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) Thanks for 'bumping'!#62 2012-04-22 09:32:38
- Borrego6165
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- Registered: 2011-03-10
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Project Reviewing
made some slight adjustments and i don;t wanna come off the top of the leaderboard. surely i can scrape at least a point with the improvements: Don;t forget to assess part 1 of the temple level, where you have to go around this huge rock on a lift and then press a switch!
Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-04-22 09:48:38)
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#63 2012-04-22 09:44:50
#64 2012-04-22 10:26:56
Re: Project Reviewing
GoldRock wrote:
ftf841 wrote:
can you review the os again i added some new things but it only works offline
I'll review both projects - sorry for the delay
My review of 'scratch os beta 2.6' by ftf841:
Graphics: and a half - Not bad at all (a slight improvement)! 
Sound: - I've noticed the sound in the game!
Programming: and a half - Although there are glitches, a good amount of skills are used (another improvement) 
Addictive-ness: and a half - Pretty good!
Originality: and a half - A bit more original than before
Professional-ness: and a half - Another good score and another improvement!
Overall: and a half - A nice OS!
35/55 - a good score !
If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!
P.S. What was your other project?
Last edited by GoldRock (2012-04-22 10:28:55)
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#65 2012-04-22 10:38:47
Re: Project Reviewing
Borrego6165 wrote:
made some slight adjustments and i don;t wanna come off the top of the leaderboard. surely i can scrape at least a point with the improvements: Don;t forget to assess part 1 of the temple level, where you have to go around this huge rock on a lift and then press a switch!
My review of 'Rayman4' (updated) by Borrego6165:
Graphics: Almost perfect!
Sounds: Amazing!
Programming: Outstanding!
Addictive-ness: Great!
Originality: - a good twist on a classic game (an improvement made)!
Professional-ness: and a half - a few very minor problems with costumes and movement, but almost Nintendo standard!
Overall: and a half - a super game all round!!!
50/55 - a mindblowing score !!! Congratulations, your project has been selected as 'mindblowing'! Your project is officially amomgst the best on Scratch! If you ever need help, don't come to me - you're too good!
If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!
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#66 2012-04-22 10:48:44
Re: Project Reviewing
coolscruff wrote:
My review of 'Pac Man V.2' by coolscruff:
Graphics: and a half - good, improved graphics.
Sound: and a half - to expand, try using a few more sound effects.
Programming: and a half - Good (improved)!
Addictive-ness: Pretty addictive!
Originality: - improved originality
Professional-ness: and a half - Fairly professional (improved again).
Overall: and a half - A good game!
32.5/55 - a good game
If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!
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#67 2012-04-22 10:58:36
- Borrego6165
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- Registered: 2011-03-10
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Project Reviewing
i'll add this to my advert thread in fact, what if we did a "2 for one deal" where when people add projects to my thread they get it reviewed by view as part of the service, and when they want a project reviewing on here it will also be added to my advert thread. don;t worry, it will be an offer not a service, therefore not everyone will ask theirs to be reviewed.
as part of the deal, i'll advertise this in the Sponsored by section (right at the top) but of course for it to be a sponsor, you'd have to advertise my thread on here too, otherwise this wouldn't class as a sponsor.
Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!
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#68 2012-04-22 11:05:41
Re: Project Reviewing
Borrego6165 wrote:
i'll add this to my advert thread
as part of the deal, i'll advertise this in the Sponsored by section (right at the top) but of course for it to be a sponsor, you'd have to advertise my thread on here too, otherwise this wouldn't class as a sponsor.
I'll do so, on the condition that you also add the Scratch Olympics thread to the sponsors and I'll put a link to your advert thread there, too. Deal?
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#69 2012-04-22 11:07:31
Re: Project Reviewing
GoldRock wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:
i'll add this to my advert thread
as part of the deal, i'll advertise this in the Sponsored by section (right at the top) but of course for it to be a sponsor, you'd have to advertise my thread on here too, otherwise this wouldn't class as a sponsor.I'll do so, on the condition that you also add the Scratch Olympics thread to the sponsors and I'll put a link to your advert thread there, too. Deal?
Also, please note that this reviewing service only runs on weekends
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#70 2012-04-22 11:08:10
- Borrego6165
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- Registered: 2011-03-10
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Project Reviewing
GoldRock wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:
i'll add this to my advert thread
as part of the deal, i'll advertise this in the Sponsored by section (right at the top) but of course for it to be a sponsor, you'd have to advertise my thread on here too, otherwise this wouldn't class as a sponsor.I'll do so, on the condition that you also add the Scratch Olympics thread to the sponsors and I'll put a link to your advert thread there, too. Deal?
hehe you know how to do business. finally someone with a bit of passion for business. it's a deal!
Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!
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#71 2012-04-22 11:09:20
Re: Project Reviewing
Borrego6165 wrote:
GoldRock wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:
i'll add this to my advert thread
as part of the deal, i'll advertise this in the Sponsored by section (right at the top) but of course for it to be a sponsor, you'd have to advertise my thread on here too, otherwise this wouldn't class as a sponsor.I'll do so, on the condition that you also add the Scratch Olympics thread to the sponsors and I'll put a link to your advert thread there, too. Deal?
hehe you know how to do business. finally someone with a bit of passion for business. it's a deal!
Hehe yes I do So now I'll put the link in to both of my threads!
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#72 2012-04-22 11:30:23
Re: Project Reviewing
GoldRock wrote:
GoldRock wrote:
ftf841 wrote:
can you review the os again i added some new things but it only works offline
I'll review both projects - sorry for the delay
My review of 'scratch os beta 2.6' by ftf841:
Graphics:
Sound:
Programming:
Addictive-ness:
Originality:
Professional-ness:
Overall:
35/55 - a good score
If you have any queries about your review, please reply below. Thanks!
P.S. What was your other project?
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#73 2012-04-22 12:48:27
Re: Project Reviewing
Sponsored by:
Please visit the advertising thread guaranteed to get 1000 views a week: The Scratch Cat's Hideout- with over 250 Projects
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#75 2012-12-10 14:19:16
- ledgerman8
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- Registered: 2009-09-01
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Re: Project Reviewing
could you review this video project: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ledgerman8/2968772
if not, could you review this game: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ledgerman8/2929263
Nintendo- MAKE MARIO PARTY 10!!!!!
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