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#1 2012-06-02 19:43:23

Lolkid332
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Fluttershy Collection

I've turned Fluttershy into a morbid cannibal that kills just to kill!

Story 1 : Feeding Time


The carrot hit Fluttershy in the face for the 48th time today. She sighed and set a carrot in front of Angel.
"Oh, please, um, Angel, just take a bite." Angel kicked the carrot away yet again while Fluttershy got it.
"Just two bites?" Angel refused.
"Just one?" The bunny refused.
"Just a tiny nibble? For me?" Fluttershy put on her pleading eyes, but Angel just walked away. Fluttershy flew to get her and set her on the floor again in front of the carrot. Angel spit on the carrot and kicked it away for the 50th time.
Fluttershy was losing patience. Her left eye and right wing were twitching as she walked over to get a different carrot and bring it back to the defiant bunny.
"Take... a... BITE." Angel noticed her change in attitude as she set the carrot down.
Angel stuck out her tongue and tried to hop away, but something grabbed her. IT WAS SLENDYFluttershy was standing behind her and picked her up.
"YOU WILL EAT THE CARROT!" She yelled at the bunny, causing all the other animals to peer out of their homes to check what was happening. Fluttershy flung Angel over to the couch, where she landed on her back, stunned by what just happened. Fluttershy grunted, got the carrot, and threw it at the couch. Angel dodged the carrot and gaped at Fluttershy, along with all the animals.
"EAT IT, ANGEL!"
Angel still was defiant. Fluttershy rushed her and everything went black.


   Angel woke up hanging from the ceiling upside-down.
Fluttershy was standing at the far corner of the room pacing. Her eyes were bloodshot and she was laughing manically. She noticed that Angel was awoke, and said in a creepy voice, "Will you eat the carrot NOW?"
Angel gulped and slowly shook her head no. Fluttershy came over and slapped the bunny. Angel shrieked in terror as Fluttershy let out a laugh in only a way that an insane unstable mental hospital escapee could speak in. It it also sounded strained and sad. It sounded like she was being forced.
Fluttershy trotted over to a table Angel had never seen and pulled out a knife and walked over to Angel. Fluttershy carefully aimed the knife at the tip of Angel's ears and slowly but surely cut through the ear. Angel moaned like only a bunny can moan and wiggled. Fluttershy ended up cutting her whole ear off too quickly.
"Now now, Angel, I want you to be fresh and last long, okay. And I don't want the ears to be uneven." She trotted over to a box and opened it. Angel could see bloody rabbit ears sticking out. Fluttershy grinned evilly and whispered, "They wouldn't be good for my collection."
Angel couldn't speak(duh, she's a bunny). Or move. She was terrified. She was paralyzed until Fluttershy came over and  carefully slowly sawed off her toes.
The pain coursed through her leg until she jerked her leg forward and hit her square in the nose. She yelled and flailed her arm and sliced Angel in the back of the head. Soon Angel could feel herself drifting off. Then she blacked out.

   She woke up with a shock. She could see her fur standing up on end. She coughed out something unidentified. Fluttershy was holding a bowl that was steaming hot. "Mmmmm, rabbit soup." She grabbed Angel off the rope and dunked her in the broth. The bunny had given up all hope of escape. She felt herself burning, burning, burning, until she was lifeless.

Hours later, Fluttershy was in the bathroom washing her face, admiring her deformed nose. She was grinning. But then she had a better idea to be able to smile longer. All she needed was a knife and a lighter.



Story 2 : Hiding in the Shadows

Fluttershy was waiting. In the shadows. She had seen the pony get up many times and get drinks. She was hiding behind the bookcase, which conveniently had a space behind it that she could hide behind. She smiled her sickening, stretched smile, staring right at the pony.

At exactly 12:00 PM, the pony was fast asleep. Fluttershy took the chance and grabbed the piggy bank off the desktop. She sorted through it until she found a total of 17 bits. She laid them on the ground and laughed quietly. She couldn't wake up her fresh meat for dinner tonight. She was already hungry.

Blossom woke up five minutes later. She had the strange feeling something was watching her. She got out of bed and saw a grin enveloped by darkness. Slowly a pair of white eyes with no pupils opened and stared at her. She tried to scream but nothing came out. Slowly, the pony formerly know as Fluttershy opened her mouth and said,

"Shhh."



Story 3 : Cats

It was 7:00 PM.
Fluttershy was watching Rarity's cat from the tree outside.
"Now, Opal, get up. I simply must use that sheet for my new dress, I must get it to Rainbow Dash by tonight." Fluttershy watched from the shadows as Rarity pulled the cat up and set her on the floor. Opal hissed and clawed at Rarity, slicing her hoof.
"Oh! Opal! Don't do that! Get in your cage!"
Fluttershy watched as Rarity dragged Opal and put her in a cage, sucking on her hoof.
Soon enough, Fluttershy had fallen asleep.


