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#1 2012-03-04 16:24:23

imnotbob
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My song

It's okay

"Invisible"
An original song (that doesn't rhyme).

Every word I say
Goes unheard
Everything I do
Goes unseen
I'm layin' in the dirt
Screamin' out for help
As I see everybody run by...

(chorus)Why am I invisible?
All I want to do is help
Why does nobody listen?
All I'm tryin' to do is  change the world

You're just sittin' there
Not carin' 'bout a thing
Nothin' matters 'til it happens to you
Nothin' matters 'til it happens to you

Open your eyes!
The world will waste away
Open your eyes!
One voice can't be heard over 8 billion more

(chorus)

One voice can change the world they say,
But that's been proved untrue
Why do you listen to lies?
Why not hear and speak the truth?

Look me in the eyes and say
You don't care
Look me in the eyes and say
You don't care

(chorus)

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#2 2012-03-04 16:29:04

bananaman99
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Re: My song

I read this and immediately headed for my guitar to write music for it  lol

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#3 2012-03-04 16:30:12

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Re: My song

Really? Thanks  smile
Would you mind posting the music in a project (preferably recorded  tongue )

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#4 2012-03-04 16:35:57

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Re: My song

interesting

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#5 2012-03-04 16:37:32

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Re: My song

How were you imagining this as sounding like? because my music was pretty rock/metal-ish  tongue

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#6 2012-03-04 16:50:32

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Re: My song

Thanks, veggieman  smile

Hmm, I was thinking it could be kind of soft, and get progressively louder. The chorus would be loud, though.

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#7 2012-03-04 16:51:39

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Re: My song

Hmm, i could manage that  smile

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#8 2012-03-04 17:05:14

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Re: My song

Cool, thanks  smile

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#9 2012-03-04 17:13:44

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Re: My song

Could you post a project of you singing (or at least humming) this? It'd make my life easier  tongue

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#10 2012-03-04 17:21:09

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Re: My song

I don't have any recording software  sad
I could probably post the baritone notes that would best fit the tune
But baritone =/= guitar

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#11 2012-03-04 17:23:39

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Re: My song

I dont even know how to read baritone music anyway  tongue  guess I'll just wing it

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#12 2012-03-04 17:25:40

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Re: My song

I figured  tongue

Fair enough  tongue
If you want to you can sing it too

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#13 2012-03-04 17:55:40

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Re: My song

Awesome  big_smile

Why

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#14 2012-03-04 17:59:20

imnotbob
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Re: My song

Thanks!  big_smile

It's from my heart, y'know.

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#15 2012-03-04 19:28:57

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Re: My song

What tune are you supposed to sing it to?

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#16 2012-03-04 19:45:25

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Re: My song

The chorus reminds me of a song.

I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!  big_smile

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#17 2012-03-04 20:15:55

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Re: My song

I've decided to convert it to a full on rock song, since that's all I can play  tongue  if you like Nickelback, you'll like the direction this is headed.

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#18 2012-03-04 20:32:27

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Re: My song

Oh OK  tongue

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#19 2012-03-04 21:46:59

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Re: My song

It doesn't have to rhyme, but the metre seems a bit weird.

I'm glad to think that the community will always be kind and helpful, the language will always be a fun and easy way to be introduced into programming, the motto will always be: Imagine, Program, Share - Nomolos

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#20 2012-03-04 22:15:23

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Re: My song

This is really good!  big_smile  seriously, I can't wait 'till it has a tune to it!  big_smile 
My favorite part is probably "(chorus)Why am I invisible?
All I want to do is help
Why does nobody listen?
All I'm tryin' to do is  change the world"

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#21 2012-03-04 22:16:09

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Re: My song

What's the tune

I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!  big_smile

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#22 2012-03-04 22:23:50

imnotbob
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Re: My song

Do you mean to ask if it's to the tune of a song?

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#23 2012-03-04 22:26:15

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Re: My song

i imagine it with a tune similar to "your imaginary friend" by lemon demon

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#24 2012-03-04 22:34:49

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Re: My song

imnotbob wrote:

Do you mean to ask if it's to the tune of a song?

No, what's it's tune.

It doesn't have to be to another song.

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#25 2012-03-04 22:41:42

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Re: My song

imnotbob wrote:

Do you mean to ask if it's to the tune of a song?

I mean, what's the music you sing it too...

Without music, it's just a poem :3

I don't know why you say goodbye, I say hello!  big_smile

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