...


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#113 2012-06-17 19:33:24

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Death, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

Jenna woke up with cold sweat tickling her face, this nightmare was different form when his boyfriend would dump him. This one was actually scary. She had no idea about what this dream was about, but it was terrifying. Was it a sign of things to come? Was it a vision from thousands of years ago? (The nudity was a big clue.) She tried to clear her mind as she fell asleep once more, hoping it would come to an end.

But it didn't. It carried on.

Every bite of the apple gave a new feeling to Eve. Desperation, joy, angst, hatred, self-belief, reason. Eve couldn't wait to tell Adam.

Adam was taking care of a flower, which wasn't in a good state. Eve ran towards him, obviously in mood swings,
"Adam!" she said, before taking a deep breath, "eat this!" she continued, holding a piece of the fruit in front of his face,
"Sure, where did you get this from?" he asked, after eating it,
"The tree of Knowledge," she replied, a smirk on her face.

Adam couldn't believe this, he had unknowingly betrayed God. The utopia around him wouldn't be available to him anymore (new feeling: regret). He hated Eve for this (new feeling: hatred). Before a second word, he punched Eve in the face, sending her backwards into a tree. A trickle of blood came from her nose, this was the end for Adam.

The world around him started to fade away. The flowers, the animals, the rivers. What was left of it, was desert. With nothing to do now, he just wandered. He walked for days, and he became hungrier and hungrier and hungrier...

Jenna woke up, it was 7:00am. She was sweaty and shivering, she wanted to forget everything. But she couldn't. Her parents' names were Adam and Eve. His dad wore a rag around him, like a tunic. He had wandered for days before reaching a small village, where he had met his partner Eve once more. They apologized, but knew that they had no place in the Garden of Eden no more.

Jenna was their daughter, and she knew nothing about that. She lived with them, but never quite understood how they met, as they were in the middle of nowhere, in the middle of an empty, vast desert. At lunch, she told them about her dream. They said it was just a scary dream and all, but they hid their shock.

Jenna walked outside, onto the sand. Then, something moved in the bushes, an animal of some sort. Then, came out a snake. Jenna took a step back, but the animal didn't lunge forward,
"Please," it said, "I'm not venomous, and certainly not a carnivore. What? Never herd of a herbivore snake?"
"N-no, and I've never heard of a talking snake either," she mumbled, still a little scared,
"What humour, it always brings joy to my heart. But you know what else brings joy to my heart? Knowledge. I love it,"
"Yeah, but you can't eat knowledge, you have to earn it,"
"But I know where you can eat knowledge,"
"Where?"
"I'll show you, it's only a few minutes away," and so, the two walked out of the village, and into the desert.

True to the snake's word, it was only a few minutes away. Just so I can explain, Adam was walking in circles. Anyway, a few minutes after, a huge garden, full of grass and trees and animals came before them,
"Well? Should we look inside?" the snake slyly said, looking at Jenna,
"Just a quick peek, my parents may have wondered where I am," she replied, and so they entered what is, the Garden of Eden.

In the midst of the garden, there was a huge tree with apple-like fruit,
"Go ahead, try some," the snake said, looking at Jenna again with his infamous death-stare.

She took a bite. She felt happy, but sad. She felt nervous, but curious. These moods overwhelmed the poor girl, and darkness enveloped her.

She woke up, in cleaner rags, and in some clear tube, which was significantly taller than she was and a little wider than her,
"She's stable," a man in white said,
"Good Professor Hindenburg," said the other, "Project ADAM is completed. We have reconstructed existing DNA and used it to recreate a person, memories and all,"
"Yes, what shall we call the existing subject..."
"I'm Jenna!" she interrupted, banging on the tube,
"The subject seems to be banging the tube structure, be sure she doesn't break it. Professor,"
"Yes sir. Let's put cave-girl back to sleep now,"

She felt drowsy, and watched her eyes put her to sleep.

To be continued (once more).

Please, God doesn't like this. I know he doesn't. Just delete this post. Please? Pleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee?


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#114 2012-06-17 19:39:26

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banana500 wrote:

I usually hate posting others' work, but here it is: the original Jeff the Killer pasta. Enjoy; I mostly censored it. (Mods, if I missed something, don't put the banhammer on me pwease.)

Excerpt from a local Newspaper:

OMINOUS UNKNOWN KILLER IS STILL AT LARGE.

After weeks of unexplained murders, the ominous unknown killer is still on the rise. After little evidence has been found, a young boy states that he survived one of the killer's attacks and bravely tells his story.

