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#26 2012-01-23 05:18:37

PlutoIsHades
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Registered: 2010-10-18
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Re: my really really really short stories

imnotbob wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

imnotbob wrote:


A plot consists of a beginning, middle, end, main character, and a setting.

They're really there, if you look closely.  Examine it.  Draw as much out of those four sentences as you can.  You'll see.

Nah I don't see it
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Okay, let me focus on "Thieves".
Main Characters - the two thieves
Setting: Outside a building
Beginning - they go up to the building, looking for something
Middle - they enter the building
End - police chase them and they run away.
See?


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#27 2012-01-23 07:32:03

777w
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Re: my really really really short stories

its all nonsensical to me

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#28 2012-01-23 07:33:17

SpaceManMike
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Registered: 2008-02-09
Posts: 100+

Re: my really really really short stories

shiguy101 wrote:

Magic

As George put on the hat and sat on the stool, he heard a small voice in his head.
"Which one?" the voice said.
Sweat was trickling down George's forehead
"Maybe this one..."
George wanted it to hurry up and pick a house.
"No, that won't do."
George hated being the center of attention.
"I know! It will be..."
Yes... thought George, who was on the edge of the stool.
"RAVENCLAW!"shouted the Sorting Hat

what do you think of them?

This post tastes of win.


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#29 2012-01-24 15:33:36

shiguy101
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Registered: 2010-11-17
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Re: my really really really short stories

SpaceManMike wrote:

shiguy101 wrote:

Magic

As George put on the hat and sat on the stool, he heard a small voice in his head.
"Which one?" the voice said.
Sweat was trickling down George's forehead
"Maybe this one..."
George wanted it to hurry up and pick a house.
"No, that won't do."
George hated being the center of attention.
"I know! It will be..."
Yes... thought George, who was on the edge of the stool.
"RAVENCLAW!"shouted the Sorting Hat

what do you think of them?

This post tastes of win.

thanx

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#30 2012-01-24 15:36:26

fungirl123
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Registered: 2011-10-09
Posts: 1000+

Re: my really really really short stories

ProgrammingPro01 wrote:

Want to hear my longest and best one? Ok, here I go!

The best word in the world
"Hi."
"Hi."
The end.

Simply wonderful.


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#31 2012-01-24 15:43:50

RedRocker227
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Registered: 2011-10-26
Posts: 1000+

Re: my really really really short stories

fungirl123 wrote:

ProgrammingPro01 wrote:

Want to hear my longest and best one? Ok, here I go!

The best word in the world
"Hi."
"Hi."
The end.

Simply wonderful.

The man in that picture freaks me out.


Why

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#32 2012-01-24 15:46:45

fungirl123
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Registered: 2011-10-09
Posts: 1000+

Re: my really really really short stories

RedRocker227 wrote:

fungirl123 wrote:

ProgrammingPro01 wrote:

Want to hear my longest and best one? Ok, here I go!

Simply wonderful.

The man in that picture freaks me out.

Yeah
XD
But it's funny


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