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PlutoIsHades wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

But redundancy gets annoying.  Especially in the first paragraph. "Agh, this guy is too redundant and annoying.  I don't want to read a whole story like this," even if it's not the whole story.

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I liked the style, for humorous purposes.

Well, I'm more of a minimalist.
That's why I find so much redundancy annoying.

I'm more of a person with a sense of humor
who doesn't give two turds about the proper way to
write or whatever.

PlutoIsHades wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

Well, I'm more of a minimalist.
That's why I find so much redundancy annoying.

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I'm more of a person with a sense of humor
who doesn't give two turds about the proper way to
write or whatever.

I'm not saying it's improper to write that way, I'm saying that it gives a negative first impression of the story.

And your code-writing is getting really annoying.

Unless I forget or make a mistake in trying
to new-line, I don't see how it affects you. 

And it doesn't really leave a negative first
impression. It just establishes that this is
not a serious story, honestly.

PlutoIsHades wrote:

soupoftomato wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

I'm not saying it's improper to write that way, I'm saying that it gives a negative first impression of the story.

And your code-writing is getting really annoying.

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Unless I forget or make a mistake in trying
to new-line, I don't see how it affects you. 

And it doesn't really leave a negative first
impression. It just establishes that this is
not a serious story, honestly.

*facepalm*
Well, I'M SORRY for having the opinion that things can be annoying!

Well if you can't back up your opinion, why bother stating it???

PlutoIsHades wrote:

brettman98 wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

*facepalm*
Well, I'M SORRY for having the opinion that things can be annoying!

Well if you can't back up your opinion, why bother stating it???

*EPIC FACEPALM*
The code is annoying because it seems like it's separating the question/statement and response.
I believe I may be slightly OCD, so that might be part of why I find separation that like very annoying.

I don't find it annoying.
But your EPIC FACEPALM!s are annoying, because you are implying that I'm stupid
and that you are better than me,
and that makes you seem like you are very full of yourself
which i'm sure you really aren't :]

PlutoIsHades wrote:

brettman98 wrote:

PlutoIsHades wrote:

*EPIC FACEPALM*
The code is annoying because it seems like it's separating the question/statement and response.
I believe I may be slightly OCD, so that might be part of why I find separation that like very annoying.

I don't find it annoying.
But your EPIC FACEPALM!s are annoying, because you are implying that I'm stupid
and that you are better than me,
and that makes you seem like you are very full of yourself
which i'm sure you really aren't :]

Well, I'm sorry about the facepalms.  You're a very smart and nice guy. 
I just think that it goes without saying that people get annoyed.

quite possibly, but i find the font nice and easy to read. and orderly.
so it's up to soup to do what he wants :]

soupoftomato wrote:

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You need to learn about accepting differences!
:(

Yes. If you dont like it, fine. Give feedback and dont come back.