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Willpower · 2012-05-01 11:25:13

OVER 60 PROJECTS REVIEWED!!!!!!!!!!!! and I am up to date who'd a thought it!?

September 20th- New Criteria is here!!!

Do you want your project (s) reviewed? You have come to the right place!

I have now made a gallery of projects i have reviewed with a leaderboard of best three scores- Review Gallery

THE REVIEWS:

The criteria is different per project:

Games and Os's:

Scripts (Programming) /10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) /10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) /10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10

Animations and Videos:

Scripts (Programming) /10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) /10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Story (Characters) /10
Effects (Sound, Animation) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10

Beta's and Projects you want bug checked:

I try and find the bugs and glitches and there are no points.

The rewards are:
90+= Love It and Favourite It
80+= Love It

Last edited by Willpower (2012-10-04 13:25:41)

Borrego6165 · 2012-05-01 11:38:46

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Borrego6165/2500855

Willpower · 2012-05-01 11:43:31

Borrego6165 wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Borrego6165/2500855

On It

Willpower · 2012-05-01 11:59:27

Rayman 4 by Borrego6165

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT!!!

Absolutely amazing game and I can see that you have put masses of effort into this game. Your scripts definitely reflect this, for example your water creats a ghost effect. Very original game (i am a harsh marker!) There is a character that guides you through the game and I also saw there was a walkthrough which means full marks for that section. The graphics are amazing! Only one problem I had and that was remembering the controls because the down arrow is usually to go down and the space button is to shoot. Overall a really fun game! (I loved and Favourited it) Well Done smile

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-01 15:56:08)

GurkinC · 2012-05-01 12:12:29

Can you review Rolling 2, please?

Willpower · 2012-05-01 12:17:07

GurkinC wrote:
Can you review Rolling 2, please?

Sure, unfortunately you posted this just after i turned off my computer ( i am sending this using my ipod) but you will be first on my list for tomorrow!

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-01 12:18:59)

Firedrake969 · 2012-05-01 13:32:34

Would you please review my game, Air Dodge? It is still being worked on, so it may only get about 30.

Willpower · 2012-05-01 15:10:06

Firedrake969 wrote:
Would you please review my game, Air Dodge? It is still being worked on, so it may only get about 30.

I will be happy to, tomorrow, since it is being worked on i might suggest improvement to you.

Yoshiboy · 2012-05-01 15:27:19

Could you take a look at my game beam bouncer?

Willpower · 2012-05-01 15:30:34

Yoshiboy wrote:
Could you take a look at my game beam bouncer?

Sure, Join the queue!! smile

AgentRoop · 2012-05-01 16:53:22

Can you check out my project? It's Space Battle v1.2. I need some feedback so that I can improve the sequel.

Borrego6165 · 2012-05-01 16:59:45

Willpower wrote:
Rayman 4 by Borrego6165

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT!!!

Absolutely amazing game and I can see that you have put masses of effort into this game. Your scripts definitely reflect this, for example your water creats a ghost effect. Very original game (i am a harsh marker!) There is a character that guides you through the game and I also saw there was a walkthrough which means full marks for that section. The graphics are amazing! Only one problem I had and that was remembering the controls because the down arrow is usually to go down and the space button is to shoot. Overall a really fun game! (I loved and Favourited it) Well Done

thanks!

ftf841 · 2012-05-01 17:05:20

[/url]http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ftf841/2463156[url]

Willpower · 2012-05-01 17:06:03

Borrego6165 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Rayman 4 by Borrego6165

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT!!!

Absolutely amazing game and I can see that you have put masses of effort into this game. Your scripts definitely reflect this, for example your water creats a ghost effect. Very original game (i am a harsh marker!) There is a character that guides you through the game and I also saw there was a walkthrough which means full marks for that section. The graphics are amazing! Only one problem I had and that was remembering the controls because the down arrow is usually to go down and the space button is to shoot. Overall a really fun game! (I loved and Favourited it) Well Done
thanks!

