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#1 2012-02-08 11:05:33
- undefeatedgames
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Outer Space Poem
Here it is so far: Clicky!
What do you think?
Last edited by undefeatedgames (2012-02-08 12:05:34)
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#2 2012-02-08 11:15:05
- RedRocker227
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Re: Outer Space Poem
It doesn't link me to a poem...
Why
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#3 2012-02-08 11:37:53
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#5 2012-02-08 11:52:13
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Re: Outer Space Poem
This is such a poem.
Well if you wanted honesty, that's all you had to say. I never want to let you down or have you go, it's better off this way.
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#6 2012-02-08 12:04:46
- RedRocker227
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Re: Outer Space Poem
veggieman001 wrote:
This appears to be an essay
This .-.
Why
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#7 2012-02-08 12:05:02
- undefeatedgames
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Re: Outer Space Poem
Arggh!!!! NOT AGAIN!!!!!
*Bangs head on table*
Try now.
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#8 2012-02-08 12:07:10
- RedRocker227
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Re: Outer Space Poem
At last 
The poem's good. I thought it flowed really well 
Why
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#9 2012-02-08 12:08:51
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Re: Outer Space Poem
RedRocker227 wrote:
At last
The poem's good. I thought it flowed really well
Thanks 
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#11 2012-02-08 12:13:37
- undefeatedgames
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Re: Outer Space Poem
veggieman001 wrote:
I like this
Thanks
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#14 2012-02-08 15:26:25
- undefeatedgames
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Re: Outer Space Poem
bump bump bump
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#15 2012-02-10 10:04:28
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Re: Outer Space Poem
bump!
any more advice?
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#16 2012-02-10 10:17:59
- cartooncreator
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Re: Outer Space Poem
Awesome! I think it transitioned really well from line to line.
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