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jakeemma wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

Well, I don't do it that way. 

It doesn't provide a clear view of who is currently speaking. It's annoying and detracting from the storytelling.

And the "terrible' was to pull emotional weight into it and make you feel guilt into fixing it. >

I can't fix it. (No, I literally can't, because I'm typing on my iPod.) By the way, there is no way people can make me feel guilty to change stuff.

I like my fanfics the way they are, and you can't make me change them. 

It's kinda hard to tell who is speaking when you don't start a new paragraph when talking.
I support soupoftomato. And why type on your iPod? Don't you have a computer?

jakeemma wrote:

maxdoss wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

I can't fix it. (No, I literally can't, because I'm typing on my iPod.) By the way, there is no way people can make me feel guilty to change stuff.

I like my fanfics the way they are, and you can't make me change them. 

It's kinda hard to tell who is speaking when you don't start a new paragraph when talking.
I support soupoftomato. And why type on your iPod? Don't you have a computer?

I do, and I would use it, but were I am right now, it's 10:39 at night. My dad is asleep, but I would probably get caught by my mom. 

Do it in the morning.

Bump.

Bump.

Bump.

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

maxdoss wrote:

Do it in the morning.

I got school, but I'll try.

Do you not have time after school? Geesh :I

Also the last 5 posts shouldn't be bumps. The last two posts shouldn't be bumps.

I actually have homework, and after homework I usually play Ocarina of Time or Twilight Princess. Plus I work on Sonic comics to practice with my upcoming Manga.

So no time. And I don't like to really stop playing, or Manga-ing. 

Last edited by jakeemma (2012-02-03 19:14:14)

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

Do you not have time after school? Geesh :I

Also the last 5 posts shouldn't be bumps. The last two posts shouldn't be bumps.

I actually have homework, and after homework I usually play Ocarina of Time or Twilight Princess. Plus I work on Sonic comics to practice with my upcoming Manga.

a) We all do
b) If this matters enough to you, you'll leave those games alone for a bit. The story's short anyways
c) I don't think this story could make a manga...

I like the story the way it is! I really just still want to Play Wii and draw Manga's! I like this Fanfic just how it has always been!

I'm not really liking most of your tone. I just happen to be writing Fanfics, but instead of reviews, I get stupid spam! How do you think I feel? If you want this changed, then you'll have to write your own version! I'll never change this! 

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

a) We all do
b) If this matters enough to you, you'll leave those games alone for a bit. The story's short anyways
c) I don't think this story could make a manga...

I like the story the way it is! I really just still want to Play Wii and draw Manga's! I like this Fanfic just how it has always been!

I'm not really liking most of your tone. I just happen to be writing Fanfics, but instead of reviews, I get stupid spam! How do you think I feel? If you want this changed, then you'll have to write your own version! I'll never change this! 

All I said was the story's short and if writing it mattered that much to you, you would have put down the games a bit.

You don't know how I'm talking in real life. What if I wasn't saying it in a rude way, but in a nice tone instead? And this isn't spam. How is this spam? This is spam. And how do you think I feel? Do you even know I have a mental disease? It's called chronic depression.
I never said you had to change the story. I just don't think a short fan-fic would make a   good manga. Not to mention Sonic is copyrighted.

So, so, so sorry for expressing my opinions!

Was the link to canned meat intentional?

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

a) We all do
b) If this matters enough to you, you'll leave those games alone for a bit. The story's short anyways
c) I don't think this story could make a manga...

I like the story the way it is! I really just still want to Play Wii and draw Manga's! I like this Fanfic just how it has always been!

I'm not really liking most of your tone. I just happen to be writing Fanfics, but instead of reviews, I get stupid spam! How do you think I feel? If you want this changed, then you'll have to write your own version! I'll never change this! 

All I said was the story's short and if writing it mattered that much to you, you would have put down the games a bit.

You don't know how I'm talking in real life. What if I wasn't saying it in a rude way, but in a nice tone instead? And this isn't spam. How is this spam? This is spam. And how do you think I feel? Do you even know I have a mental disease? It's called chronic depression.
I never said you had to change the story. I just don't think a short fan-fic would make a   good manga. Not to mention Sonic is copyrighted.

So, so, so sorry for expressing my opinions!

... No, it's my fault. I did not know you had chronic depression. I was being really rude on that other post. Also, it's not spam, but from now on, I would just like reviews and opinions, and not moving the topic or questions or editing or stuff like that.


Once again, it's my fault, and I'm sorry.

PS It's actually just a Fanga (Fanga = Fan Manga)

Also, to make it up to you, I'll embarress myself: I'm truthfully dressed like Link, but instead of a hat, I'm wearing Underwear on my head. Just for the heck of it. 

Last edited by jakeemma (2012-02-03 19:52:33)

jakeemma wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

I like the story the way it is! I really just still want to Play Wii and draw Manga's! I like this Fanfic just how it has always been!

I'm not really liking most of your tone. I just happen to be writing Fanfics, but instead of reviews, I get stupid spam! How do you think I feel? If you want this changed, then you'll have to write your own version! I'll never change this! 

All I said was the story's short and if writing it mattered that much to you, you would have put down the games a bit.

You don't know how I'm talking in real life. What if I wasn't saying it in a rude way, but in a nice tone instead? And this isn't spam. How is this spam? This is spam. And how do you think I feel? Do you even know I have a mental disease? It's called chronic depression.
I never said you had to change the story. I just don't think a short fan-fic would make a   good manga. Not to mention Sonic is copyrighted.

So, so, so sorry for expressing my opinions!

... No, it's my fault. I did not know you had chronic depression. I was being really rude on that other post. Also, it's not spam, but from now on, I would just like reviews and opinions, and not moving the topic or questions or editing or stuff like that.


Once again, it's my fault, and I'm sorry.

PS It's actually just a Fanga (Fanga = Fan Manga)

Also, to make it up to you, I'll embarress myself: I'm truthfully dressed like Link, but instead of a hat, I'm wearing Underwear on my head. Just for the heck of it. 

It's alright. I overreact a bit too often.  All right, fair enough. I can see how that gets annoying.

P.S. Oh. I haven't heard of fangas.

, you didn't need to do that.

jakeemma wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

... No, it's my fault. I did not know you had chronic depression. I was being really rude on that other post. Also, it's not spam, but from now on, I would just like reviews and opinions, and not moving the topic or questions or editing or stuff like that.


Once again, it's my fault, and I'm sorry.

PS It's actually just a Fanga (Fanga = Fan Manga)

Also, to make it up to you, I'll embarress myself: I'm truthfully dressed like Link, but instead of a hat, I'm wearing Underwear on my head. Just for the heck of it. 

It's alright. I overreact a bit too often.  All right, fair enough. I can see how that gets annoying.

P.S. Oh. I haven't heard of fangas.

, you didn't need to do that.

Fanga is a word I made up.

PS Forget I embarressed myself, and don't tell anyone.

it's on a public internet forum :S

jakeemma wrote:

brettman98 wrote:

jakeemma wrote:

Fanga is a word I made up.

PS Forget I embarressed myself, and don't tell anyone.

it's on a public internet forum :S

Eh, no regrets.

I wouldnt regret that, you were being humble and apologizing to bob :]