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Lolkid332 wrote:

Bump. Someone rate my story. D:

Here is your rating:
yay/10
Now let's hope the sequel (Lolkid332 asked if I wanted a sequel on my forums which are not yet scratch-approved) is just as good. 
EDIT: Ninja'd. 

Last edited by Sausagefanclub (2012-06-02 18:30:22)

Lolkid332 wrote:

Working on a sequel to Feeding Time.

Fluttershy was waiting. In the shadows. She had seen the pony get up many times and get drinks. She was hiding behind the bookcase, which conveniently had a space behind it that she could hide behind. She smiled her sickening, stretched smile, staring right at the pony.

At exactly 12:00 PM, the pony was fast asleep. Fluttershy took the chance and grabbed the piggy bank off the desktop. She sorted through it until she found a total of 17 bits. She laid them on the ground and laughed quietly. She couldn't wake up her fresh meat for dinner tonight. She was already hungry.

Blossom woke up five minutes later. She had the strange feeling something was watching her. She got out of bed and saw a grin enveloped by darkness. Slowly a pair of white eyes with no pupils opened and stared at her. She tried to scream but nothing came out. Slowly, the pony formerly know as Fluttershy opened her mouth and said,

"Shhh."

"Just go to sleep"

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

Working on a sequel to Feeding Time.

Fluttershy was waiting. In the shadows. She had seen the pony get up many times and get drinks. She was hiding behind the bookcase, which conveniently had a space behind it that she could hide behind. She smiled her sickening, stretched smile, staring right at the pony.

At exactly 12:00 PM, the pony was fast asleep. Fluttershy took the chance and grabbed the piggy bank off the desktop. She sorted through it until she found a total of 17 bits. She laid them on the ground and laughed quietly. She couldn't wake up her fresh meat for dinner tonight. She was already hungry.

Blossom woke up five minutes later. She had the strange feeling something was watching her. She got out of bed and saw a grin enveloped by darkness. Slowly a pair of white eyes with no pupils opened and stared at her. She tried to scream but nothing came out. Slowly, the pony formerly know as Fluttershy opened her mouth and said,

"Shhh."

"Just go to sleep"

LAWL

FlutterJeff was watching Pinkie Pie for hours now.
Pinkie Pie was playing a board game when she suddenly said, "I see you, Flutty!"
Fluttershy jumped back in surprise, rushing Pinkie and stabbing her in the hoof, hoping to kill her and eat her quickly. Pinkie widened her eyes in surprise and hit Fluttershy with the board game she was playing. Fluttershy felt no pain at all. She had no emotions. She had lost them all when killing Rarity. Pain, sadness, shyness, any kind of emotion was no part of her.

Fluttershy then stabbed Pinkie Pie in the stomach and hit her in the face. Pinkie pie stumbled backwards into a bookcase which stumbled over on her, almost killing her. Fluttershy rushed over. She would have some fun with this pony. She carefully clipped the end of her hooves off and removed her tongue so she couldn't scream. She then ripped all her hair off and threw it out the window, then cut off part of her face to eat.

Dinner would be wonderful.

Who should be next?

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

FlutterJeff was watching Pinkie Pie for hours now.
Pinkie Pie was playing a board game when she suddenly said, "I see you, Flutty!"
Fluttershy jumped back in surprise, rushing Pinkie and stabbing her in the hoof, hoping to kill her and eat her quickly. Pinkie widened her eyes in surprise and hit Fluttershy with the board game she was playing. Fluttershy felt no pain at all. She had no emotions. She had lost them all when killing Rarity. Pain, sadness, shyness, any kind of emotion was no part of her.

Fluttershy then stabbed Pinkie Pie in the stomach and hit her in the face. Pinkie pie stumbled backwards into a bookcase which stumbled over on her, almost killing her. Fluttershy rushed over. She would have some fun with this pony. She carefully clipped the end of her hooves off and removed her tongue so she couldn't scream. She then ripped all her hair off and threw it out the window, then cut off part of her face to eat.

Dinner would be wonderful.

Who should be next?

YOU should be next >:( That just ticked me off. Fluttershy, one of my favorite characters, just killed Pinkie, my other favorite, and it's because of YOU. Angel was ok, but that went too far. D8<

...

Who's your third favorite? >:D

BTW, I just made that one to tick Fluttershy fans off.

I'm a Fluttershy fan (and a RD fan, a PP fan, a TS fan and an AJ fan), but I still like this series.

Lolkid332 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

FlutterJeff was watching Pinkie Pie for hours now.
Pinkie Pie was playing a board game when she suddenly said, "I see you, Flutty!"
Fluttershy jumped back in surprise, rushing Pinkie and stabbing her in the hoof, hoping to kill her and eat her quickly. Pinkie widened her eyes in surprise and hit Fluttershy with the board game she was playing. Fluttershy felt no pain at all. She had no emotions. She had lost them all when killing Rarity. Pain, sadness, shyness, any kind of emotion was no part of her.

Fluttershy then stabbed Pinkie Pie in the stomach and hit her in the face. Pinkie pie stumbled backwards into a bookcase which stumbled over on her, almost killing her. Fluttershy rushed over. She would have some fun with this pony. She carefully clipped the end of her hooves off and removed her tongue so she couldn't scream. She then ripped all her hair off and threw it out the window, then cut off part of her face to eat.

