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Garr8 · 2012-01-18 21:30:51

Here's the story, it is set on our Earth in the year 2100 A.D. The world is ruled by a corrupt fascist government and the main character organizes a global rebellion to overthrow it. As a result, another World War begins. Tell me what u think of this idea and what u would like to see or expect in it,

rodentqween9 · 2012-01-18 21:33:12

that sounds really interesting! big_smile
but remember to also put alot of thought in the characters and script as well smile
also you probably shouldn't post too much about it online, or else someone might take you idea ;^^ it happened to one of my siblings once ;^^

soupoftomato · 2012-01-18 21:33:46

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Over-cliche'd third world war stuck in 
an over-cliche'd futuristic seetting
with an over-cliche'd government system
with an over-cliche'd rebellion.

puppetadventurer · 2012-01-18 21:36:09

Kinda like this?

Garr8 · 2012-01-18 21:38:24

soupoftomato wrote:

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Over-cliche'd third world war stuck in 
an over-cliche'd futuristic seetting
with an over-cliche'd government system
with an over-cliche'd rebellion.

actually its a fourth world war.

luiysia · 2012-01-18 21:38:43

Well, it's been done a lot but a REALLY good writer should be able to introduce some kind of twist to make it not dumb.

ImagineIt · 2012-01-18 21:39:06

rodentqween9 wrote:
that sounds really interesting!
but remember to also put alot of thought in the characters and script as well
also you probably shouldn't post too much about it online, or else someone might take your idea ;^^

Garr8 · 2012-01-18 21:39:51

thats why i make the dictator turn out to be an extreterrestrial disguised as a human. Also the protoagonist dies at age 26 by the serie's end

soupoftomato · 2012-01-18 21:40:08

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If I were writing this, society would have
collapsed and the war would actually be a very
primitive one that is survival based.

AnimeCreatorArtist · 2012-01-18 22:52:05

That could actually be interesting, but you need to put in a lot of detail, side-humor, and emotion to make it really interesting. big_smile

MrMokey · 2012-01-18 22:53:31

Garr8 wrote:
thats why i make the dictator turn out to be an extreterrestrial disguised as a human. Also the protoagonist dies at age 26 by the serie's end

Spoilers melody pond.

maxskywalker · 2012-01-19 10:57:15

It might have been good, but the general idea is getting REALLY OLD.

AnimeCreatorArtist · 2012-01-19 16:10:58

Not the most original idea. However, you could probably make it work.

Garr8 · 2012-01-19 16:18:04

what are some twists i could do?

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