Fluttershy woke with a start. It was nighttime. She was still in the tree, and a bird was chirping at her. She took no chance and no hesitation and stabbed the bird and watched it fall to the ground, dead. She got down from the tree and approached the house slowly. She crawled in the window and approached Opal's cage. She stole the cat away and put a hoof over its mouth, carefully cutting off parts of the cat's body and eating it. She just chewed on the bones. After a while, she saw that the cat was completely dead and there was no more meat. She tossed it to the side and approached Rarity's bedroom.

She wasted no time and stabbed Rarity in the forehead, pulling out the knife, and feasting on her.

Story 4 : No more Cupcakes


FlutterJeff was watching Pinkie Pie for hours now.
Pinkie Pie was playing a board game when she suddenly said, "I see you, Flutty!"
Fluttershy jumped back in surprise, rushing Pinkie and stabbing her in the hoof, hoping to kill her and eat her quickly. Pinkie widened her eyes in surprise and hit Fluttershy with the board game she was playing. Fluttershy felt no pain at all. She had no emotions. She had lost them all when killing Rarity. Pain, sadness, shyness, any kind of emotion was no part of her.

Fluttershy then stabbed Pinkie Pie in the stomach and hit her in the face. Pinkie pie stumbled backwards into a bookcase which stumbled over on her, almost killing her. Fluttershy rushed over. She would have some fun with this pony. She carefully clipped the end of her hooves off and removed her tongue so she couldn't scream. She then ripped all her hair off and threw it out the window, then cut off part of her face to eat.

Dinner would be wonderful.

Story 5 : Reading is Dangerous
Twilight was flipping through the pages of a Daring Do book. Her mind was completely focused on the book, and nothing else, such as Fluttershy looking through the window, holding a bloody knife and licking her lips. Twilight read the book for approximately an hour and 32 seconds before she shut it. and went to bed. Fluttershy was so hungry she had tried licking the blood off her knife. Unfortunately she had only succeeded in giving herself a cut on her tongue, which she could then taste blood. It was sort of successful.

Fluttershy couldn't wait any longer. She climbed down the chimney and went into Twilight's bedroom. She stopped and stared at the defenseless unicorn. She started to think of ways that she could get some more fun than usual out of killing Twilight Sparkle. Then she had the perfect plan. She pushed Twilight out of bed, and she hit the floor with a thud on her head, breaking her horn in half. Fluttershy then whispered, "Hi, Twilight." and stabbed her in the hoof, putting her hand over her mouth.
"I'm working on my grin. Like it?" Fluttershy showed her blood-red teeth in a smile that stretched all the way around her mouth.
"Fluttershy..." Twilight was groping her hoof where Fluttershy had stabbed her, sobbing lightly.
"My name... is not... Fluttershy." Fluttershy tried to stab her, but Twilight somehow stopped her.


"Please... Fluttershy." Fluttershy was stunned. What would happen if she joined her friends? They obviously wouldn't forgive her for killing Rarity and Opal. Would she kill Twilight now and have no hatred put upon her? Or could she spare Twilight and meet her friends? Of course she could just kill them them then.
"Okay, I'll g-go." Fluttershy helped Twilight up and followed her. Twilight waslimping slightly. When they got to the door, Fluttershy stabbed Twilight in the back.

Story 5 : Bragging leads to Consequences
Trixie was in town. Everypony groaned while Troxie performed cool magic, The only people that were clapping were Snips and Snails.
Fluttershy was watching from the trees, making a mental note to kill Snips and snails next. Trixie eventually gave up and went to a tent she had set up. Fluttershy took this as the perfect chance to strike.

Trixie sighed. Ponyville didn't appreciate her magic. They only appreciated that freak Twilight Whatever's magic. She didn't do anything good! Speaking of which, Twilight wasn't there today. She thought and read until night, when she drifted off to sleep.

She awoke to a hoof covering her mouth, and a strange voice laughing. She opened her eyes wide and instantly used magic to fling a bag at Fluttershy, who didn't care and stabbed Trixie in the ear, pinning her to the ground, gasping. Fluttershy then grabbed the knife and sawed Trixie's horn off, then attacking Trixie with her own horn. When she was sputtering blood and couching, Fluttershy then stabbed her in the chest and tore pieces of her legs and had dinner.

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#2 2012-06-02 20:05:02

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

Those are really short...


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#3 2012-06-02 20:41:21

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

Uh, you included "I'll try" in the "No More Cupcakes" part.  tongue


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#4 2012-06-02 21:23:09

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

Sausagefanclub wrote:

Uh, you included "I'll try" in the "No More Cupcakes" part.  tongue

Fixed. xD


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#5 2012-06-02 22:13:21

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

That's slightly disturbing...

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#6 2012-06-02 22:17:44

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

irreflexive wrote:

That's slightly disturbing...

Slightly?
SLIGHTLY?
I don't think so.


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#7 2012-06-03 01:42:42

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Oh, Fluttershy.


