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#1 2012-04-16 10:54:20
- undefeatedgames
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2011-05-22
- Posts: 1000+
Please help
Hey guys. I've recently posted some poems, stories, essays, and pictures (right now there's only 1 but more are coming soon) on Teen Ink. However, I really need some feedback and for people to rate them. I would prefer if the feedback was posted on the articles themselves, so please post feedback there. You will need a Teen Ink account to post feedback, however.
Articles and pictures of mine:
A Race Through Space
A Discussion Response: Innovations in My Lifetime
The Championship Game
Space Scene
Thanks!
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#2 2012-04-16 11:36:48
#3 2012-04-18 12:41:33
#4 2012-04-18 13:17:51
- Stickman704
- Scratcher
- Registered: 2009-01-31
- Posts: 1000+
Re: Please help
A race through space is good, though I'm not sure about the last 2 lines of stanza 3. It doesn't fit the rhythm of the rest of it. Otherwise it's great. 
Dun dun dun dun dun dun.... dun dun dun dun dun dun...
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