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#126 2012-05-17 10:54:40

coolscruff
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Do ye review any thing that isn't a game??

I have a few requests (just to keep ye busy, i dont care when the review gets in.)
Ship of war
Pac man

Oh and Willpower! Plz do post things to be reviewed on mine  big_smile

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#127 2012-05-17 13:10:15

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

Do ye review any thing that isn't a game??

Yes, but its score probably will be lower

coolscruff wrote:

I have a few requests (just to keep ye busy, i dont care when the review gets in.)
Ship of war
Pac man

Thanks for keeping us busy! I plan to update one of my games tomorrow but I will try and find the time if robot_productions does not review it before then.

coolscruff wrote:

Oh and Willpower! Plz do post things to be reviewed on mine  big_smile

OK  big_smile  You should find a project of mine on your review page tomorrow!


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#128 2012-05-17 20:12:56

Leeizazombie
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Can you check my game please? its a two player shooter, works best on java player

www.scratch.mit.edu/projects/Leeizazombie/2540790


Leegion!! Multiplayer! Construction mode! Play this game and join competitions! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Leeizazombie/2759199

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#129 2012-05-18 18:24:06

ftf841
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

can you review pixel again p.s it's still not finished but i added more.


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#130 2012-05-19 05:05:35

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

OK, it looks like I am a bit behind with the reviewing. I will try to review
1)Coolscruff's Ship of War and Pacman
2)Leeizazombie's Two player Shooter
3)ftf841's Pixel

Here we go...


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#131 2012-05-19 05:13:52

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

EDIT- Whoops, My computer sound was off!! 8/10 for sound!!

Coolscruff with Ship Of War :

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 6/10

Total 74/100

GREAT GAME!

I liked this game because it was very hard! I had a look at the scripts and saw that you put change y by -10 and that is a really cool idea because the person has to keep moving. On my projects I use choose randm and your way is probably better on this sort of project. I saw no glitches but I didn't get very far. Well Done  smile

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#132 2012-05-19 05:26:46

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Coolscruff with Pac Man :

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

Total 78/100

GREAT GAME!

OK, so I did'nt read the instructions properly and avoided the black dots instead of collecting them  roll  but after that I succeeded. Love the random Join Us and Doy Doy Doy sounds and again no bugs or glitches with the game. Well Done  smile

Ps. Sorry, forgot about putting my project on your review topic, Doing that now  hmm


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#133 2012-05-19 05:39:13

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Leeizazombie with Leegion (Update 1) :

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

Total 91/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME! NUMBER 1!!!!!!

Since this was a two player game I recruited my younger sister to play with me and she loved this game and so did I. I loved the choice of levels on both death match and headquarters and Joanna liked killing me!! The instructons were very clear and the only wway that you could improve would be more levels. Very Well Done:)


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#134 2012-05-19 05:49:05

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

ftf841 with Pixel- "REVIEW 2"
The improvements are the second number-

Scripts (Programming) 7/10- 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10- 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10- 7/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10- 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10- 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 7/10

TOTAL: 66/100

GOOD GAME!!

All in all a improvement, I love the idea of as Boss Battle and have you made the character jump higher?  however I have noticed a number of glitches.
1) When you die you just fall and have to push the green flan to restart
2) You do not seem to be able to win the Boss Battle.
3) You can seeThe Boss Battle stage before you get there.
Well Done  smile


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#135 2012-05-19 07:03:22

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

ftf841 with Pixel- "REVIEW 2"
The improvements are the second number-

Scripts (Programming) 7/10- 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10- 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10- 7/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10- 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10- 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 7/10

TOTAL: 66/100

GOOD GAME!!

All in all a improvement, I love the idea of as Boss Battle and have you made the character jump higher?  however I have noticed a number of glitches.
1) When you die you just fall and have to push the green flan to restart
2) You do not seem to be able to win the Boss Battle.
3) You can seeThe Boss Battle stage before you get there.
Well Done  smile

the boss is beatable he just has lots of lives. space is shoot


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#136 2012-05-19 21:03:52

Leeizazombie
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Ive updated my game with music, better lookin pistol, choice of lives in deatmatch  smile  thanks for the review  big_smile
well heres my update http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Leeizazombie/2448215


Leegion!! Multiplayer! Construction mode! Play this game and join competitions! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Leeizazombie/2759199

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#137 2012-05-20 05:29:03

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

i will probably review that later then


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#138 2012-05-20 05:36:31

Red_Ball
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#139 2012-05-20 11:27:50

Zenth
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Registered: 2012-05-06
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Please could you review penArt Thanks!

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#140 2012-05-21 11:08:41

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Red_Ball with Droid-o-jump

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 73/100

GREAT GAME!

A very unusual and original game, I liked the nstructions that came up on the screen as you were playing. A great and entertaining game to play with great programming behind it. I did notice a small glitch with you can not see where the ball is when you fall of and it would be helpful to have one. Well Done:)


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#141 2012-05-21 11:29:28

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Zenth with PenArt
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 80/100

GREAT PEN THING!

This is a really cool pen thing... I have loved it. Really the only way that you can improve-on my scoring system is to add sound, it is an amazing project and I made some very pretty patterns- it needs more views!! Well Done  smile


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#142 2012-06-01 12:35:47

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Hey Willpower, Tank-4 will be coming out in a couple of days, I think. So when it does, I will need it reviewed. Just letting you know in advance, in a way this is a bump so I can find it easier! Thanks!


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#143 2012-06-04 14:31:08

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

bump again, Willpower?


Why are the secret organizations getting all the attention?  mad

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#144 2012-06-04 21:41:47

humhumgames
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

I am trying to get this project reviewed as much as possible.

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#145 2012-06-05 14:44:18

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

sonicfan12p wrote:

bump again, Willpower?

Havn't been on the computer for a while, 2 scout camps over two weekends. Thanks for bumping, Humhumgames I will review now


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#146 2012-06-05 14:50:07

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Oh, okay! You're welcome!


Why are the secret organizations getting all the attention?  mad

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#147 2012-06-05 14:57:32

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Humhumgames with Humhum Roundup

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 80.5/100

EXCELLENT GAME!

Just 80! I have loved your project, A really cool game although those humhums really do not want to be captured it looks like  lol  I noticed the humhums seem to be a bit random in whether they go in the direction you want them to and when I was looking at the scripts I noticed that on Sprite 9, the humhumteal script is not attached to anything- that could be why it does not disappear sometimes. Well Done  smile


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#148 2012-06-05 16:10:26

humhumgames
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Thank you so much! Thanks for the tips.

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#149 2012-06-13 11:58:00

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Bump!  tongue


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#150 2012-06-13 12:13:25

tailskirbyyoshifan
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

sonicfan12p wrote:

bump again, Willpower?

Havn't been on the computer for a while, 2 scout camps over two weekends.

big_smile  You're a Boy Scout?


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