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#8 2012-06-03 08:02:06

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Fluttercakes!
that was weird
and I'm talking like this because my friend is spamming me with Skype calls
EDIT:My tablet used autocorrect!
It was super effective!

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#9 2012-06-03 08:12:03

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So when Angel doesn't eat her vegetables...

Angel, Blossom, Rarity, Rarity's cat, Pinkie pie, Twilight, and Trixie are all murdered by Fluttershy...

...and Fluttershy commits suicide.

You know somewhere there's a lesson in all of that.

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#10 2012-06-03 08:13:56

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And I'm pretty sure you forgot Spike, Snails, and Fluttershy's death.

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#11 2012-06-03 09:14:54

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i wanted to see rainbow dash rip that evil thing to shreds at the end

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#12 2012-06-03 10:07:26

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Actually, he posted all of the chapters on my forum. Rainbow Dash and Applejack don't appear in the story at all.
...Well actually, at first Lolkid was planning to have an ending where one of two things happened:
1. RD and AJ kill FlutterJeff.
2. FlutterJeff commits suicide after realizing what she had done.

In the end, he decided to pick the latter option.


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#13 2012-06-03 10:38:05

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777w wrote:

i wanted to see rainbow dash rip that evil thing to shreds at the end


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#14 2012-06-03 11:12:21

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

Mokat wrote:

777w wrote:

i wanted to see rainbow dash rip that evil thing to shreds at the end

I was going for that, but no. I'm working on an anti-climatic scene, like an alternate ending.


Cannibal in Ponyville
   A reported cannibal has been terrifying Ponyville settlers for weeks now. Rarity's sister, Sweetie Bell, woke up in the morning to find her sister and her cat's bones with barely any meat left. "It was very shocking to find my relatives dead," Sweetie Bell had tearfully explained to the press, "And many other ponies have been... killed, including all of Fluttershy's animals, Pinkie Pie, Snips and Snails, and Blossom." Who is this malicious killer? If you find or see any thing suspicious, contact us immediately.

    Rainbow Dash and Applejack stared at the paper. Rarity and Pinkie Pie were dead?
"Apple, I think I know who did this." Rainbow Dash stared at Applejack, trying hard not to cry.
"You.. you do? But how?"
"Simple, just put two and two together. Fluttershy wasn't in a good mood with Angel, Rarity, especially Snips and Snails."
"...So you suspect that Fluttershy had killed everypony?" Applejack seemed puzzled. Fluttershy couldn't have done that.
"I don't suspect it. I know it. Help me, Applejack. I know she's gone crazy. Help me put her out of her misery." Applejack considered it, then said slowly,

"Yes, I will."


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#15 2012-06-03 11:34:29

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uhhh wut


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#16 2012-06-03 12:10:21

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Re: Fluttershy Collection

Cannibal in Ponyville
   A reported cannibal has been terrifying Ponyville settlers for weeks now. Rarity's sister, Sweetie Bell, woke up in the morning to find her sister and her cat's bones with barely any meat left. "It was very shocking to find my relatives dead," Sweetie Bell had tearfully explained to the press, "And many other ponies have been... killed, including all of Fluttershy's animals, Pinkie Pie, Snips and Snails, and Blossom." Who is this malicious killer? If you find or see any thing suspicious, contact us immediately.

    Rainbow Dash and Applejack stared at the paper. Rarity and Pinkie Pie were dead?
"Apple, I think I know who did this." Rainbow Dash stared at Applejack, trying hard not to cry.
"You.. you do? But how?"
"Simple, just put two and two together. Fluttershy wasn't in a good mood with Angel, Rarity, especially Snips and Snails."
"...So you suspect that Fluttershy had killed everypony?" Applejack seemed puzzled. Fluttershy couldn't have done that.
"I don't suspect it. I know it. Help me, Applejack. I know she's gone crazy. Help me put her out of her misery." Applejack considered it, then said slowly,

"Yes, I will."

The ponies knocked on Fluttershy's door. "Fluttershy, we know you're in there!"
There was no reponse.
"Come out!" No response.
"We know what you did!" Still no response.
"We know you killed Angel and everypony else!" Suddenly Applejack was hit by a sharp object from above. Rainbow Dash and Applejack looked up and found themselves face-to-face with a killer. Fluttershy- No. Her name was no longer Fluttershy. The monster had a burnt face, a derformed nose, a wide smile and pure white eyes.
"WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?" Rainbow Dash yelled. Suddenly Applejack bucked whatever it was out of the air flat on it's face in the dirt. The creature hissed and threw the knife at Rainbow Dash. She dodged it somehow and flew up. Flu- the monster followed. Rainbow Dash then hit the creature in the face. She plummeted to the ground and got a face- what was left of it- full of dirt. Applejack then  grabbed the knife and stabbed her in the back over and over.


Dashie and Applejack were staring at the dead body of her former friend.
"She went insane." Rainbow Dash explained. "Something inside her just snapped. Bye, Fluttershy... forever."


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