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(Quick Note: Deku, Goron, and Zora species stay the same.)
Here it is.
Tails' Tales: Majora's Mask
I actually think that this will be a long FanFic. Negative Comments accepted
In this FanFic, Tails is kinda jealous that everyone has a Chao based on them, so he sets out to find a Chao based on himself. During his search, he comes across a mischievous hedgehog wearing a mask. He leads Tails into an alternate world beyond Mobius. Once there The Hedgehog turns Tails into a Deku Scrub! This takes Tails on a wild adventure throughout an opposite of Mobius as he meets new friends and new enemies!
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Rated K, Adventure & Humor, Chapters: 0, Tails
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Prolouge: ChaoTracker
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Main Characters Introduced:
Tails - Link
Anope - Epona
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It was a bright, sunny day on Mobius. Sonic, Tails, Amy, and Knuckles were at the Chao Farming Facility.
"This Chao looks like me!" Amy squealed with delight.
"And this one looks like me!" Sonic said, pointing at the Chao in front of him.
"And that one looks like you, Knuckles!" Tails exclaimed, pointing at the Chao in front of Knuckles.
Knuckles hesitated, and sighed.
"Which one looks like me?" Tails asked. The others looked around, trying to find a special bred Chao with the twin-tails that Tails had.
"I don't think there is one, buddy," Sonic sighed.
Tails decided to walk outside, followed by Sonic.
"Tails, I'm heading out to run in the forest. Want to come?" He asked. Tails sighed.
"No thanks. Maybe later," Tails said. "Besides, I want to see if I can find a Chao that looks like me."
Sonic shrugged, and dashed off.
Tails could just picture it. A Chao with Two Tails running with him. Everyone had a Chao. But him. He felt embarresed by it. He was even bullied by Shadow on occasion, just for not having a Chao. Tails thought about it.
{FlashBack}
He was walking through the field, when he saw Shadow walking up to him. He noticed a Chao following him, with the same look as Shadow. Tails walked over.
"Hey Shadow," Tails said casually.
He was surprised to get pushed down by Shadow. He landed on his back with a thud.
"Why talk to me? You don't have a Chao resembling you in your current lifeform of a body. Pathetic," Shadow said, walking off.
Tails was embaressed. He didn't even know what to think of it.
{End FlashBack}
Tails walked back to his workshop, and went behind it, and went inside the stable, and saw his pure, white horse, Anope. He took her out of the stable, and got on her.
"Alright, Anope. Let's go find a chao that looks like me!" He said with glee, and he rode off into the woods.
{End of Prolouge}
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Yay! Here is the Prolouge to Tails' Tales: Majora's Mask! It really was fun to right this. Also, Anope is a character made up by me. Guess why she is named Anope! It has to do with Epona's name!
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Chapter One: The Mysterious Masked Hedgehog
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Main Characters Introduced:
??? - Skull Kid
Amy Chao - Tatl
Sonic Chao - Tael
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{Coming Soon!}
Last edited by jakeemma (2012-02-04 20:11:33)
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A topic about something that doesn't exist?
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You will never improve if you don't like negative comments.
Don't use the forums just as a place for reassurance, use it to get better.
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jakeemma wrote:
puppetadventurer wrote:
A topic about something that doesn't exist?
I don't know what you mean. I just don't feel like writing the Prolouge right now.
hopeless ._.
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im sorry but this is really poorly written
unless its a script otherwise its ok
well as ok as a sonic fanfic can be
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bananaman114 wrote:
im sorry but this is really poorly written
unless its a script otherwise its ok
well as ok as a sonic fanfic can be
Thanks, I guess... I'm only a beginner, and because Scratch is a Kid-friendly Website, I can't write that well.
Why do I never get good reviews? I write as much as I wish.
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I think that this looks very nice so far! I can understand why it is hard to do most of this. But I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end!
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well i think it sounds ridiculous but whatever
personally if i was writing it i wouldnt use tails, but instead
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hmm
robotnik!
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777w wrote:
well i think it sounds ridiculous but whatever
personally if i was writing it i wouldnt use tails, but instead
uh
hmm
robotnik!
Robotnick as the protagonist? I'm sorry, but no.
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jakeemma wrote:
777w wrote:
well i think it sounds ridiculous but whatever
personally if i was writing it i wouldnt use tails, but instead
uh
hmm
robotnik!Robotnick as the protagonist? I'm sorry, but no.
aww come on
robotnik is like the best sonic character there is
but then again what makes him awesome is his big badmama bad guy role
okay yea whatever
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