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SciTecCf wrote:

Can you please review my OS? Thanks. Here's a link:

STC OS 1.2

No problem, will be done next week

robot_productions1 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

robot_productions1 wrote:

Could you review my pong series (Metal Pong 1, 2, and 3) and base the review throughout the whole series, or, i would like better if you reviewed each one of them and tell me how i did, here's the link for Metal Pong 1: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/robot_p … s1/1859517 and just click my name to get to my Metal Pong 2 and 3   
Thank you 
I'd prefer if you would do them sepreataly 

I will review them seperatly for you, it will probably be done on Monday

Thank you!!! Also i think someone should review YOUR projects 

If you want!!!

Here's mine: The Level Game!

Willpower wrote:

benjamin2 wrote:

Here's mine: The Level Game!

I have looked on your Level Game Topic and it looks interesting so I am looking forward to reviewing this 

Thanks! Also there will be a 100 level version soon, could you provide suggestions?

Metal Pong 1 by robot_productions

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9 1/2/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

Total 71.5/100

GREAT GAME!!

I really liked this game because it is very good fun and the ball comes off at some really wier angles on the paddle. The controls were nice but there were no insructions so I took off a couple of points. There was no sound which stopped you getting into the 80's and I spotted a very small glitch, if you move your paddle sideways and you push the ball along you get loads of points. I found that completely by accident when my points jumped form 41-71. Well Done 

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-07 07:36:51)

robot_productions with Metal Pong 3

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9 1/2/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

Total 74.5/100

GREAT GAME!!

I can't really think of much else to say about the Metal Pong series, apart from I think the glitch from Metal Pong 1 has reappeared and the bricks were a nice touch and I like how they appear after 5 secs. However not as good as Metal Pong 2 in my opinion. Well Done 

James07 with Advanced Stopwatch

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 71/100

GREAT STOPWATCH!!

A great idea but I don't know who will watch the stopwatch for a centuary!! There were no bugs or glitchesthat I could see so 10/10 and I love the sort of save funtion that you have where you add events to an events list. Well Done 

SciTecCf wrote:

Hi willpower! Have you reviewed my project? I saw that you added it to your gallery, but you didn't post the results?

Oh no, its happened again. I did make the review but my computor seems to be going mental at the moment and going so slowly, I push the submit button but nothing happens. I will have to watch out for it in the future. A similar thing happened with GhurkinC last week.

This is what I remember:

"Great OS!!

What a brilliant OS, this is the best one that I have reviewed, it does not glitch or go really slowly. As a added bonus there are games and music and both work well, however after you have played the game, it does not go back to the screen before and I had to refresh the screen. Well Done:)"

Sorry SciTec, I am sure I mentioned something about Programming but I have forgotten it. Really Good though.

Willpower wrote:

robot_productions1 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

I will review them seperatly for you, it will probably be done on Monday

Thank you!!! Also i think someone should review YOUR projects 

If you want!!!

Two player battle by WillPower


Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 2/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 6/10

TOTAL: 60/100
Ok game 

It was good at first and spotted a few glitches but then after a while i lost interest, ok game though 

robot_productions1 wrote:

Wow, reviewing that project was acccually pretty fun, i think i'll start my own review topic 

If you want to review, I would like a bit of help with this thread because I can only do it for an hour a day and reviewing can be a bit lenghly. Reviewing is harder than it looks.

I also didn't want to create a whole new review thing since there's 2 active ones right now...oh and 100TH POST!!!

Willpower wrote:

robot_productions1 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

If you want to review, I would like a bit of help with this thread because I can only do it for an hour a day and reviewing can be a bit lenghly. Reviewing is harder than it looks.

Ok, i'll help, i can review a ton of projects each day, it is kinda hard to  , but fun 

I'll review projects when I can, feel free to review to any request, ill allow you to add projects to the review gallery so we can keep track of whats been done. I'll also put something about this on the first post.
-Willpower
Ps. Now you are helping no one is requesting!

Of course now no-one wants there projects reviewed    We will review any project people, even if we have already reviewed one of yours before