"I had a bad dream and I woke up in the middle of the night," says the boy, "I saw that for some reason the window was open, even though I remember it being closed before I went to bed. I got up and shut it once more. Afterwards, I simply crawled under my covers and tried to get back to sleep. That's when I had a strange feeling, like someone was watching me. I looked up, and nearly jumped out of my bed. There, in the little ray of light, illuminating from between my curtains, were a pair of two eyes. These weren't regular eyes; they were dark, ominous eyes. They were bordered in black and... just plain out terrified me. That's when I saw his mouth. A long, horrendous smile that made every hair on my body stand up. The figure stood there, watching me. Finally, after what seemed like forever, he said it. A simple phrase, but said in a way only a mad man could speak.

"He said, 'Go To Sleep.' I let out a scream, that's what sent him at me. He pulled up a knife; aiming at my heart. He jumped on top of my bed. I fought him back; I kicked, I punched, I rolled around, trying to knock him off me. That's when my dad busted in. The man threw the knife, it went into my dad's shoulder. The man probably would've finished him off, if one of the neighbors hadn't alerted the police.

"They drove into the parking lot, and ran towards the door. The man turned and ran down the hallway. I heard a smash, like glass breaking. As I came out of my room, I saw the window that was pointing towards the back of my house was broken. I looked out it to see him vanish into the distance. I can tell you one thing, I will never forget that face. Those cold, evil eyes, and that psychotic smile. They will never leave my head."

Police are still on the look for this man. If you see anyone that fits the description in this story, please contact your local police department.


Jeff and his family had just moved into a new neighborhood. His dad had gotten a promotion at work, and they thought it would be best to live in one of those "fancy" neighborhoods. Jeff and his brother Liu couldn't complain though. A new, better house. What was not to love? As they were getting unpacked, one of their neighbors came by.

"Hello," she said, "I'm Barbara; I live across the street from you. Well, I just wanted to introduce my self and to introduce my son." She turns around and calls her son over. "Billy, these are our new neighbors." Billy said hi and ran back to play in his yard.

"Well," said Jeff's mom, "I'm Margaret, and this is my husband Peter, and my two sons, Jeff and Liu." They each introduced themselves, and then Barbara invited them to her son's birthday. Jeff and his brother were about to object, when their mother said that they would love to. When Jeff and his family are done packing, Jeff went up to his mom.

"Mom, why would you invite us to some kid's party? If you haven't noticed, I'm not some dumb kid."

"Jeff," said his mother, "We just moved here; we should show that we want to spend time with our neighbors. Now, we're going to that party, and that's final." Jeff started to talk, but stopped himself, knowing that he couldn't do anything. Whenever his mom said something, it was final. He walked up to his room and plopped down on his bed. He sat there looking at his ceiling when suddenly, he got a weird feeling. Not so much a pain, but... a weird feeling. He dismissed it as just some random feeling. He heard his mother call him down to get his stuff, and he walked down to get it.

The next day, Jeff walked down stairs to get breakfast and got ready for school. As he sat there, eating his breakfast, he once again got that feeling. This time it was stronger. It gave him a slight tugging pain, but he once again dismissed it. As he and Liu finished breakfast, they walked down to the bus stop. They sat there waiting for the bus, and then, all of a sudden, some kid on a skateboard jumped over them, only inches above their laps. They both jumped back in surprise. "Hey, what the hell?"

The kid landed and turned back to them. He kicked his skate board up and caught it with his hands. The kid seems to be about twelve; one year younger than Jeff. He wears a Aeropostale shirt and ripped blue jeans.

"Well, well, well. It looks like we got some new meat." Suddenly, two other kids appeared. One was super skinny and the other was huge. "Well, since you're new here, I'd like to introduce ourselves, over there is Keith." Jeff and Liu looked over to the skinny kid. He had a dopey face that you would expect a sidekick to have. "And he's Troy." They looked over at the fat kid. Talk about a tub of lard. This kid looked like he hadn't exercised since he was crawling.

"And I," said the first kid, "am Randy. Now, for all the kids in this neighborhood there is a small price for bus fare, if you catch my drift." Liu stood up, ready to punch the lights out of the kid's eyes when one of his friends pulled a knife on him. "Tsk, tsk, tsk, I had hoped you would be more cooperative, but it seems we must do this the hard way." The kid walked up to Liu and took his wallet out of his pocket. Jeff got that feeling again. Now, it was truly strong; a burning sensation. He stood up, but Liu gestured him to sit down. Jeff ignored him and walked up to the kid.

"Listen here you little punk, give back my bro's wallet or else." Randy put the wallet in his pocket and pulled out his own knife.

