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What you wrote is so true! I don't understand why people can think bullying is good or fun...

Geekish wrote:

war with our friends,.

you wrote are, but I think you meant our...

cartooncreator wrote:

LiFaytheGoblin wrote:

What you wrote is so true! I don't understand why people can think bullying is good or fun...

+1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.

lol 

Last edited by LiFaytheGoblin (2012-04-05 10:01:11)

LiFaytheGoblin wrote:

cartooncreator wrote:

LiFaytheGoblin wrote:

What you wrote is so true! I don't understand why people can think bullying is good or fun...

+1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.

lol 

  I was agreeing with you very strongly.

words don't have a big impact on me

Geekish wrote:

The Protest
Remember those horrid days, when World War 2 started, or the Falklands War began? Remember? These were both cruel and horrid events and moments, but do you know what's worse than war? War with our neighbour, war with our friends, war with the people who we find unsympathatic. People who live life similar to us. Yet, we treat them badly. Sometimes we use war for greed and fun, or sometimes as a defence. But, in most cases we use war wrongly. Obviously you cannot avoid bullying, am I correct? At least once in your life you've been picked on, made fun of. And yes, you could say that this is just life but it could change. If we change ourselves, and our personality. Abandon the evilness which causes us to hurt others. But sometimes we cannot resit ourselves. Sometimes it's jealousy. Sometimes it's pain. Sometimes it's because they hurt you in a way that you just need to fight back.
Sticks and stones make break my bones, but words will never hurt me.
That famous little phrase is a lie. Words do hurt, and most of the time words are used for the wrong reasons. I can't guarentee that we can stop bullying altogether but we can try.

Fixed words/grammar are in red.

Overall, it's really good 

werdna123 wrote:

Geekish wrote:

Remember those horrid days, when World War 2 started?

Woah, you were alive back then?

Yeah, are you like, 60, Geekish? D:

Last edited by RedRocker227 (2012-04-05 11:15:32)

Of course you aren't 60. You'd have to be at least 73 to have been alive then.

Geekish wrote:

Well I want to be a writer and I guess I'm a rubbish one, but please correct my spelling and grammar mistakes. (In British-English)

The Protest
Remember those horrid days when World War 2 started; or the Falklands War began? Remember? These were both cruel and horrid events in history, but do you know what's worse than war? War with our neighbour, war with our friends, war with the people who we find unsympathetic. People who live life similarly to us.
Yet, we treat them badly.
Sometimes we use war for greed and fun, sometimes as a defence. But, in most cases we use war wrongly.   Obviously you cannot avoid bullying, am I correct? At least once in your life you've been picked on, made fun of. And yes, you could say that this is just life: but it could change. If we change ourselves, and our personalities. Abandon the evilness which causes us to hurt others. But sometimes we cannot resist ourselves. Sometimes, it's jealousy. Sometimes it's pain. Sometimes it's because they hurt you in a way that means you just need to fight back.
Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.
That famous little phrase is a lie. Words do hurt, and most of the time words are used for the wrong reasons. I can't guarentee that we can stop bullying altogether but we can try.

That was amazing! I just edited it slightly and fixed spelling errors, not sure if it was of any help but I read your writing & just had to help you out. You should definitely become a writer. C:

Geekish wrote:

The_Dancing_Donut wrote:

Geekish wrote:

Well I want to be a writer and I guess I'm a rubbish one, but please correct my spelling and grammar mistakes. (In British-English)

The Protest
Remember those horrid days when World War 2 started; or the Falklands War began? Remember? These were both cruel and horrid events in history, but do you know what's worse than war? War with our neighbour, war with our friends, war with the people who we find unsympathetic. People who live life similarly to us.
Yet, we treat them badly.
Sometimes we use war for greed and fun, sometimes as a defence. But, in most cases we use war wrongly.   Obviously you cannot avoid bullying, am I correct? At least once in your life you've been picked on, made fun of. And yes, you could say that this is just life: but it could change. If we change ourselves, and our personalities. Abandon the evilness which causes us to hurt others. But sometimes we cannot resist ourselves. Sometimes, it's jealousy. Sometimes it's pain. Sometimes it's because they hurt you in a way that means you just need to fight back.
Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.
That famous little phrase is a lie. Words do hurt, and most of the time words are used for the wrong reasons. I can't guarentee that we can stop bullying altogether but we can try.

That was amazing! I just edited it slightly and fixed spelling errors, not sure if it was of any help but I read your writing & just had to help you out. You should definitely become a writer. C:

SOOOOOOOOO doubt thats gonna happen c:

You can do anything if you try! Except staple water to a tree, but that's beside the point! Just keep writing, you're great at it. ^^

If you stapled thousands of staples into a sort of bowl shape sticking out of the tree you might be able to keep water in it.

The_Dancing_Donut wrote:

werdna123 wrote:

If you stapled thousands of staples into a sort of bowl shape sticking out of the tree you might be able to keep water in it.

;n; Y U KILL MAH FUNNY?

XD But yesh, I've tried. I also tried running u an escalator in a packed department store. Good times.

I've only been back 24 minutes & I'm already derailing topics :C

To keep this ontopic; are you going to add more to the writing, Geekish?~

Uhh, well I was going to post a story on here but didn't have much confidence. and Im actually quitting the forums..

soupoftomato wrote:

Bullying is a problem, but I think anyone with half of a brain is pretty much aware of that.

It can never be considered a crime however, and a true, fair, working solution to it will be completely impossible.

Bullying is illegal where I live.