Scratch

No, that's never happened to me, but I know how it feels to be working on a song and then have it be cut out from under you, its not fun 

I like your chords.  Personally, I would probably make it longer, but that's your choice, not mine.  What's interesting about your chords is that, if you're in C major, they're: I, V, vi, iii.  But, you could also be in A minor, in which case they'd be: III, VII, i, v.

In neither one do you end "V-I" (the most common type of ending), but I personally have an affinity towards iii, I, so I'm not going to tell you to change it  .

Switching from what I learned to what I feel:

I'm not sure if it will fit the "minor feel" you want, but that's an abstraction, and, since it is kind of balanced between minor and major, I'm guessing it will go just about any way you want it to go (not much personal experience here, just guessing xD).

Hope Müsescore is back up and running for you 

Ok, i fixed musescore, and i'm posting the new song.

It has 8 chords in the progression instead of 4. They are:
CM, GM, Am, Em, CM, Em, Am, CM.

Feel free to criticize me. 

It's supposed to loop, so the ending is quite lame.

It's not really sad or happy, it seems to have mixed feeling throughout the song. It's noit as good as the first, but better than the second. I will give a link soon.

Link: Scratch music 3

Last edited by AgentRoop (2012-05-26 12:11:09)

MoreGamesNow wrote:

AgentRoop wrote:

Feel free to criticize me. 

No 

It's great 

lol.
Thanks.

KyleK7 wrote:

Can I help with the 2.0 features?

EDIT: I saw the note, and sorry, but I can't do backgrounds, I'm only good at programming.

MoreGamesNow wrote:

So... anyone want to hear what an augmented chord sounds like (second chord)?

http://soundcloud.com/evangambit/background-4

I would but it's currently 5 am here and don't want my  brothers mad.

Agentpieface wrote:

I can provide some graphics if you want

we just need someone for backgrounds right now.
if you can do that then that will be great.

I’ll do backgrounds instead of programing.

House picture edit. (Clouds look better.) This picture is 480x360, the normal scratch stage size.

I cant wait until this game,square two,comes out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Last edited by PencilFactory (2012-05-28 21:00:16)

Bear in mind that this is a work in progress.  There are still quite a few awkward parts.  Still, I'm really excited about this and think it has really good potential.

AgentRoop wrote:

oh. my. goodness.
This is a great piece, how long did it take you to compose this?
I love all of the layers in harmony, and the ending left me stunned. Amazing job.

Thanks!  If you had criticized it I would have felt really deflated 

I'm not sure how long it took me.  It is kind of deceptive since the 4-measure phrase is repeated so much, and often it is exact duplication.  I started it this morning.  To be honest, it is a combination of skill (I say modestly) and quite a bit of luck + instrument choice.  For instance the key change happened almost completely by accident xD.  I was just trying to add an augmented triad of the relative minor key (because I didn't want it to become repetitive, and I had just written something with an augmented three chord last night and it sounded really cool!), and it just stopped sounding like C major  .

Last edited by MoreGamesNow (2012-05-27 19:00:46)

Bklecka wrote:

Agentpieface wrote:

I can provide some graphics if you want

we just need someone for backgrounds right now.
if you can do that then that will be great.

well, i can make you a starting screen/menu 

PencilFactory wrote:

If this is for scratch 2.0 the programers will need access to scratch 2.0.

actually, the people programming the base right now can make all of the parts to it that don't need cloud variables or cloning, and then they can add the new features to it when 2.0 comes out.

I Have An Idea For Our NEXT Project.
We Can Program A Cloud-Variable Web Browser Where Users Can Program Their Own Pages Complete With Links And Pen Block Drawn Images And All Stored In A Cloud List!
(Nothing Like HTML5 or Java)