"Oh? And what will you do?" Just as he finished the sentence, Jeff popped the kid in the nose. As Randy reached for his face, Jeff grabbed the kid's wrist and broke it. Randy screamed and Jeff grabbed the knife from his hand. Troy and Keith rushed Jeff, but Jeff was too quick. He threw Randy to the ground. Keith lashed out at him, but Jeff ducked and stabbed him in the arm. Keith dropped his knife and fell to the ground screaming. Troy rushd him too, but Jeff didn't even need the knife. He just punched Troy straight in the stomach and Troy went down. As he fell, he puked all over. Liu could do nothing but look in amazement at Jeff.

"Jeff how'd you?" that was all he said. They saw the bus coming and knew they'd be blamed for the whole thing. So they started running as fast as they could. As they ran, they looked back and saw the bus driver rushing over to Randy and the others. As Jeff and Liu made it to school, they didn't dare tell what happened. All they did was sit and listen. Liu just thought of that as his brother beating up a few kids, but Jeff knew it was more. It was something, scary. As he got that feeling he felt how powerful it was, the urge to just, hurt someone. He didn't like how it sounded, but he couldn't help feeling happy. He felt that strange feeling go away, and stay away for the entire day of school. Even as he walked home due to the whole thing near the bus stop, and how now he probably wouldn't be taking the bus anymore, he felt happy. When he got home his parents asked him how his day was, and he said, in a somewhat ominous voice, "It was a wonderful day." Next morning, he heard a knock at his front door. He walked down to find two police officers at the door, his mother looking back at him with an angry look.

"Jeff, these officers tell me that you attacked three kids. That it wasn't regular fighting, and that they were stabbed. Stabbed, son!" Jeff's gaze fell to the floor, showing his mother that it was true.

"Mom, they were the ones who pulled the knives on me and Liu."

"Son," said one of the cops," We found three kids, two stabbed, one having a bruise on his stomach, and we have witnesses proving that you fled the scene. Now, what does that tell us?" Jeff knew it was no use. He could say him and Liu had been attacked, but then there was no proof it was not them who attacked first. They couldn't say that they weren't fleeing, because truth be told they were. So Jeff couldn't defend himself or Liu.

"Son, call down your brother." Jeff couldn't do it, since it was him who beat up all the kids.

"Sir, it...it was me. I was the one who beat up the kids. Liu tried to hold me back, but he couldn't stop me." The cop looked at his partner and they both nod.

"Well kid, looks like a year in Juvy..."

"Wait!" says Liu. They all looked up to see him holding a knife. The officers pulled their guns and locked them on Liu.

"It was me, I beat up those little punks. Have the marks to prove it." He lifted up his sleeves to reveal cuts and bruises, as if he was in a struggle.

"Son, just put the knife down," said the officer. Liu held up the knife and dropped it to the ground. He put his hands up and walked over to the cops.

"No Liu, it was me! I did it!" Jeff had tears running down his face.

"Huh, poor bro. Trying to take the blame for what I did. Well, take me away." The police led Liu out to the patrol car.

"Liu, tell them it was me! Tell them! I was the one who beat up those kids!" Jeff's mother put her hands on his shoulders.

"Jeff please, you don't have to lie. We know it's Liu, you can stop." Jeff watched helplessly as the cop car speeds off with Liu inside. A few minutes later Jeff's dad pulled into the driveway, seeing Jeff's face and knowing something was wrong.

"Son, son what is it?" Jeff couldn't answer. His vocal cords were strained from crying. Instead, Jeff's mother walked his father inside to break the bad news to him as Jeff wept in the driveway. After an hour or so Jeff walked back in to the house, seeing that his parents were both shocked, sad, and disappointed. He couldn't look at them. He couldn't see how they thought of Liu when it was his fault. He just went to sleep, trying to get the whole thing off his mind. Two days went by, with no word from Liu at JDC. No friends to hang out with. Nothing but sadness and guilt. That is until Saturday, when Jeff is woke up by his mother, with a happy, sunshiny face.

"Jeff, it's the day." she said as she opened up the curtains and let light flood into his room.

"What, what's today?" asked Jeff as he stirs awake.

"Why, it's Billy's party." He was now fully awake.

"Mom, you're joking, right? You don't expect me to go to some kid's party after..." There was a long pause.

"Jeff, we both know what happened. I think this party could be the thing that brightens up the past days. Now, get dressed." Jeff's mother walked out of the room and downstairs to get ready herself. He fought himself to get up. He picked out a random shirt and pair of jeans and walked down stairs. He saw his mother and father all dressed up; his mother in a dress and his father in a suit. He thought, why they would ever wear such fancy clothes to a kid's party?

"Son, is that all your going to wear?" said Jeff's mom.

"Better than wearing too much." he said. His mother pushed down the feeling to yell at him and hid it with a smile.

