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#26 2012-05-02 12:03:42
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Yoshiboy wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Beam Bouncer by Yoshiboy
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10
Total 88/100
EXCELLENT GAME!!
At the moment this game is aclose second place! I really love this game and I have given it a love it. I really like the switching between colours using space and you can only jump on that colour. I failed on level 2 so I don't know if you have done this but if you havn't it might be a good idea to make a really hard level where blue bounces on green and vice versa! I havn't seen a game like this before so it gets a 9 on Originality. Well Done
Thanks! One question, why is it 9/10 original? It was 100% by me. If you see a based on obvious's project, obvious is my test account.
Oh, thanks, you now have 10/10!!!
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#28 2012-05-02 12:12:33
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Bob's Haunted Shroom by tailskirbyyoshifan
Err...
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 73 /100
GREAT ANIMATION!!
Erm...
Intresting animation, I ahve never reviewed animations beofre and I felt I had to give you 10/10 on the last 2 because you did not have to do any of them. There were no sounds which let it down a bit and I took of points for programming because there was not really much at all. Its the first project with only 1 script and 0 sprites that i've seen. Well Done
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#29 2012-05-02 12:16:03
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Right, thats it for today, its 5:15 here and i've been on since 3:30. I will start with the rest of tailskirbyyoshifan's animations and then play SoulAlly_Hanna's game and continue from there.
Thanks Guys 
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#31 2012-05-02 12:21:36
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Sorry Ghurkin this is all I can remember, my computers been playing up a bit recently and I have had to re-do another post as well.
Rolling 2 by GhurkinC
Total 78 /100
GREAT GAME!!
Loved the Black Rectangle- it really made my day!
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#32 2012-05-02 16:17:57
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Willpower wrote:
Rolling 2 by GhurkinC
Total 78 /100
GREAT GAME!!
Loved the Black Rectangle- it really made my day!
Thanks - I guess it was the sound and graphics that let it down?
Try my latest game, Rolling 2, a 10-level platform game based around the gravity marble.
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#33 2012-05-02 16:26:55
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GurkinC wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Rolling 2 by GhurkinC
Total 78 /100
GREAT GAME!!
Loved the Black Rectangle- it really made my day!Thanks - I guess it was the sound and graphics that let it down?
Think So, but 78 is a very impressive score
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#34 2012-05-03 11:06:42
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Sorry I missed this project yesterday
Space Battle v1.2 by AgentRoop
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 9/10
Total 84/100
EXCELLENT GAME!!
The first thing I loved about this project was the choice of controls- you could choose mouse or arrow keys. the next thing was the powerup system, I have a similar one one my BLINKY's Battles game which isn't nearly as good. Brilliant. The sounds seemed to repeat when I started but I think they changed half way so bonus points and I can see that you have put masses of effort in. I have loved it Well Done
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#35 2012-05-03 11:14:21
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Mario's Items by tailskirbyyoshifan
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 78 /100
GREAT ANIMATION!!
I really like this animationbecause of the originality of it, i havn't seen anything like it before and it is really cool. It has a few surprises with what is going to happen when you pushed the buttons. The only thing that let you down was the sounds, if you had them you would be looking at 85+ Well Done
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#36 2012-05-03 11:21:24
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The Bathroom by tailskirbyyoshifan
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 85/100
EXCELLENT ANIMATION!!
You have managed to get into the 80's! The thing that put this project into the 80's was the sound- I love the scream, there is not really much more to say about this project other than it was very funny and entertaining. I have loved it Well Done
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#37 2012-05-03 11:29:54
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The Man Eating Rock Monster by tailskirbyyoshifan
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 79/100
GREAT ANIMATION!!...
But... I have no idea what happened. There was this piece of papper for directions to a man eating rock monster then someone going ahh but still very good and the sound effect swere intresting. Well Done
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#38 2012-05-03 11:37:24
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Rock Monster Trouble by tailskirbyyoshifan
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 6/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 7/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 77/100
GREAT ANIMATION!!...
Again, I am not quite sure what happened and your little notice "check out my other animations" would of been better at the top of the screen so you can see the rest of your project more easily. Well Done
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#39 2012-05-03 11:49:02
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Jen Battle Test by SoulAlly_Hanna
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 10/10
Total 78/100
GREAT GAME!!...
I think this was really good because of the programming behind it, especially the lists which I havn't been able to put in my projects yet because they are a pain. I like the kind of Pokemon theme to it but unfortunatly I took points of Originality for that reason. The sounds were good and you have put a lot of effort into it Well Done
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#40 2012-05-03 14:59:08
- robot_productions1
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/robot_p … s1/2510120
Only 1 or 2 bugs...
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#41 2012-05-03 15:32:33
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robot_productions1 wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/robot_p … s1/2510120
Only 1 or 2 bugs...
Yay, a request!!
You are first on my very short list for tomorrow; when i can get back on the computer
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#42 2012-05-03 16:45:14
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Willpower wrote:
Sorry I missed this project yesterday
Space Battle v1.2 by Agent Romp
Ratings
Total 84/100
EXCELLENT GAME!!
review
....
Thank you so much for your thorough review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Btw, my name is AgentRoop, not AgentRomp 
Last edited by AgentRoop (2012-05-03 16:45:35)
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#44 2012-05-04 01:17:50
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AgentRoop wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Sorry I missed this project yesterday
Space Battle v1.2 by Agent Romp
Ratings
Total 84/100
EXCELLENT GAME!!
review
....Thank you so much for your thorough review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Btw, my name is AgentRoop, not AgentRomp
Yeah Sorry, I have changed it on the review and the gallery
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#45 2012-05-04 01:29:31
- jji7skyline
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I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!
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#46 2012-05-04 11:05:10
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Snake (Updated) by robot_productions
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10
Total 76/100
GREAT GAME!!
I think this game is really cool because of the stamping script you have in your scripts. This makes it so you do not need hundreds of different, exactly the same sprites and I will be sure to add something like this into one of my games. The controls take a little bit of getting used to but then it is a very enjoyable game. Well Done
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#47 2012-05-04 11:24:40
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Kirby 2 by ftf841
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 7/10
Total 72/100
GREAT GAME!!
A great game with some great programming for the swords and not getting killed whilst using your sword however there a lot of glitches, your vrs mode does not seem to work, none of the characters can move and after you go back to the main menu the vrs button has disappeared and on the boss battle on adventure you can't really control your character. Sort these out and this will be amazing. Well Done
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#48 2012-05-04 11:35:22
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Mac OS 10.7 Lion by jji7skyline
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 7/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10
Total 61/100
GOOD OS!!
This is a very well thought out idea and the programming looks good however (and it may be just me) it does not work, I can only get the safari page open and that is about it. I like the loading symbol at the start and it is a nice idea but it could have more stuff added. Well Done
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#49 2012-05-04 13:41:38
- robot_productions1
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- Registered: 2011-05-11
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Could you review my pong series (Metal Pong 1, 2, and 3) and base the review throughout the whole series, or, i would like better if you reviewed each one of them and tell me how i did, here's the link for Metal Pong 1: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/robot_p … s1/1859517 and just click my name to get to my Metal Pong 2 and 3
Thank you
I'd prefer if you would do them sepreataly
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#50 2012-05-04 15:03:46
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Can you please review my OS? Thanks. Here's a link:
STC OS 1.2
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