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#51 2012-04-05 19:07:39

veggieman001
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Yellowed newspaper clippings littered the floor, making it difficult to walk without treading on several at a time. Obviously, this room had been sealed off for a reason but Alex didn't realise it until he looked down at his feet to see the legions of army ants. Oh man.


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#52 2012-04-05 20:04:06

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

It's certainly possible, but it would be hard to get any sort of complicated plot going  tongue


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#53 2012-04-05 20:11:28

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

jji7skyline wrote:

It's certainly possible, but it would be hard to get any sort of complicated plot going  tongue

It doesn't need to be complex, it just has to be enough. Several of the ones in this thread have been good examples.


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#54 2012-04-05 22:11:32

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Wickimen wrote:

Lol mine was a joke
banana's was good though

37 words:
The children giggled nervously, not accepting that their hero--their Easter bunny and the meaning of life--did not exist, was a lie, their lives were a lie, they knew this but they refused to see, couldn't...wouldn't...

IN CONTEXT
me:  xD
my mom bought easter eggs at the michaels
when i was like right there
there were little kids in line
said i loudly
"REVEALING"
friend:  what was their reaction hasf-d]p
me:  The children giggled nervously, not accepting that their hero--their Easter bunny and the meaning of life--did not exist, was a lie, their lives were a lie, they knew this but they refused to see, couldn't...wouldn't...
c:
friend:  or
they ignored you.
C:
me:  ...
maybe
friend:  HAHA
SCORE

the friend was me heehee

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#55 2012-04-05 22:19:56

sonatina
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

I could write a horror story under 50 words.

The last man on Earth sat alone in a room when there was a knock on the door.

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#56 2012-04-05 22:21:09

Wickimen
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

sonatina wrote:

I could write a horror story under 50 words.

The last man on Earth sat alone in a room when there was a knock on the door.

You got that from tumblr or somewhere
You told me in homeroom  tongue

ho hum what's this

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#57 2012-04-05 22:28:57

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

I am tries to makes a story nows.

Mr. Sausage Man woke up at 7:30 AM. Then The Burgerlar stole his bananas. "Ha ha! I have stolen your bananas!" Then Mr. Sausage Man cut him in half with the Sausage Sword and took his bananas back.

The End

That's basically Mr. Sausage Man's morning routine. Poor guy never gets to sleep until 10:00 when The Burgerlar's not in jail. What's interesting though is why The Burgerlar's henchman Mr. Beef even puts him back together. I mean, he basically doesn't get any money (Every day after he pays Mr. Beef, The Burgerlar steals the money back), and he can escape whenever he wants.

...Maybe The Burgerlar really is intimidating.  hmm


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#58 2012-04-05 22:47:52

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Once apon a time some stuff happened. and that's the story of something.<It has a plot it is a unknown plot but still>


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#59 2012-04-05 22:53:38

sonatina
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Wickimen wrote:

sonatina wrote:

I could write a horror story under 50 words.

The last man on Earth sat alone in a room when there was a knock on the door.

You got that from tumblr or somewhere
You told me in homeroom  tongue

Oh.
I thought someone made it up and told a guy who told a guy who told a guy who told my sister who told me.
But.
I guess not.
Sobs.

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#60 2012-04-05 22:58:13

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

sonatina wrote:

Wickimen wrote:

sonatina wrote:

I could write a horror story under 50 words.

The last man on Earth sat alone in a room when there was a knock on the door.

You got that from tumblr or somewhere
You told me in homeroom  tongue

Oh.
I thought someone made it up and told a guy who told a guy who told a guy who told my sister who told me.
But.
I guess not.
Sobs.

It's by Someone Fredric(?)
I linked the wikipedia page bahaha


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#61 2012-04-05 23:13:17

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

"I thought I could write a full story in under 50 words. I was right."


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#62 2012-04-06 00:10:18

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Once there was an ugly barnacle. He was soooo ugly that everyone died.

The end!

You knew that was going to happen at some point. It had to.


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#63 2012-04-06 01:47:10

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

soupoftomato wrote:

I'm like a natural at this stuff.
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The man had a sudden raging urge. Soon! Very soon!, he thought, he must release. But oh, he was currently unable and the pain rang throughout him as loud bells ring through town. Then he heard the whistle blow and he left the train quickly.. Finally, he could go pee.

XD


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#64 2012-04-06 04:05:09

NeilWest
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

I met a magical unicorn named Buttercup who was the queen of a magical land, I needed to get back home and asked her if she knew. She took me to a magical portal that would lead me home, then I said goodbye and went through.

49 words.

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#65 2012-04-06 05:01:50

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Maybe...


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#66 2012-04-06 05:13:59

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

As he lay watching TV, he noticed the hundreds of spiders approaching him. "Oh snap", he cried, as they covered his every limb, every nook and cranny. Then, as if nothing ever happened, the spiders scuttled away, leaving nothing but a terrified little boy wondering what the heck just happened.

Stop laughing :'(

(I got the idea from that film I always forget the name of, but I thought it'd be too gross if the boy got killed, so I made him survive instead xD)

It would've been better but I realised it like 55 words or something, so I had to change a few parts :I Now it's exactly 50. ^^

sonatina wrote:

I could write a horror story under 50 words.

The last man on Earth sat alone in a room when there was a knock on the door.

The person knocking was a woman :3

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#67 2012-04-06 06:27:42

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Glancing back over my shoulder, I saw the cops speeding towards me and I ran faster.

16 word story!  big_smile


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#68 2012-04-06 06:55:33

JJROCKER
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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

There was was a guy named veggieman,
Who was best friends with Peter Pan.
Who sat on a lake,
And ate a rake,
And landed in a bucket of san... d.


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#69 2012-04-06 07:45:22

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Once Upon a time there was a wee bit of
pizza sauce on the florr.  He picked it up
and
...
...
...
he had superpowers!  He went to 
destroy the evil villans but...
somthing was wrong!  
He didn't have many!  He lost.  The villans won!  Even tghogh the villins are not awesome, the defeated them.
The End
That was zero words!


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#70 2012-04-06 11:19:18

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

That was 55 words, including "The End"
thatsrighticounted:P


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#71 2012-04-06 11:58:00

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

I scrolled down the forums, reading all the tiny mites of stories that other scratchers wrote. I pause and decide to add one of my own. But I have no ideas. So I write about my lack of ideas. Then I see who made the thread. TDD is back!

49/50 words.


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#72 2012-04-06 12:24:31

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

"I thought I could write a full story in under 50 words. I was right."
Is a full story.


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#73 2012-04-06 13:14:47

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

James07 wrote:

Once Upon a time there was a wee bit of
pizza sauce on the florr.  He picked it up
and
...
...
...
he had superpowers!  He went to 
destroy the evil villans but...
somthing was wrong!  
He didn't have many!  He lost.  The villans won!  Even tghogh the villins are not awesome, the defeated them.
The End
That was zero words!

Putting them in blocks doesn't stop them from being words ._.


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#74 2012-04-06 13:31:02

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

Once there was an ugly barnicle.

He was so ugly that everyone died.

The end.

15 words. Do I win?


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#75 2012-04-06 14:01:20

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Re: Could you write a full story in under 50 words?

The End

2 words. Do i win?


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