"Now Jeff, we may be over-dressed, but this is how you go if you want to make an impression." said his father. Jeff grunted and went back up to his room.

"I don't have any fancy clothes!" he yelled down stairs.

"Just pick out something." called his mother. He looked around in his closet for what he would call fancy. He found a pair of black dress pants he had for special occasions and an undershirt. He couldn't find a shirt to go with it though. He looked around, and found only striped and patterned shirts. None of which go with dress pants. Finally he found a white hoodie and put it on.

"You're wearing that?" they both said. His mother looked at her watch. "Oh, no time to change. Let's just go." She said as she herded Jeff and his father out the door. They crossed the street over to Barbara and Billy's house. They knocked on the door and at it appeared that Barbara, just like his parents, way over-dressed. As they walked inside all Jeff could see were adults, no kids.

"The kids are out in the yard. Jeff, how about you go and meet some of them?" said Barbara.

Jeff walked outside to a yard full of kids. They were running around in weird cowboy costumes and shooting each other with plastic guns. He might as well be standing in a Toys R Us. Suddenly a kid came up to him and handed him a toy gun and hat.

"Hey. Wanna pway?" he said.

"Ah, no kid. I'm way too old for this stuff." The kid looked at him with that weird puppydog face.

"Pwease?" said the kid. "Fine," said Jeff. He put on the hat and started to pretend shoot at the kids. At first he thought it was totally ridiculous, but then he started to actually have fun. It might not have been super cool, but it was the first time he had done something that took his mind off of Liu. So he played with the kids for a while, until he heard a noise. A weird rolling noise. Then it hit him. Randy, Troy, and Keith all jumped over the fence on their skateboards. Jeff dropped the fake gun and ripped off the hat. Randy looked at Jeff with a burning hatred.

"Hello, Jeff, is it?" he said. "We have some unfinished business." Jeff saw his bruised nose." I think we're even. I beat the **** out of you, and you get my brother sent to JDC."

Randy got an angry look in his eyes. "Oh no, I don't go for even, I go for winning. You may have kicked our ***es that one day, but not today." As he said that Randy rushed at Jeff. They both fell to the ground. Randy punched Jeff in the nose, and Jeff grabbed him by the ears and head butted him. Jeff pushed Randy off of him and both rose to their feet. Kids were screaming and parents were running out of the house. Troy and Keith both pulled guns out of their pockets.

"No one interrupts or guts will fly!" they said. Randy pulled a knife on Jeff and stabbed it into his shoulder.

Jeff screamed and fell to his knees. Randy started kicking him in the face. After three kicks Jeff grabs his foot and twists it, causing Randy to fall to the ground. Jeff stood up and walked towards the back door. Troy grabbed him.

"Need some help?" He picks Jeff up by the back of the collar and throws him through the patio door. As Jeff tries to stand he is kicked down to the ground. Randy repeatedly starts kicking Jeff, until he starts to cough up blood.

"Come on Jeff, fight me!" He picks Jeff up and throws him into the kitchen. Randy sees a bottle of vodka on the counter and smashes the glass over Jeff's head.

"Fight!" He throws Jeff back into the living room.

"Come on Jeff, look at me!" Jeff glances up, his face riddled with blood. "I was the one who got your brother sent to JDC! And now you're just gonna sit here and let him rot in there for a whole year! You should be ashamed!" Jeff starts to get up.

"Oh, finally! you stand and fight!" Jeff is now to his feet, blood and vodka on his face. Once again he gets that strange feeling, the one in which he hasn't felt for a while. "Finally. He's up!" says Randy as he runs at Jeff. That's when it happens. Something inside Jeff snaps. His psyche is destroyed, all rational thinking is gone, all he can do, is kill. He grabs Randy and pile drives him to the ground. He gets on top of him and punches him straight in the heart. The punch causes Randy's heart to stop. As Randy gasps for breath. Jeff hammers down on him. Punch after punch, blood gushes from Randy's body, until he takes one final breath, and dies.

Everyone is looking at Jeff now. The parents, the crying kids, even Troy and Keith. Although they easily break from their gaze and point their guns at Jeff. Jeff see's the guns trained on him and runs for the stairs. As he runs Troy and Keith let out fire on him, each shot missing. Jeff runs up the stairs. He hears Troy and Keith follow up behind. As they let out their final rounds of bullets Jeff ducks into the bathroom. He grabs the towel rack and rips it off the wall. Troy and Keith race in, knives ready.

Troy swings his knife at Jeff, who backs away and bangs the towel rack into Troy's face. Troy goes down hard and now all that's left is Keith. He is more agile than Troy though, and ducks when Jeff swings the towel rack. He dropped the knife and grabbed Jeff by the neck. He pushed him into the wall. A thing of bleach fell down on top of him from the top shelf. It burnt both of them and they both started to scream. Jeff wiped his eyes as best as he could. He pulled back the towel rack and swung it straight into Keith's head. As he lay there, bleeding to death, he let out an ominous smile.

