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I've been working on an AdventureQuest Worlds fan story that I would love to post on Scratch as, maybe, an animation. Can you look at what I have so far and let me know what you think? I cut out the introduction to save time.



Chapter 1

Jen walked down the street from Solo's house. The night was warm and it was still light out. If she really tried, she could pretend she was in Battleon on a warm summers evening. How she wished she could be that lucky. If only something like Lore could be real.
But, this was Earth. Lore was but a dream for AQWorlds and DragonFable fans. Jen loved to dream.

Warlic's eyes fell on his old friend. SoulAlly Hanna lay before him.
"Drakath did this..." He muttered to Nythera. "Only he could do this to some one who trusted him."
"Hanna trusted that... that thing?" Nythera asked, eyes widening. "After all he has done?"
"Yes..." Warlic said, eyes still on Hanna. "And so she should. Drakath was a friend to her, once."
"But not now." Cysero pointed out. "He had betrayed her. And all of Lore."
"None worse then Gravelyn and The Shadowsyth." Warlic agreed.
"But, how?" Nythera asked. "He has been a pain for years! I even remember a time where The Hero had to work with Gravelyn's farther to stop him! How could that be a friend to Hanna?"
Warlic looked at Nythera, kindly. "She has an... interesting definition of friends." Was all he said.
"And what now?" Alina spoke up. "Hanna had no children. No one to become the new Dark Soul."
"And we all know Artix won't use his darkness spells if we payed him." Cysero nodded.
Warlic looked at his friend as if he had never expected that response. "Cysero. You know about Earth don't you? About The Girl?"
"I do not, Warlic. I really do not." Cysero said, confused.
"She didn't tell you? Hmm..." He turned to Nythera. "Hanna trusted you most of all. Surly you know something about it?"
Nythera shook her head.
"She didn't tell you anything about it?" Warlic tried to clarify.
"Nothing." Nythera sounded a little angry having to repeat herself.
"That doesn't make any sense..." Warlic said to himself. "Why wouldn't she tell them what she told me?"

Chapter 2

Warlic brushed his graying wight hair out of his eyes. Only one thing left for him to do now. He must find this girl that Hanna had told him about.
Sure, it would mean leaving Lore for a time, but he had to give the heros of Lore some time to themselves. It was better to let those who would be heros, be heros. He had said this before, but really truly understood it now he stood at the doorway to a new land. It was harder then he knew, to leave his home land.