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#101 2012-05-15 12:09:58

coolscruff
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Coolscruff with Pacman V2

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 4/10

TOTAL: 65/100

GOOD GAME!

I struggled with the controls for this game, It moves too far in one line and I kept on hitting the walls. My suggestion is this

when gf clicked
point in direction (90)
move (1) steps
As a result I did not get past Level 1, so could not help with your Level 2 issue. However I have an idea and is that it does not work in Flash and might work better in Java? Well Done  smile

Thank! You I made it hard beacause V 1 was quite easy on level one!  wink  Thank you for reviewing it though! how can I make it need java? Plz could you review Clan up!?

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#102 2012-05-15 15:22:03

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Coolscruff with Pacman V2

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 4/10

TOTAL: 65/100

GOOD GAME!

I struggled with the controls for this game, It moves too far in one line and I kept on hitting the walls. My suggestion is this

when gf clicked
point in direction (90)
move (1) steps
As a result I did not get past Level 1, so could not help with your Level 2 issue. However I have an idea and is that it does not work in Flash and might work better in Java? Well Done  smile

Thank! You I made it hard beacause V 1 was quite easy on level one!  wink  Thank you for reviewing it though! how can I make it need java? Plz could you review Clan up!?

I will review Clan up tomorrow and for the java, put in your project notes "works better in java" and they can play it in java by pressing "switch back" above your notes.

Btw, This is only an idea, flash may not be the problem!

Yay 100 replies to this topic!!


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#103 2012-05-15 17:13:27

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

I might review some more in a bit  smile


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#104 2012-05-15 17:48:03

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Pixel! btw it's still in constant development be cause it's not finished.

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#105 2012-05-15 17:53:10

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Sonicfan12p with Tanks 2

Ahhh, I failed at this game, I did not get very far, so I am going to try again tomorrow and review it then.

EDIT- The disappearing forum post strikes again!! I did review Tanks but it is not here- I think it has something to do with editing, not quoting a post, I will review all your ank games tomorrow.

The key is to stay as far away from the enemies as you can.


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#106 2012-05-16 10:57:18

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Sonicfan12p with Tanks

TOTAL: 74/100

GREAT GAME!

I can remember that I put that there were two glitches which let it down, one was if your tank is on a black line it can not move and the second one is quite major and it is that it skipped level 1-2 and went staight on to 1-3 after 1-1.


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#107 2012-05-16 11:10:46

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Oh, is there any other projects that need to be reviewed?


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#108 2012-05-16 11:14:19

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Sonicfan12p with Tanks2

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 81/100

EXELLENT GAME!!

Woo, your in the 80's. I love this game- even more than Tanks and I beleve that you should make 5 as you have planned. I loved this game. Thanks for the tip, I got much further, however I still did not finish and to review Tanks 3 I am going to have to cheat... 
Well Done  smile


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#109 2012-05-16 11:16:43

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower/robot_productions1 could you put the review for clean up! up? Here is the link incase you forgot!  wink  Thanks! Cleanup!

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#110 2012-05-16 11:17:44

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

Willpower/robot_productions1 could you put the review for clean up! up? Here is the link incase you forgot!  wink  Thanks! Cleanup!

I'll review that in a bit  smile


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#111 2012-05-16 11:20:46

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

robot_productions1 wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

Willpower/robot_productions1 could you put the review for clean up! up? Here is the link incase you forgot!  wink  Thanks! Cleanup!

I'll review that in a bit  smile

Thanks!  big_smile

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#112 2012-05-16 11:25:56

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Sonicfan12p with Tanks3

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 83/100

EXELLENT GAME!!

OK I cheated and knicked the password but it was the only way to review this because I did not complete 2

An excellent game, the scores are basically the same with a few points added on apart from  the controls- I took one off for lack of instructions but that is it. I loved this game. This game should have much more than 8 views. Very Hard!! Well Done  smile


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#113 2012-05-16 11:27:02

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

robot_productions1 wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

Willpower/robot_productions1 could you put the review for clean up! up? Here is the link incase you forgot!  wink  Thanks! Cleanup!