"What's so funny?" asked Jeff. Keith pulled out a lighter and switched it on. "What's funny," he said, "Is that you're covered in bleach and alcohol." Jeff's eyes widened as Keith threw the lighter at him. As soon as the flame made contact with him, the flames ignited the alcohol in the vodka. While the alcohol burned him, the bleach bleached his skin. Jeff let out a terrible screech as he caught on fire. He tried to roll out the fire but it was no use, the alcohol had made him a walking inferno. He ran down the hall, and fell down the stairs. Everybody started screaming as they saw Jeff, now a man on fire, drop to the ground, nearly dead. The last thing Jeff saw was his mother and the other parents trying to extinguish the flame. That's when he passed out.

When Jeff woke he had a cast wrapped around his face. He couldn't see anything, but he felt a cast on his shoulder, and stitches all over his body. He tried to stand up, but he realized that there was some tube in his arm, and when he tried to get up it fell out, and a nurse rushed in.

"I don't think you can get out of bed just yet." she said as she put him back in his bed and re-inserted the tube. Jeff sat there, with no vision, no idea of what his surroundings were. Finally, after hours, he heard his mother.

"Honey, are you okay?" she asked. Jeff couldn't answer though, his face was covered, and he was unable to speak. "Oh honey, I have great news. After all the witnesses told the police that Randy confessed of trying to attack you, they decided to let Liu go." This made Jeff almost bolt up, stopping halfway, remembering the tube coming out of his arm. "He'll be out by tomorrow, and then you two will be able to be together again."

Jeff's mother hugs Jeff and says her goodbyes. The next couple of weeks were those where Jeff was visited by his family. Then came the day where his bandages were to be removed. His family were all there to see it, what he would look like. As the doctors unwrapped the bandages from Jeff's face everyone was on the edge of their seats. They waited until the last bandage holding the cover over his face was almost removed.

"Let's hope for the best," said the doctor. He quickly pulls the cloth; letting the rest fall from Jeff's face.

Jeff's mother screams at the sight of his face. Liu and Jeff's dad stare awe-struck at his face.

"What? What happened to my face?" Jeff said. He rushed out of bed and ran to the bathroom. He looked in the mirror and saw the cause of the distress. His face. It...it's horrible. His lips were burnt to a deep shade of red. His face was turned into a pure white color, and his hair singed from brown to black. He slowly put his hand to his face. It had a sort of leathery feel to it now. He looked back at his family then back at the mirror.

"Jeff," said Liu, "It's not that bad...."

"Not that bad?" said Jeff," It's perfect!" His family were equally surprised. Jeff started laughing uncontrollably His parents noticed that his left eye and hand were twitching.

"Uh... Jeff, are you okay?"

"Okay? I've never felt more happy! Ha ha ha ha ha haaaaaa, look at me. This face goes perfectly with me!" He couldn't stop laughing. He stroked his face feeling it. Looking at it in the mirror. What caused this? Well, you may recall that when Jeff was fighting Randy something in his mind, his sanity, snapped. Now he was left as a crazy killing machine, that is, his parents didn't know.

"Doctor," said Jeff's mom, "Is my son... alright, you know. In the head?"

"Oh yes, this behavior is typical for patients that have taken very large amounts of pain killers. If his behavior doesn't change in a few weeks, bring him back here, and we'll give him a psychological test."

"Oh thank you doctor." Jeff's mother went over to Jeff." Jeff, sweety. It's time to go."

Jeff looks away from the mirror, his face still formed into a crazy smile. "Kay mommy, ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa!" his mother took him by the shoulder and took him to get his clothes.

"This is what came in," said the lady at the desk. Jeff's mom looked down to see the black dress pants and white hoodie her son wore. Now they were clean of blood and now stitched together. Jeff's mother led him to his room and made him put his clothes on. Then they left, not knowing that this was their final day of life.

Later that night, Jeff's mother woke to a sound coming from the bathroom. It sounded as if someone was crying. She slowly walked over to see what it was. When she looked into the bathroom she saw a horrendous sight. Jeff had taken a knife and carved a smile into his cheeks.

"Jeff, what are you doing?" asked his mother.

Jeff looked over to his mother. "I couldn't keep smiling mommy. It hurt after awhile. Now, I can smile forever. Jeff's mother noticed his eyes, ringed in black.

"Jeff, your eyes!" His eyes were seemingly never closing.

