Hey guys. I just made a new song. It's a present for my mother for Mother's Day.
Download to it here. Feedback is appreciated, both positive and negative. Please try to be nice though.
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I like it, but you need more instruments. Right now it sounds like a way too long intro
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It's alright, but I agree with Laternenpfahl. It also seems really off-tempo at times.
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Since you 'created' a song, I think this fits better in the Things I'm Making and Creating forum.
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Lucario621 wrote:
Since you 'created' a song, I think this fits better in the Things I'm Making and Creating forum.
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Thanks for moving.
Unfortunately, this means even LESS people will see this.
But for the two that did, thanks for the feedback. And I would have to agree, that some parts do feel off-tempo. I'll try to improve that when making music in the future.
BTW, this was made in a great iPhone app called MusicStudio. It's a great app. It costs $15, which may seem pricey, until you consider a similar thing would cost at least $75 on a PC.
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sanddude wrote:
Lucario621 wrote:
Since you 'created' a song, I think this fits better in the Things I'm Making and Creating forum.
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Thanks for moving.
Unfortunately, this means even LESS people will see this.
But for the two that did, thanks for the feedback. And I would have to agree, that some parts do feel off-tempo. I'll try to improve that when making music in the future.
BTW, this was made in a great iPhone app called MusicStudio. It's a great app. It costs $15, which may seem pricey, until you consider a similar thing would cost at least $75 on a PC.
Or you could just use free alternatives
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veggieman001 wrote:
sanddude wrote:
Lucario621 wrote:
Since you 'created' a song, I think this fits better in the Things I'm Making and Creating forum.
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Thanks for moving.
Unfortunately, this means even LESS people will see this.
But for the two that did, thanks for the feedback. And I would have to agree, that some parts do feel off-tempo. I'll try to improve that when making music in the future.
BTW, this was made in a great iPhone app called MusicStudio. It's a great app. It costs $15, which may seem pricey, until you consider a similar thing would cost at least $75 on a PC.Or you could just use free alternatives
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I know of free programs that edit music, but none that actually make it.
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sanddude wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
sanddude wrote:
Thanks for moving.
Unfortunately, this means even LESS people will see this.
But for the two that did, thanks for the feedback. And I would have to agree, that some parts do feel off-tempo. I'll try to improve that when making music in the future.
BTW, this was made in a great iPhone app called MusicStudio. It's a great app. It costs $15, which may seem pricey, until you consider a similar thing would cost at least $75 on a PC.Or you could just use free alternatives
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I know of free programs that edit music, but none that actually make it.
LMMS comes to mind.
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I like it - very majestic at times. I also agree with the previous reviewers that it sounds a bit spare and could use some more instruments with some different parts to fill it out. Keep at it though, it has promise.
I'll have to check out Music Studio - how do you think it compares to GarageBand?
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Paddle2See wrote:
I like it - very majestic at times. I also agree with the previous reviewers that it sounds a bit spare and could use some more instruments with some different parts to fill it out. Keep at it though, it has promise.
I'll have to check out Music Studio - how do you think it compares to GarageBand?
It's quite similar. It has a selection of instruments (a very wide one too) and a keyboard that you can play/record them with.
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