Hello, fellow Scratchers! Some of you may know I have been working on a book saga called Jen and Deathoc (JaD) and will be turning it into a game. Well, at the following project, you can see the prologue for JaD book one!
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/SoulAlly_Hanna/2389757
Not all of you will understand it at first, I know, for most people don't. But, if some of you have played DragonFable's Ravenloss saga, you may understand a little bit about what I am trying to get at. I am looking for feed-back from both people who know what I'm talking about, and people who don't. Some things I really want to know are:
(DF Players) Did I get the true feelings of a ChaosWeaver towards a SoulWeaver at the start of the book? (Up to your own interpretation, I must say)
(Every one) Did you understand it so far? At all?
(Every one) What do you think I should improve on before I continue with the JaD line?
(DF Players) How do you think Jen's interaction with Warlic will go? (So I can use your input in the books/games!) Why do you think this?
And feel free to ask questions of your own if you don't understand anything! Thank you for reading and commenting!
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