"I couldn't see my face. I got tired and my eyes started to close. I burned out the eyelids so I could forever see myself; my new face." Jeff's mother slowly started to back away, seeing that her son was going insane. "What's wrong mommy? Aren't I beautiful?

"Yes son," she said, "Yes you are. L-let me go get daddy, so he can see your face." She ran into the room and shook Jeff's dad from his sleep. "Honey, get the gun we....." She stopped as she saw Jeff in the doorway, holding a knife.

"Mommy, you lied." That's the last thing they hear as Jeff rushes them with the knife, gutting both of them.

His brother Liu woke up, startled by some noise. He didn't hear anything else, so he just shut his eyes and tried to go back to sleep. As he was on the border of slumber, he got the strangest feeling that someone was watching him. He looked up, before Jeff's hand covered his mouth. He slowly raised the knife ready to plunge it into Liu. Liu thrashed here and there trying to escape Jeff's grip.

"Shhhhhhh," Jeff said,"Just go to sleep."
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And...there you have it.  smile

Yup. My least favorite Creepypasta is here. I think I have to report this... this is NOT for all ages.


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#115 2012-06-17 19:42:12

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

mythbusteranimator wrote:

wolvesstar97 wrote:

agscratcher wrote:


Try looking at KnowYourMeme's Jeff the Killer page.

Jeff isnt scary.

Hahaha, your  quote is Far Side! I love that.

Far Side=:3

(That;s the first time I ever used that smiley.)

I LOVEEEE TEH FAR SIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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#116 2012-06-17 19:45:50

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Garr8 wrote:

nama wrote:

GLaDOS2 wrote:

I managed to scare the living daylights out of a Loki on Tumblr with the GO TO SLEEP lady.

I think they're mad at me ._.

Jeff the Killer isn't a lady

It's Jeff's wife

OH MY GOSH!!!!! How-who-AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *breath* HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*breath*HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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#117 2012-06-17 19:53:36

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Death, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

Jenna woke up with cold sweat tickling her face, this nightmare was different form when his boyfriend would dump him. This one was actually scary. She had no idea about what this dream was about, but it was terrifying. Was it a sign of things to come? Was it a vision from thousands of years ago? (The nudity was a big clue.) She tried to clear her mind as she fell asleep once more, hoping it would come to an end.

But it didn't. It carried on.

Every bite of the apple gave a new feeling to Eve. Desperation, joy, angst, hatred, self-belief, reason. Eve couldn't wait to tell Adam.

Adam was taking care of a flower, which wasn't in a good state. Eve ran towards him, obviously in mood swings,
"Adam!" she said, before taking a deep breath, "eat this!" she continued, holding a piece of the fruit in front of his face,
"Sure, where did you get this from?" he asked, after eating it,
"The tree of Knowledge," she replied, a smirk on her face.

Adam couldn't believe this, he had unknowingly betrayed God. The utopia around him wouldn't be available to him anymore (new feeling: regret). He hated Eve for this (new feeling: hatred). Before a second word, he punched Eve in the face, sending her backwards into a tree. A trickle of blood came from her nose, this was the end for Adam.

The world around him started to fade away. The flowers, the animals, the rivers. What was left of it, was desert. With nothing to do now, he just wandered. He walked for days, and he became hungrier and hungrier and hungrier...

Jenna woke up, it was 7:00am. She was sweaty and shivering, she wanted to forget everything. But she couldn't. Her parents' names were Adam and Eve. His dad wore a rag around him, like a tunic. He had wandered for days before reaching a small village, where he had met his partner Eve once more. They apologized, but knew that they had no place in the Garden of Eden no more.

Jenna was their daughter, and she knew nothing about that. She lived with them, but never quite understood how they met, as they were in the middle of nowhere, in the middle of an empty, vast desert. At lunch, she told them about her dream. They said it was just a scary dream and all, but they hid their shock.

Jenna walked outside, onto the sand. Then, something moved in the bushes, an animal of some sort. Then, came out a snake. Jenna took a step back, but the animal didn't lunge forward,
"Please," it said, "I'm not venomous, and certainly not a carnivore. What? Never herd of a herbivore snake?"
"N-no, and I've never heard of a talking snake either," she mumbled, still a little scared,
"What humour, it always brings joy to my heart. But you know what else brings joy to my heart? Knowledge. I love it,"
"Yeah, but you can't eat knowledge, you have to earn it,"
"But I know where you can eat knowledge,"
"Where?"
"I'll show you, it's only a few minutes away," and so, the two walked out of the village, and into the desert.

True to the snake's word, it was only a few minutes away. Just so I can explain, Adam was walking in circles. Anyway, a few minutes after, a huge garden, full of grass and trees and animals came before them,
"Well? Should we look inside?" the snake slyly said, looking at Jenna,
"Just a quick peek, my parents may have wondered where I am," she replied, and so they entered what is, the Garden of Eden.

