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777w wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

I'm done with my FlutterJeff creepypasta series.

aww shucks
i was hoping to see somebody get revenge for somebody else in an epic battle to the death

I was gonna make Rainbow Dash and Applejack team up and kill Fluttershy but then I decided that suicide would be better.

I fail at writing creepypasta, so maybe someone else can write this for me?

Person gets turned immortal

Maybe let 100 to 2000 years pass so that life becomes... just not supposed to happen for good reasons

Person believes that he can become mortal again by proving that he is still a human

Person decides that the biggest thing that humans have that character doesn't is sympathy

Person goes around killing for a very long time watching pain in order to feel sorrow for character's victims

(may be useful device to add some blemish or disfigurement with each murder)

Person notes with horror that sense of sympathy is fading from watching people die

Person decides that to remain sympathetic, character must go beyond killing: inflicting his own immortality

Person does so

Character screams 'WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!?!' or something along those lines

Open-ended 'and then someone else walked up to me'

Good or bad?

Sausagefanclub wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

777w wrote:

aww shucks
i was hoping to see somebody get revenge for somebody else in an epic battle to the death

I was gonna make Rainbow Dash and Applejack team up and kill Fluttershy but then I decided that suicide would be better.

Hey, how about you do that ending anyway and call it the Alternate Ending?

Yeah!

maxskywalker wrote:

I fail at writing creepypasta, so maybe someone else can write this for me?

Person gets turned immortal

Maybe let 100 to 2000 years pass so that life becomes... just not supposed to happen for good reasons

Person believes that he can become mortal again by proving that he is still a human

Person decides that the biggest thing that humans have that character doesn't is sympathy

Person goes around killing for a very long time watching pain in order to feel sorrow for character's victims

(may be useful device to add some blemish or disfigurement with each murder)

Person notes with horror that sense of sympathy is fading from watching people die

Person decides that to remain sympathetic, character must go beyond killing: inflicting his own immortality

Person does so

Character screams 'WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!?!' or something along those lines

Open-ended 'and then someone else walked up to me'

Good or bad?

samid11 wrote:

FunDude wrote:

Sausagefanclub wrote:

Hey, how about you do that ending anyway and call it the Alternate Ending?

Yeah!

NOT YEAH. I can't stand to see lil' flutter get killed.

What 777w said. If you can't remeber, than---
Jesus Christ bro people can write what they want
the forums don't revolve around you.
No offense.

Just got past the first murder in 'It'. Wow, it's very nicely written, though I don't like what I read about the bar.

(By the way, I mean Stephen King's 'It')

maxskywalker wrote:

maxskywalker wrote:

maxskywalker wrote:

I fail at writing creepypasta, so maybe someone else can write this for me?


Good or bad?

not very creepy in that weird outline form

maxskywalker wrote:

777w wrote:

maxskywalker wrote:

not very creepy in that weird outline form

I know I'm asking someone to write it!

oooh
but uh you said "good or bad"

maxskywalker wrote:

GLaDOS2 wrote:

Some people say the old owner of this place went mad.
He chopped all the robots into little pieces.
Then he died himself.
Some cores say he drowned in acid.
Some turrets say he chopped himself apart.
Some nanobots say he slit his throat.
The robots were rebuilt, completely indistinguishable from the originals.
You can still hear the screams of the originals.
Nobody knows what they're screaming about, though.
Still scary.

At first I was going 'what the...'  Then I looked at who wrote it.

isnt this like actually in the game

maxskywalker wrote:

I fail at writing creepypasta, so maybe someone else can write this for me?

Person gets turned immortal

Maybe let 100 to 2000 years pass so that life becomes... just not supposed to happen for good reasons

Person believes that he can become mortal again by proving that he is still a human

Person decides that the biggest thing that humans have that character doesn't is sympathy

Person goes around killing for a very long time watching pain in order to feel sorrow for character's victims

(may be useful device to add some blemish or disfigurement with each murder)

Person notes with horror that sense of sympathy is fading from watching people die

Person decides that to remain sympathetic, character must go beyond killing: inflicting his own immortality

Person does so

Character screams 'WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!?!' or something along those lines

Open-ended 'and then someone else walked up to me'

Good or bad?

Anyone wanna write this?

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Last edited by Paddle2See (2012-06-03 13:39:38)