Dinner would be wonderful.

Who should be next?

YOU should be next >   That just ticked me off. Fluttershy, one of my favorite characters, just killed Pinkie, my other favorite, and it's because of YOU. Angel was ok, but that went too far. D8<

...

Who's your third favorite? >

BTW, I just made that one to tick Fluttershy fans off.

My third is rarity. Oh, and YOU sir, are officially considered a troll on this forum.

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

YOU should be next >   That just ticked me off. Fluttershy, one of my favorite characters, just killed Pinkie, my other favorite, and it's because of YOU. Angel was ok, but that went too far. D8<

...

Who's your third favorite? >

BTW, I just made that one to tick Fluttershy fans off.

My third is rarity. Oh, and YOU sir, are officially considered a troll on this forum.

Because he made a pasta you didn't like?
I haven't been reading this forum that much recently, so I really don't know what he's been doing.

Nintendoandfriends wrote:

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

...

Who's your third favorite? >

BTW, I just made that one to tick Fluttershy fans off.

My third is rarity. Oh, and YOU sir, are officially considered a troll on this forum.

Because he made a pasta you didn't like?
I haven't been reading this forum that much recently, so I really don't know what he's been doing.

Oh, he's not so bad...
*my eyes derp as I begin to drift off into my fantasy world*

Last edited by Sausagefanclub (2012-06-02 20:06:48)

*stares into everyone's souls and grins eerily.

samid11 wrote:

Nintendoandfriends wrote:

Sausagefanclub wrote:

Lolkid332 told me he did that one to get revenge for Cupcakes. I think he's going to do Twilight Sparkle next, if I remember correctly.

No, I mean like this.
Angel: *Barely a struggle*
Blossom: same.
Rarity: Didn't expect it.
Pinkie pie: AHH GET THE F*** AWAY FROM ME

Because Pinkie and Fluttershy are BEST.

I know, I killed them to get revenge for CERTAIN Fluttershy fans trolling my site. *glare*

No, not on this forum.

samid11 wrote:

Nintendoandfriends wrote:

Sausagefanclub wrote:

Lolkid332 told me he did that one to get revenge for Cupcakes. I think he's going to do Twilight Sparkle next, if I remember correctly.

No, I mean like this.
Angel: *Barely a struggle*
Blossom: same.
Rarity: Didn't expect it.
Pinkie pie: AHH GET THE F*** AWAY FROM ME

Because Pinkie and Fluttershy are BEST.

HERE YA GO SIR

Twilight was flipping through the pages of a Daring Do book. Her mind was completely focused on the book, and nothing else, such as Fluttershy looking through the window, holding a bloody knife and licking her lips. Twilight read the book for approximately an hour and 32 seconds before she shut it. and went to bed. Fluttershy was so hungry she had tried licking the blood off her knife. Unfortunately she had only succeeded in giving herself a cut on her tongue, which she could then taste blood. It was sort of successful.

Fluttershy couldn't wait any longer. She climbed down the chimney and went into Twilight's bedroom. She stopped and stared at the defenseless unicorn. She started to think of ways that she could get some more fun than usual out of killing Twilight Sparkle. Then she had the perfect plan. She pushed Twilight out of bed, and she hit the floor with a thud on her head, breaking her horn in half. Fluttershy then whispered, "Hi, Twilight." and stabbed her in the hoof, putting her hand over her mouth.
"I'm working on my grin. Like it?" Fluttershy showed her blood-red teeth in a smile that stretched all the way around her mouth.
"Fluttershy..." Twilight was groping her hoof where Fluttershy had stabbed her, sobbing lightly.
"My name... is not... Fluttershy." Fluttershy tried to stab her, but Twilight somehow stopped her.


"Please... Fluttershy."

Lolkid332 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

Nintendoandfriends wrote:

No, I mean like this.
Angel: *Barely a struggle*
Blossom: same.
Rarity: Didn't expect it.
Pinkie pie: AHH GET THE F*** AWAY FROM ME

Because Pinkie and Fluttershy are BEST.

HERE YA GO SIR

Twilight was flipping through the pages of a Daring Do book. Her mind was completely focused on the book, and nothing else, such as Fluttershy looking through the window, holding a bloody knife and licking her lips. Twilight read the book for approximately an hour and 32 seconds before she shut it. and went to bed. Fluttershy was so hungry she had tried licking the blood off her knife. Unfortunately she had only succeeded in giving herself a cut on her tongue, which she could then taste blood. It was sort of successful.

Fluttershy couldn't wait any longer. She climbed down the chimney and went into Twilight's bedroom. She stopped and stared at the defenseless unicorn. She started to think of ways that she could get some more fun than usual out of killing Twilight Sparkle. Then she had the perfect plan. She pushed Twilight out of bed, and she hit the floor with a thud on her head, breaking her horn in half. Fluttershy then whispered, "Hi, Twilight." and stabbed her in the hoof, putting her hand over her mouth.
"I'm working on my grin. Like it?" Fluttershy showed her blood-red teeth in a smile that stretched all the way around her mouth.
"Fluttershy..." Twilight was groping her hoof where Fluttershy had stabbed her, sobbing lightly.
"My name... is not... Fluttershy." Fluttershy tried to stab her, but Twilight somehow stopped her.


"Please... Fluttershy."

Twilight: Hold me closer, babeh -3-
Flutterkiller: 0_0