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Animeboy975 · 2012-01-10 19:55:23

Yes. If you are asking, i would really like to study Japan. I found some things so far. I am riting events from my research in this story.

CHAPTER 1: Getting ready
So first things first, i was really interested in japan ever since i did my report on Kanagawa. I found it really interesting, and i have been obsessed ever since. I asked my parents if i could go to Japan, mainly because i'm an only child. They said yes, which is rather strange because the said "no" when i wanted to go to Montreal. I'm going tommorow, so i am packing my carry-on. I am going for 2 weeks, and i told my teacher Mr. Blaine that i am going to japan. I feel excited, because i will get to see many attractions. I checked the carry-on and went to bed. I have a big day in front of me, so i need my rest.
How do you like it?

ImagineIt · 2012-01-10 19:56:12

Cool!

veggieman001 · 2012-01-10 20:06:48

cool

Gatsby · 2012-01-10 20:43:24

That's a mighty short chapter

veggieman001 · 2012-01-10 20:48:12

Gatsby wrote:
That's a mighty short chapter

Maybe he'll write the letters large, like one per page

Gatsby · 2012-01-10 20:51:19

I'll also add this is written in a very in-descriptive and diary-like way, so you might as well call the chapters "entries," date them, and make it like a fictional journal

And address everything to your imaginary friend named Kitty

veggieman001 · 2012-01-10 20:52:25

Gatsby wrote:
imaginary friend named Kitty

That's your imaginary friend

Gatsby · 2012-01-10 20:53:31

veggieman001 wrote:
Gatsby wrote:
imaginary friend named Kitty
That's your imaginary friend

I can share

luiysia · 2012-01-11 00:11:01

It's great you're going to Japan. Can you speak/read Japanese? When did you get out of the airplane?

Fun fact, when I went to China for ~2 weeks all I learned were the words for "coffee" and the name of the hotel we stayed at (如家, translates roughly to "Home"). Also traveling to the other side of the world is fun because you get to freak out over how you traveled for 14 hours and it's STILL THE SAME TIME. ALMOST.

mattb777 · 2012-01-11 00:15:49

luiysia wrote:
It's great you're going to Japan. Can you speak/read Japanese? When did you get out of the airplane?

Fun fact, when I went to China for ~2 weeks all I learned were the words for "coffee" and the name of the hotel we stayed at (如家, translates roughly to "Home"). Also traveling to the other side of the world is fun because you get to freak out over how you traveled for 14 hours and it's STILL THE SAME TIME. ALMOST.

I think the story is fictional.

Are you actually going to Japan?

luiysia · 2012-01-11 00:18:11

mattb777 wrote:
luiysia wrote:
It's great you're going to Japan. Can you speak/read Japanese? When did you get out of the airplane?

Fun fact, when I went to China for ~2 weeks all I learned were the words for "coffee" and the name of the hotel we stayed at (如家, translates roughly to "Home"). Also traveling to the other side of the world is fun because you get to freak out over how you traveled for 14 hours and it's STILL THE SAME TIME. ALMOST.
I think the story is fictional.

Are you actually going to Japan?

It's possible but it sounds at least somewhat plausible. We'll have to wait and see.

Animeboy975 · 2012-01-16 19:28:59

Chapter 2:Boredom and boredom
I woke up early, of course. My parents woke me up, which i went on the internet for 10 minutes. I grabbed my carry-on and got in the car. I know i will miss my house, but i am mostly excited. I entered my car and we drove to the airport. I live in CA, so i need to fly to Hawaii. I got my breakfast and i headed in the plane. I listened to music while my parents slept, and i slept later because i get nervous when we fly over water. It was boring. We landed, and got out

AnimeCreatorArtist · 2012-01-16 20:44:18

BRAVO.

Dinoclor · 2012-01-16 22:47:09

OK. Here comes the criticism: YOU NEED MORE DESCRIPTION AND USE BETTER WORDS.

Here comes the good part: Great idea, and it will be a good story when you follow the above tips.

jji7skyline · 2012-01-16 22:54:39

Nice...

I went to Japan in April 2010... great sakuras! big_smile

Where in Japan are you going?

Did you read my topic on hacking into the internet kiosk computers for free internet? tongue

undefeatedgames · 2012-01-16 23:06:33

Animeboy975 wrote:
Chapter 2:Boredom and boredom
I woke up early, of course. My parents woke me up, which i went on the internet for 10 minutes. I grabbed my carry-on and got in the car. I know i will miss my house, but i am mostly excited. I entered my car and we drove to the airport. I live in CA, so i need to fly to Hawaii. I got my breakfast and i headed in the plane. I listened to music while my parents slept, and i slept later because i get nervous when we fly over water. It was boring. We landed, and got out

There are TONS of direct flights from California to Japan.

Dinoclor wrote:
OK. Here comes the criticism: YOU NEED MORE DESCRIPTION AND USE BETTER WORDS.

Here comes the good part: Great idea, and it will be a good story when you follow the above tips.

True. I completely agree.

Animeboy975 · 2012-01-23 20:17:44

Chapter 3:The final flight, and the long one!
I exited the bridge, and saw the Hawaiian beach out the windows of the airport. It was a beautiful noon, and time for lunch. I've never mentioned how much i love lunch. I saw a Hawaiian place, which i ate at because of my love for Hawaiian food. We had a long layover, but felt short. It was already time to board the flight from Hawaii to Tokyo, which i entered the bridge excitedly. It was long for sure, but i have had experiance with that kind of stuff (AKA the flight from NYC back to my home of Sacramento) We got on, and i went to sleep because of my large fear of flying over water (mentioned earlier.) When my mom woke me up, we had just been flying over the big city of Tokyo. I was so excited! Than, i heard a bump. We had just landed.

Thanks for the advice, guys smile

And BTW, When Misc closes, i'll still be continuing this!

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