No Problem!

AgentRoop · 2012-05-01 17:06:41

ftf841 wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ftf841/2463156

There, i fixed the link. smile

Last edited by AgentRoop (2012-05-01 17:06:50)

tailskirbyyoshifan · 2012-05-01 17:10:32

Here: link to gallery and please review all five animations

Willpower · 2012-05-02 01:27:39

AgentRoop wrote:
ftf841 wrote:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ftf841/2463156
There, i fixed the link.

Thanks

Willpower · 2012-05-02 01:31:02

tailskirbyyoshifan wrote:
Here: link to gallery and please review all five animations

5!?. Looks like I am going to have a busy day today!

Willpower · 2012-05-02 10:59:29

Air Dodge by Firedrake969
Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 5/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 1/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 58/100

OK GAME!!
All in all a good game smile

I like the fact that you control the plane with your mouse however there are no instructions telling you to use the mouse so I started using the arrow keys. Some of the plane graphics are a bit fuzzy but I like the missile design. The monster at the end is a nice surprise (bonus points there) I am not sure what the blue blob in the middle

About the shooting, if you want your plane to shoot follow this demo Here which shows you how to fire. Its quicker than explaining.

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-07 03:36:04)

SoulAlly_Hanna · 2012-05-02 11:25:11

well, here is a test for something imma put in my new game (Jen will be animated and drawn better upon release, along with custom monsters. It was late...) and I would really like some feed back on it.

Willpower · 2012-05-02 11:36:15

SoulAlly_Hanna wrote:
well, here is a test for something imma put in my new game (Jen will be animated and drawn better upon release, along with custom monsters. It was late...) and I would really like some feed back on it.

No problem, though it will probably have to be done tomorrow, 3rd May because I have explained how to help Firedrake969 today, it took me a while to sort out the project!

Last edited by Willpower (2012-05-02 11:36:48)

SoulAlly_Hanna · 2012-05-02 11:39:03

thats ok smile

Willpower · 2012-05-02 11:48:18

Beam Bouncer by Yoshiboy

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 87/100

EXCELLENT GAME!!

At the moment this game is aclose second place! I really love this game and I have given it a love it. I really like the switching between colours using space and you can only jump on that colour. I failed on level 2 so I don't know if you have done this but if you havn't it might be a good idea to make a really hard level where blue bounces on green and vice versa! I havn't seen a game like this before so it gets a 9 on Originality. Well Done smile

Yoshiboy · 2012-05-02 11:57:49

Willpower wrote:
Beam Bouncer by Yoshiboy

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 87/100

EXCELLENT GAME!!

At the moment this game is aclose second place! I really love this game and I have given it a love it. I really like the switching between colours using space and you can only jump on that colour. I failed on level 2 so I don't know if you have done this but if you havn't it might be a good idea to make a really hard level where blue bounces on green and vice versa! I havn't seen a game like this before so it gets a 9 on Originality. Well Done

Thanks! One question, why is it 9/10 original? It was 100% by me. If you see a based on obvious's project, obvious is my test account.

Willpower · 2012-05-02 12:02:41

Scratch Os Beta 2.8 by ftf841

Programming (The Scripts, Any Bugs) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 5/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Instructions (Does The Player Know What To Do?) 5/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy) 8/10

Total 65/100

GOOD GAME!!

I have not looked at an OS on Scratch before but I know they are around so that explains the half marks on Originality. There is a problem with the sounds online and offline, you can not hear any music and in the project notes it says you have music. However i really liked the paint section but I think (i only played this online) that the white and the black pens come out as Green!? and of course it does not turn off as you have said in the comments. I have looked in your scripts and would you just need to add a "pen up" so it becomes "if .=2 (pen up) clear, stop script"???

EXTRA- I have just tried the "pen up" thing on both "if .=2" parts and there is no more pen- see what you think!
Well Done smile
Also did you know you spelt "minutes" wrong as the variable?

Scratch

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