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undefeatedgames · 2012-02-05 20:22:52

Here's my Kepler telescope essay so far. Can you give me tips as I write?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wlH … FKwjc/edit

Freakish · 2012-02-05 20:24:04

No sorry, it's your homework, not ours. I think you should try on your own before asking us. smile

undefeatedgames · 2012-02-05 20:30:42

Freakish wrote:
No sorry, it's your homework, not ours. I think you should try on your own before asking us.

Actually it's not homework.

undefeatedgames · 2012-02-05 20:33:12

I'm looking for tips, like in grammar.

HiddenPerson · 2012-02-05 20:46:09

If it's not for school, is it just for fun?

I always like looking at stars and planets, using a tiny telescope that I own.

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luiysia · 2012-02-05 20:53:35

HiddenPerson wrote:
If it's not for school, is it just for fun?

I always like looking at stars and planets, using a tiny telescope that I own.

I have this telescope, but we only ever thought to get it out in the daytime so I mostly used it to look at faraway trees. hmm

Freakish · 2012-02-05 20:54:22

undefeatedgames wrote:
Freakish wrote:
No sorry, it's your homework, not ours. I think you should try on your own before asking us.
Actually it's not homework.

For fun? It's still your work, let it be homework or anything.

undefeatedgames · 2012-02-05 21:23:38

Freakish wrote:
undefeatedgames wrote:
Freakish wrote:
No sorry, it's your homework, not ours. I think you should try on your own before asking us.
Actually it's not homework.
For fun? It's still your work, let it be homework or anything.

Yeah. I'm just looking for tips. I never copy word for word. Otherwise it wouldn't be original. Your ideas give me original, new ideas. That's how I work.

undefeatedgames · 2012-02-06 10:32:34

Okay, I asked my science teacher and she loved it!

undefeatedgames · 2012-02-06 17:23:16

bump
I am making tons of edits

HiddenPerson · 2012-02-06 19:38:47

luiysia wrote:
HiddenPerson wrote:
If it's not for school, is it just for fun?

I always like looking at stars and planets, using a tiny telescope that I own.
I have this telescope, but we only ever thought to get it out in the daytime so I mostly used it to look at faraway trees.

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