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robot_productions1 · 2012-05-08 11:31:05

Willpower wrote:
robot_productions1 wrote:
Willpower wrote:

I'll review projects when I can, feel free to review to any request, ill allow you to add projects to the review gallery so we can keep track of whats been done. I'll also put something about this on the first post.
-Willpower
Ps. Now you are helping no one is requesting!
Of course now no-one wants there projects reviewed We will review any project people, even if we have already reviewed one of yours before
Do you want to review featured projects? See how good they really are!

Sure tongue

robot_productions1 · 2012-05-10 11:27:07

I know some of you guys out there want your projects reviewed wink

tailskirbyyoshifan · 2012-05-10 11:31:29

Here: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/tailski … an/1605126

robot_productions1 · 2012-05-10 11:40:37

SP WeeGee Takes over CD-I remix:

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 3/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 0/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 0/10

TOTAL: 51/100
Funny and good animation but its not a game which is what the gradeing system is for...i think i would give it a 75/100 but since it wasn't a game you missed a lot of points...

Willpower · 2012-05-10 11:56:06

robot_productions1 wrote:
SP WeeGee Takes over CD-I remix:

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 3/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 0/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 0/10

TOTAL: 51/100
Funny and good animation but its not a game which is what the gradeing system is for...i think i would give it a 75/100 but since it wasn't a game you missed a lot of points...

A request, Hurray!!!!, I will add this to the first post and add this to the gallery, by the way, robot, you can add projects to that gallery.

James07 · 2012-05-10 15:38:23

Willpower wrote:
James07 with Advanced Stopwatch

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 71/100

GREAT STOPWATCH!!

A great idea but I don't know who will watch the stopwatch for a centuary!! There were no bugs or glitchesthat I could see so 10/10 and I love the sort of save funtion that you have where you add events to an events list. Well Done

Wow. I thought I would get lower than 20/100. Thanks.

Willpower · 2012-05-10 15:45:59

James07 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
James07 with Advanced Stopwatch

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 71/100

GREAT STOPWATCH!!

A great idea but I don't know who will watch the stopwatch for a centuary!! There were no bugs or glitchesthat I could see so 10/10 and I love the sort of save funtion that you have where you add events to an events list. Well Done
Wow. I thought I would get lower than 20/100. Thanks.

Nah it was cool

shpeters · 2012-05-11 09:48:29

Could you please rate my 1s1s maze game?

And please remember that it is 1s1s when rating it.

robot_productions1 · 2012-05-11 11:43:50

1s1s Maze:

Scripts (Programming) 5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 0/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 0/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 5/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 1/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 3/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 0/10

Total 32/100

I don't know if this was just me, but then controls didn't work at all. If i was just doing something wrong, tell me. Also, in the project notes, you didn't put the instructions nor did you put them in the game...so, correct me if i'm wrong and i will re-grade it.

shpeters · 2012-05-11 12:14:53

I'm sure the arrow keys work and I'm going to add instructions right now. I'll add some new mazes soon.

robot_productions1 · 2012-05-11 12:27:04

shpeters wrote:
I'm sure the arrow keys work and I'm going to add instructions right now. I'll add some new mazes soon.

Ok smile I can't wait to grade your next mazes, and i hope you fix that glitch smile

MoreWillpower · 2012-05-11 12:39:55

shpeters wrote:
I'm sure the arrow keys work and I'm going to add instructions right now. I'll add some new mazes soon.

Since robot has already reviewed it I won't say that much, but I really like the programming behind it with the solid walls and the random generating feature, I see instructions have been added and...

robot_productions wrote:
I don't know if this was just me, but then controls didn't work at all.

...the controls seemed to work for me.

-Willpower (via my Demos and Beta account)

robot_productions1 · 2012-05-11 14:09:29

Ohhhh, i couldn't see my guy cause he was blending in with the maze, and then he got stuck when used to controls..ok, i'll re-grade it!
1s1s Maze:

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 6/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 5/10

TOTAL: 63/100

I loved the game, it was very different from most other maze games and i like it wink
(I also like the 1s1s part to smile , i i could rate it just without the rating method i would rate it 70/100 probobaly big_smile

shpeters · 2012-05-11 15:57:02

Wow, thanks! My confidence has just been boosted by 1000000000%! smile

James07 · 2012-05-14 19:48:08

Willpower wrote:
James07 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
James07 with Advanced Stopwatch

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 71/100

GREAT STOPWATCH!!

A great idea but I don't know who will watch the stopwatch for a centuary!! There were no bugs or glitchesthat I could see so 10/10 and I love the sort of save funtion that you have where you add events to an events list. Well Done
Wow. I thought I would get lower than 20/100. Thanks.
Nah it was cool

smile

sonicfan12p · 2012-05-14 21:57:24

Could you review my Tanks game in my signature?

sonicfan12p · 2012-05-14 21:58:54

After that, could you review Tanks-2?

sonicfan12p · 2012-05-14 22:01:20

And finally, could you review Tanks-3?
That's the last one for now. I only just started on Tanks-4 today. wink

Willpower · 2012-05-15 10:54:22

sonicfan12p wrote:
And finally, could you review Tanks-3?
That's the last one for now. I only just started on Tanks-4 today.

Okey Dokey. Coming right up.

coolscruff · 2012-05-15 11:04:26

I have two is that OK??? Here are the links!
Clean up!
Pacman V 2.0
Also read the notes on Pacman V 2.0 I have a problem with it maybe you could help! smile If you can post a comment saying how, also to do with the problem if you download it the problem is fixed! big_smile

Last edited by coolscruff (2012-05-15 11:07:44)

Willpower · 2012-05-15 11:17:44

Coolscruff with Clean Up!

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 68/100

GOOD GAME!

Very Original... I could spot no errors at all and theres not really much to say about this other than i have posted my top score and the sound was the only thing that let you down. Well Done smile

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-15 11:32:47)

Willpower · 2012-05-15 11:25:33

Sonicfan12p with Tanks 2

Ahhh, I failed at this game, I did not get very far, so I am going to try again tomorrow and review it then.

EDIT- The disappearing forum post strikes again!! I did review Tanks but it is not here- I think it has something to do with editing, not quoting a post, I will review all your ank games tomorrow.

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-15 11:51:13)

coolscruff · 2012-05-15 11:28:03

could you review the ones I asked you to? Sorry I am impatient! big_smile

Willpower · 2012-05-15 11:33:38

coolscruff wrote:
could you review the ones I asked you to? Sorry I am impatient!

Just done Clean Up and starting on the other one as we speak. Tea is also minutes away. Rush Rush Rush!!

EDIT: OK it will have to be after Tea, give me 15 mins
EDIT 2: Starting Now

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-15 11:49:45)

Willpower · 2012-05-15 12:00:16

Coolscruff with Pacman V2

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 4/10

TOTAL: 65/100

GOOD GAME!

I struggled with the controls for this game, It moves too far in one line and I kept on hitting the walls. My suggestion is this

when gf clicked
point in direction (90)
move (1) steps

As a result I did not get past Level 1, so could not help with your Level 2 issue. However I have an idea and is that it does not work in Flash and might work better in Java? Well Done smile

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