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trinary wrote:

It's rather short...

Apparently that's not the whole story so that's why I can't just copy and paste it into Word and Word Count it myself

I am sorry, by next week i'll update this and Gren will now be a girl. Personality-wise SHE reamains the same.

soupoftomato wrote:

GameCentral wrote:

I am sorry, by next week i'll update this and Gren will now be a girl. Personality-wise SHE reamains the same.

/because based on this excerpt, I would notice a personality change/

thanks, soupoftomato!

300th POST!!!!!!!!!!

Um... are we ever going to get an example of your prose style?

coolscruff wrote:

It sounds very interesting, but why would you want teens? I know you might think thy will like it better but I am ten (and a half) and the plot sounds very interesting I would love to find out what happens. You should try to get it published in your country and another country near and then try to go on. I have noticed most people don't seem to understand that this is not the start of the book but only a small little review just to show what it is about, so if you have edited the first chapter or so, so we can see what it is like.
I am also writing a book and am very interested in getting to know other authors that shall hopefully go through the same line. So I have a few questions; How old are you?  How lon is your book in words/pages?  Is anybody else working with you?

Huh? Seeing as it's called '1 HOW IT ALL BEGAN', I'd imagine it's the beginning.

GameCentral wrote:

I am sorry, by next week i'll update this and Gren will now be a girl. Personality-wise SHE reamains the same.

Why are you saying sorry? We never developed an emotional attachment to the old him, but we did to the fact that you weren't giving female teens a reader replacement/that you didn't have a female character.

coolscruff wrote:

jukyter wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

It sounds very interesting, but why would you want teens? I know you might think thy will like it better but I am ten (and a half) and the plot sounds very interesting I would love to find out what happens. You should try to get it published in your country and another country near and then try to go on. I have noticed most people don't seem to understand that this is not the start of the book but only a small little review just to show what it is about, so if you have edited the first chapter or so, so we can see what it is like.
I am also writing a book and am very interested in getting to know other authors that shall hopefully go through the same line. So I have a few questions; How old are you?  How lon is your book in words/pages?  Is anybody else working with you?

Huh? Seeing as it's called '1 HOW IT ALL BEGAN', I'd imagine it's the beginning.

But it also said that it was a review sink am now lost ... I don't know. Anyways s/he is not on at the moment so no point asking anything.

Have you confused preview and review by not seeing the p?

jukyter wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

jukyter wrote:

Huh? Seeing as it's called '1 HOW IT ALL BEGAN', I'd imagine it's the beginning.

But it also said that it was a review sink am now lost ... I don't know. Anyways s/he is not on at the moment so no point asking anything.

Have you confused preview and review by not seeing the p?

Never mind ...

GameCentral wrote:

Nexstudent wrote:

You shouldn't have to give descriptions of the characters. A decent book should explain the personalities of the characters INDIRECTLY.

that was just for scratch, the characters are completely revealed over time in the book, but this was a preview so i just put it in.

Preview=extract.
Preview=/=summary.

Andres-Vander wrote:

Anyways you still haven't answered me, how long is it? In words

I'm starting to sound like a broken record

GameCentral wrote:

Andres-Vander wrote:

Andres-Vander wrote:

Anyways you still haven't answered me, how long is it? In words

I'm starting to sound like a broken record

I need to fix this record! it'snot done, it uses short chapters, but there are plenty, so instead of ten long-ish ones, i'll have twenty, short ones! Not done yet, i'll tell how many words when i'm done with this book.

About how long [pages] is your draft now? How long are the chapters [also pages]?