In the midst of the garden, there was a huge tree with apple-like fruit,
"Go ahead, try some," the snake said, looking at Jenna again with his infamous death-stare.

She took a bite. She felt happy, but sad. She felt nervous, but curious. These moods overwhelmed the poor girl, and darkness enveloped her.

She woke up, in cleaner rags, and in some clear tube, which was significantly taller than she was and a little wider than her,
"She's stable," a man in white said,
"Good Professor Hindenburg," said the other, "Project ADAM is completed. We have reconstructed existing DNA and used it to recreate a person, memories and all,"
"Yes, what shall we call the existing subject..."
"I'm Jenna!" she interrupted, banging on the tube,
"The subject seems to be banging the tube structure, be sure she doesn't break it. Professor,"
"Yes sir. Let's put cave-girl back to sleep now,"

She felt drowsy, and watched her eyes put her to sleep.

To be continued (once more).

Please, God doesn't like this. I know he doesn't. Just delete this post. Please? Pleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee?

thats really disrespectful :/
but still, it doesnt go in this thread unless he didnt make t

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#118 2012-06-17 19:54:23

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Is their an original "SLENDERMAN" creepypasta? Can someone post a SLENDERMAN pasta, anyway, even if they're not... really pasta?


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#119 2012-06-17 19:55:49

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

777w wrote:

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

NeilWest wrote:

Let's get some creppypasta on here before samid finds out about this thread!

Children of Adam

The world began with the first two humans, a man named Adam and a woman named Eve. They knew that their love was special, for they realized that a new sensation came over them: satisfaction. This new feeling put their minds on more than the garden, but what the garden held. This, was mainly the couple.

But, this garden wasn't fully at peace, Satan had created Death, which took the form of a snake. This snake's plan was to seperate the couple, and he knew that only God could do that, so he had to force God to seperate the couple, so that Spite (the snake) could satisy his master, who wasn't at ease with the world.

On a day, where the sun was shining and a breeze flowed through the trees, Eve sat down under the shade of a tree, which beared the fruit of Knowledge.
"Delicous fruit, want some?" the snake hissed, gently nibbling on the fruit,
"No, I was ordered not to eat that fruit," Eve replied, turning away from the snake,
"Fine, I'll force this [redacted] down your mouth!" the snake hissed, grabbing the apple around his tail and pushing it into Eve's mouth, before allowing her to chew.

Jenna woke up with cold sweat tickling her face, this nightmare was different form when his boyfriend would dump him. This one was actually scary. She had no idea about what this dream was about, but it was terrifying. Was it a sign of things to come? Was it a vision from thousands of years ago? (The nudity was a big clue.) She tried to clear her mind as she fell asleep once more, hoping it would come to an end.

But it didn't. It carried on.

Every bite of the apple gave a new feeling to Eve. Desperation, joy, angst, hatred, self-belief, reason. Eve couldn't wait to tell Adam.

Adam was taking care of a flower, which wasn't in a good state. Eve ran towards him, obviously in mood swings,
"Adam!" she said, before taking a deep breath, "eat this!" she continued, holding a piece of the fruit in front of his face,
"Sure, where did you get this from?" he asked, after eating it,
"The tree of Knowledge," she replied, a smirk on her face.

Adam couldn't believe this, he had unknowingly betrayed God. The utopia around him wouldn't be available to him anymore (new feeling: regret). He hated Eve for this (new feeling: hatred). Before a second word, he punched Eve in the face, sending her backwards into a tree. A trickle of blood came from her nose, this was the end for Adam.

The world around him started to fade away. The flowers, the animals, the rivers. What was left of it, was desert. With nothing to do now, he just wandered. He walked for days, and he became hungrier and hungrier and hungrier...

Jenna woke up, it was 7:00am. She was sweaty and shivering, she wanted to forget everything. But she couldn't. Her parents' names were Adam and Eve. His dad wore a rag around him, like a tunic. He had wandered for days before reaching a small village, where he had met his partner Eve once more. They apologized, but knew that they had no place in the Garden of Eden no more.

Jenna was their daughter, and she knew nothing about that. She lived with them, but never quite understood how they met, as they were in the middle of nowhere, in the middle of an empty, vast desert. At lunch, she told them about her dream. They said it was just a scary dream and all, but they hid their shock.

