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#1 2012-05-08 12:11:23
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Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
It's sad, I warn you. Basically it's the cut out scene from Deathly Hallows Part 2. I just edited it a bit. It's a 100 word story, so it's short, bittersweet and emotional.
Spoiler warning for Deathly Hallows.
Kissing scene (it's the last two paragraph.)
I don't deem it unsuitable since it's an everyday thing.
Silent Goodbyes
"Remus!"
He recognised Tonks' voice instantly. He whipped around as she flung herself at him, wrapping her arms around his neck.
"I found you," she whispered, "alive." The relief in her voice was evident.
"Why did you come here?" he chastised her gently, stroking her short, pink locks, brushing strands out of her pale, heart-shaped face.
"Because YOU need me most right now," she said, raising her chin and looking him in the eye. "Teddy's fine without me for... A while." He knew she didn't believe herself.
He kissed her, wiping tears off her cheek, their last moments together, alive.
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#2 2012-05-08 16:29:50
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Who is Remus?
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#3 2012-05-08 17:04:16
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
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Who is Remus?
Remus Lupin.
The werewolf.
DADA teacher in Prison of Azkaban.
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#4 2012-05-08 17:05:54
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
Blackdog100 wrote:
Andres-Vander wrote:
Who is Remus?
Remus Lupin.
The werewolf.
DADA teacher in Prison of Azkaban.
Oh I didn't get up that far yet
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#5 2012-05-08 17:51:38
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonk's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.
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#6 2012-05-08 18:16:22
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonk's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.
No, it is Tonks'.
Why
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#7 2012-05-08 19:27:51
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RedRocker227 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonks's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.No, it is Tonks'.
Basic rules of English.
If your name ends in an S naturally you put a new apostrophe s.
Actually, I was wrong but we both were. It is Tonks's
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#8 2012-05-08 19:34:29
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
RedRocker227 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonks's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.No, it is Tonks'.
Basic rules of English.
If your name ends in an S naturally you put a new apostrophe s.
Actually, I was wrong but we both were. It is Tonks's
I've researched it (wow how sad am I) and both Tonks' and Tonks's are acceptable.
Why
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#9 2012-05-08 19:35:48
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
RedRocker227 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
RedRocker227 wrote:
No, it is Tonks'.Basic rules of English.
If your name ends in an S naturally you put a new apostrophe s.
Actually, I was wrong but we both were. It is Tonks'sI've researched it (wow how sad am I) and both Tonks' and Tonks's are acceptable.
Yeah okay now stop cluttering up the topic with fighting
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#11 2012-05-08 19:40:29
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
Andres-Vander wrote:
RedRocker227 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
Basic rules of English.
If your name ends in an S naturally you put a new apostrophe s.
Actually, I was wrong but we both were. It is Tonks'sI've researched it (wow how sad am I) and both Tonks' and Tonks's are acceptable.
Yeah okay now stop cluttering up the topic with fighting
Not really fighting. And we were (potentially) pointing out a mistake, which I don't think is unreasonable with stories, so it's not really cluttering the thread up either.
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#12 2012-05-08 22:50:49
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RedRocker227 wrote:
Andres-Vander wrote:
RedRocker227 wrote:
I've researched it (wow how sad am I) and both Tonks' and Tonks's are acceptable.Yeah okay now stop cluttering up the topic with fighting
Not really fighting. And we were (potentially) pointing out a mistake, which I don't think is unreasonable with stories, so it's not really cluttering the thread up either.
Hm. I think s' on s ending names is more older English.
My current English teacher wouldn't accept it if I did that on a paper, but the Bible says Jesus' so yeah.
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#14 2012-05-09 11:29:42
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
RedRocker227 wrote:
Andres-Vander wrote:
Yeah okay now stop cluttering up the topic with fightingNot really fighting. And we were (potentially) pointing out a mistake, which I don't think is unreasonable with stories, so it's not really cluttering the thread up either.
Hm. I think s' on s ending names is more older English.
My current English teacher wouldn't accept it if I did that on a paper, but the Bible says Jesus' so yeah.
My English teacher wouldn't accept Tonks's since on our course it says s'.
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#15 2012-05-09 11:32:22
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonk's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.
It isn't in the book. I'd remember it if it was. It just says that Tonks went looking for Lupin as soon as she got out of the Room of Requirement.
She dies with pink hair as far as I can remember.
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#16 2012-05-09 12:14:04
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Well if you said it you'd say it like "Tonk-siz" so i think that's more like Tonks's.
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#17 2012-05-09 17:12:04
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
Blackdog100 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonk's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.It isn't in the book. I'd remember it if it was. It just says that Tonks went looking for Lupin as soon as she got out of the Room of Requirement.
She dies with pink hair as far as I can remember.
"Part 2" implied it was being written using movie canon.
I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos
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#18 2012-05-09 17:16:54
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
Blackdog100 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
If this was a cut scene wouldn't that imply it is in the book?
And wouldn't Tonk's hair be a different color because if I remember right the pinker it is the happier?
And "Tonks' " implies multiple Tonks. Since her actual (nick)name is Tonks it is Tonk's.It isn't in the book. I'd remember it if it was. It just says that Tonks went looking for Lupin as soon as she got out of the Room of Requirement.
She dies with pink hair as far as I can remember."Part 2" implied it was being written using movie canon.
Yes but you said that would imply it was in the BOOK, which it ISN'T. I never said it wasn't in the movie. Please don't put words into my mouth.
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#19 2012-05-09 18:06:12
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
Blackdog100 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
Blackdog100 wrote:
It isn't in the book. I'd remember it if it was. It just says that Tonks went looking for Lupin as soon as she got out of the Room of Requirement.
She dies with pink hair as far as I can remember."Part 2" implied it was being written using movie canon.
Yes but you said that would imply it was in the BOOK, which it ISN'T. I never said it wasn't in the movie. Please don't put words into my mouth.
No I just meant when people say something was "cut out" of a book based movie they normally mean it was in the book but not the movie.
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#20 2012-05-10 11:45:14
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Re: Silent Goodbyes (Harry Potter Fanfic)
soupoftomato wrote:
Blackdog100 wrote:
soupoftomato wrote:
"Part 2" implied it was being written using movie canon.
Yes but you said that would imply it was in the BOOK, which it ISN'T. I never said it wasn't in the movie. Please don't put words into my mouth.
No I just meant when people say something was "cut out" of a book based movie they normally mean it was in the book but not the movie.
I understand, but not this time haha 
Which probably sounds EVIL.
Which I do not intend. XD
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