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hey _meow_  erz!!!! herez the 1st EVER UPDATE 4 thiz seriez!! XD YAYZ!!*.* theme song 4 thiz seriez= 4 the luv of a daughter by demi lovato.. XD *.* cnt wait till epi 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD *.*

Here I'ma try to fix it:

In a world where angels aren't born with wings, one angel IS born with wings! Her wings disappear after a while, but that doesn't change ANYTHING! She's STILL kept away in hiding. She was born with powers that aren't like anything anybody has EVER seen! She is destined for greatness. There's a world outside the walls of the temple/castle/sancutary where she lives... one that's in the sky! But she has NO IDEA it even EXISTS until she escapes through a window! She can't really fly like everybody else, but she didn't have to worry about that back at the castle/temple/sanctuary where she glided around to get to places. Now she has to figure out how to stay in the air & get around. She's just entered a strange, weird, and DANGEROUS world, but she doesn't know that yet [was putting the "e" there really so hard you just didn't do it? -.-].

Hey, *insert Scratch Cat thing here *ers! Here's the 1st EVER update for this series! The theme song for this series is going to be  "For the Love of a Daughter" by Demi Lovato. Can't wait until episode one!

I DID IT
:DDDDDDD


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Last edited by imnotbob (2012-01-06 22:38:36)

Did anybody read my translations?

imnotbob wrote:

MrMokey wrote:

imnotbob wrote:

Did anybody read my translations?

I will only read them if they are translated into scratch blocks. I better get a challenge accepted

Challenge denied.
lol

you have a few stray zeds in your translations
Lol 

Hey folks, let's try and be supportive.  It was good of you to point out that more people would enjoy the story if they could understand it better - now let's lay off the grammar remarks.

k pplz.. just wonderin.. y r ALL of u EVEN postin on hur... thiz iz suppossed 2 b 4 pplz who LIKE my seriez,fanz of it, pplz who wtch it, pplz who wnt 2 knw MORE bout it, & pplz IN IT!! XD *.*  btw.. UPDATE!! thnkin bout change'n theme sng 2 skyscraper by demi lovato or my immortal by evanesance

UPDATE!!!!!! hey scrtch! guess wht?!  NOW lookin 4 pplz 2 JOIN thiz seriez!! XD if u wnt 2 join let meh knw by cmmntin on 1 of my PROJZ... NOT HUR!! so tht way i'll nw sooner!! XD *.*

Wickimen wrote:

Angels are... often depicted as messengers of God in the Hebrew and Christian Bibles and the Quran. The term "angel" has also been expanded to... spiritual beings found in many other religious traditions. Other roles of angels include protecting and guiding human beings ...

And some people think angels are the spirits of deceased people; so theoretically, aren't all angels born without wings?

This

@ag: o_o

Can I help you with your grammar?

Girl, your spelling -- is SO Off. Copy and paste this link onto your toolbar, please:

http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l499/CheckItNow12/e850f5f3-d288-42d5-88c2-b08ac170de711.jpg

Although, the series sounds interestings! I'll see it when you post it.

Just remember this grammar checking site

P.S. Think before you post. If you don't know what I'm talking about read what's down below.

imnotbob wrote:

MoxieRoxx wrote:

Ok people.. just wondering.. why are all of you EVEN posting here? This iz supposed to be for people who LIKE my series,fans of it, people who watch it, people who want 2 know MORE about it, & people IN IT!! XD *.*  btw.. UPDATE!! thinking about changing theme song 2 skyscraper by demi lovato or my immortal by evanesance

lol
How can we like it
It's not even up