Jenna walked outside, onto the sand. Then, something moved in the bushes, an animal of some sort. Then, came out a snake. Jenna took a step back, but the animal didn't lunge forward,
"Please," it said, "I'm not venomous, and certainly not a carnivore. What? Never herd of a herbivore snake?"
"N-no, and I've never heard of a talking snake either," she mumbled, still a little scared,
"What humour, it always brings joy to my heart. But you know what else brings joy to my heart? Knowledge. I love it,"
"Yeah, but you can't eat knowledge, you have to earn it,"
"But I know where you can eat knowledge,"
"Where?"
"I'll show you, it's only a few minutes away," and so, the two walked out of the village, and into the desert.

True to the snake's word, it was only a few minutes away. Just so I can explain, Adam was walking in circles. Anyway, a few minutes after, a huge garden, full of grass and trees and animals came before them,
"Well? Should we look inside?" the snake slyly said, looking at Jenna,
"Just a quick peek, my parents may have wondered where I am," she replied, and so they entered what is, the Garden of Eden.

In the midst of the garden, there was a huge tree with apple-like fruit,
"Go ahead, try some," the snake said, looking at Jenna again with his infamous death-stare.

She took a bite. She felt happy, but sad. She felt nervous, but curious. These moods overwhelmed the poor girl, and darkness enveloped her.

She woke up, in cleaner rags, and in some clear tube, which was significantly taller than she was and a little wider than her,
"She's stable," a man in white said,
"Good Professor Hindenburg," said the other, "Project ADAM is completed. We have reconstructed existing DNA and used it to recreate a person, memories and all,"
"Yes, what shall we call the existing subject..."
"I'm Jenna!" she interrupted, banging on the tube,
"The subject seems to be banging the tube structure, be sure she doesn't break it. Professor,"
"Yes sir. Let's put cave-girl back to sleep now,"

She felt drowsy, and watched her eyes put her to sleep.

To be continued (once more).

Please, God doesn't like this. I know he doesn't. Just delete this post. Please? Pleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee?

thats really disrespectful  hmm
but still, it doesnt go in this thread unless he didnt make t

I'm sorry, it's just... it's messing with the Bible. I just hope that someone doesn't make a pasta about "playing God" or I'm gonna need anger management. :S


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#120 2012-06-17 19:58:38

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

Is their an original "SLENDERMAN" creepypasta? Can someone post a SLENDERMAN pasta, anyway, even if they're not... really pasta?

slenderman was originally an entry for a scary picture contest consisting of two edited photos
here they are since theres no violence or gore or nothin
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#121 2012-06-17 20:00:21

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

777w wrote:

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

Please, God doesn't like this. I know he doesn't. Just delete this post. Please? Pleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee?

thats really disrespectful  hmm
but still, it doesnt go in this thread unless he didnt make t

I'm sorry, it's just... it's messing with the Bible. I just hope that someone doesn't make a pasta about "playing God" or I'm gonna need anger management. :S

if you dont like it dont read it, simple as that
and, again, if anybody makes a story it goes in my thread in making and creating

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#122 2012-06-18 05:28:43

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

nama wrote:

AvatarAang4 wrote:

A new creepypasta thread, huh? Somebody please repost the good non gory creepy pastas from the first few pages such as Jeff the Killer, The Theater, and Pokemon Dead Channel

I don't see how Pokemon Dead Channel can qualify as "non gory"...
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Operator9000 wrote:

when the creepypasta threaad is closed
Sarch for samid 11 until I do.
  Jump for joy! :)
end
think [Everything is awsome again] forever!!!

Until you do what?

UNTIL I FIND HIM! Duh.

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#123 2012-06-18 06:52:23

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

Operator9000 wrote:

nama wrote:

AvatarAang4 wrote:

A new creepypasta thread, huh? Somebody please repost the good non gory creepy pastas from the first few pages such as Jeff the Killer, The Theater, and Pokemon Dead Channel

I don't see how Pokemon Dead Channel can qualify as "non gory"...
EDIT:

Operator9000 wrote:

when the creepypasta threaad is closed
Sarch for samid 11 until I do.
  Jump for joy! :)
end
think [Everything is awsome again] forever!!!

Until you do what?

UNTIL I FIND HIM! Duh.

but samid is a she and was one of the so-called "drama queens" who got that thread closed

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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

NeilWest wrote:

[deleted it myself because I didn't know that it was disrespectful for some people]

Thank you, and sorry about my sore attitude.


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Re: New Creepypasta Thread!!!

weegeeissparta wrote:

Andres-Vander wrote:

The original Jeff the Killer is based on an actual serial killer (I won't link to it since it's a profiling of a serial killer, but you can find it easily yourself)

I hope that killer is DEAD or not in MY STATE. I don't want to see a guy without a nose stab me to death while I'm dreaming about candy.

The creator of that creepypasta is NOT taking killers seriously. O_O (I do that emoji too much)


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