I'll review that in a bit  smile

Thanks!  big_smile

I have reviewed clean up but Robot is welcome to review it again!


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#114 2012-05-16 11:33:34

coolscruff
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

coolscruff wrote:

robot_productions1 wrote:

I'll review that in a bit  smile

Thanks!  big_smile

I have reviewed clean up but Robot is welcome to review it again!

You did not put up the review here you just looked at it and posted your score in the comments!
This is kinda funny because I own my own reviewing place.

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#115 2012-05-16 11:38:21

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

I've been rying to get some opinions on a game of mine. It is a 1s1s game called Archery 7, and it took a while to make. Look at the scripting, and even though it may not be a Chanmanpartyman or a RHY long script, with my computer, it took FOREVER.
Archery 7


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#116 2012-05-16 11:44:10

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

mythbusteranimator wrote:

I've been rying to get some opinions on a game of mine. It is a 1s1s game called Archery 7, and it took a while to make. Look at the scripting, and even though it may not be a Chanmanpartyman or a RHY long script, with my computer, it took FOREVER.
Archery 7

You do realise you could have asked YOU REVIEW as well as this just to get diffrent ratings and opions

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#117 2012-05-16 11:52:21

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

You did not put up the review here you just looked at it and posted your score in the comments!

Its there- look above the first Tanks 2 attempt


coolscruff wrote:

This is kinda funny because I own my own reviewing place.

Prehaps I should put some of my projects on your topic!


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#118 2012-05-16 11:57:46

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

coolscruff wrote:

mythbusteranimator wrote:

I've been rying to get some opinions on a game of mine. It is a 1s1s game called Archery 7, and it took a while to make. Look at the scripting, and even though it may not be a Chanmanpartyman or a RHY long script, with my computer, it took FOREVER.
Archery 7

You do realise you could have asked YOU REVIEW as well as this just to get diffrent ratings and opions

Yeah, I' going around asking for some different opinions. I asked on our topic, too.


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#119 2012-05-16 12:04:01

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

ftf841 with Pixel

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 7/10

TOTAL: 64.5/100

GOOD GAME!!

At first my character did not move, but then it started working which was wierd. It is a good scroller- I have never got the idea of scrolling. The only thing which would give it more points are sounds and more of it! Well Done  smile


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#120 2012-05-16 12:05:37

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

mythbusteranimator wrote:

I've been rying to get some opinions on a game of mine. It is a 1s1s game called Archery 7, and it took a while to make. Look at the scripting, and even though it may not be a Chanmanpartyman or a RHY long script, with my computer, it took FOREVER.
Archery 7

I wil review it tomorrow if Robot_productions does not beat me!


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#121 2012-05-16 12:15:53

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Race to the reviews!


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#122 2012-05-16 12:43:56

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Sonicfan12p with Tanks3

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 83/100

EXELLENT GAME!!

OK I cheated and knicked the password but it was the only way to review this because I did not complete 2

An excellent game, the scores are basically the same with a few points added on apart from  the controls- I took one off for lack of instructions but that is it. I loved this game. This game should have much more than 8 views. Very Hard!! Well Done  smile

I actually only just put it up a couple days ago, but I worked for a while on that one. And with the original Tanks, I've never seen it glitch like that before, although Tanks-3 occasionally showed the end to early. Maybe it was just the website?


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#123 2012-05-16 15:44:42

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

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Race to the reviews!

Vote Willpower!!!


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#124 2012-05-17 10:11:27

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Mythbusteranimator with Archery 7:

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 2/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 4/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 1/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 3/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 2/10

Total 44/100

Ok game

I like the 1s1s part but the game itself wasn't the best i've ever seen, it was pretty glitchy and i didn't quite understand what i was supposed to do...


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#125 2012-05-17 10:47:05

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

robot_productions1 wrote:

Mythbusteranimator with Archery 7:

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 2/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 4/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 1/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 3/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 2/10

Total 44/100

Ok game

I like the 1s1s part but the game itself wasn't the best i've ever seen, it was pretty glitchy and i didn't quite understand what i was supposed to do...

Ahh I lost, nevermind- I have added this to the gallery and first post


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