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Animeboy975 · 2012-01-01 13:01:55

I had the sudden idea to do this. Here is the first chapter. You will also spot some differances, like Jack is younger than Greg, And he has 2 sisters, not 2 brothers.

Here is the first entry:
Monday,August 22

I bought this journal a while ago, as my mom thought it would be a great way to "keep secrets" in here. To be honest, my mom needs to know that i am a 10 year old boy, not a 4 year old girl. I guess i'll just interdouce myself here, because my mom suddenly forces me to write in here. So i'll just do that, because i'm a nice guy. My full name is Jack Rowan Kront. I live in Georgia, with my two sisters. Yes, you heard me righ. i am a middle child

How did you like it?

bananaman114 · 2012-01-01 13:03:29

no
to be honest it's an exact replica of doawk
and I hated doawk

Freakish · 2012-01-01 13:03:45

Animeboy975 wrote:
I had the sudden idea to do this. Here is the first chapter. You will also spot some differances, like Jack is younger than Greg, And he has 2 sisters, not 2 brothers.

Here is the first entry:
Monday,August 22

I bought this journal a while ago, as my mom thought it would be a great way to "keep secrets" in here. To be honest, my mom needs to know that i am a 10 year old boy, not a 4 year old girl. I guess I'll just introduce myself here, because my mom suddenly forces me to write in here. So i'll just do that, because i'm a nice guy. My full name is Jack Rowan Kront. I live in Georgia, with my two sisters. Yes, you heard me right. I am a middle child.

How did you like it?

Good job, I edited it a bit.

Last edited by Freakish (2012-01-01 13:04:23)

Animeboy975 · 2012-01-01 13:04:58

Freakish wrote:
Animeboy975 wrote:
I had the sudden idea to do this. Here is the first chapter. You will also spot some differances, like Jack is younger than Greg, And he has 2 sisters, not 2 brothers.

Here is the first entry:
Monday,August 22

I bought this journal a while ago, as my mom thought it would be a great way to "keep secrets" in here. To be honest, my mom needs to know that i am a 10 year old boy, not a 4 year old girl. I guess I'll just introduce myself here, because my mom suddenly forces me to write in here. So i'll just do that, because i'm a nice guy. My full name is Jack Rowan Kront. I live in Georgia, with my two sisters. Yes, you heard me right. I am a middle child.

How did you like it?
Good job, I edited it a bit.

Yeah. I am currently writing the 2nd entry.. which might be posted later today.

imnotbob · 2012-01-01 13:10:01

IMO, it sounds like Diary of a Wimpy Kid. hmm

You may get a lot of hate for that, too.

Animeboy975 · 2012-01-01 13:25:26

imnotbob wrote:
IMO, it sounds like Diary of a Wimpy Kid.

You may get a lot of hate for that, too.

It's meant to be like that.

imnotbob · 2012-01-01 13:26:23

Animeboy975 wrote:
imnotbob wrote:
IMO, it sounds like Diary of a Wimpy Kid.

You may get a lot of hate for that, too.
It's meant to be like that.

OK but it sounds too much like it.

CheckItNow12 · 2012-01-01 13:32:22

Animeboy975 wrote:
I had the sudden idea to do this. Here is the first chapter. You will also spot some differances, like Jack is younger than Greg, And he has 2 sisters, not 2 brothers.

Here is the first entry:
Monday,August 22

I bought this journal a while ago, as my mom thought it would be a great way to "keep secrets" in here. To be honest, my mom needs to know that i am a 10 year old boy, not a 4 year old girl. I guess i'll just interdouce myself here, because my mom suddenly forces me to write in here. So i'll just do that, because i'm a nice guy. My full name is Jack Rowan Kront. I live in Georgia, with my two sisters. Yes, you heard me righ. i am a middle child

How did you like it?

Good, but needs some more work. Here's a revised edition.

Monday,August 22

Well, let me start off with the story:I bought this journal a while ago, as my mom thought it would be a great way to "keep secrets" in here. To be honest, my mom needs to know that I am a 10 year old boy, not a 4 year old girl. In my opinion, she treats me like a baby. It looks like I'm stuck with this journal, so I guess I'll just introduce myself here, because my mom suddenly forces me to write in here. I don't see WHAT kind of mom forces a kid to write on paper, so now you get the idea that my mom is nuts. But I'll just do that, because i'm a nice guy. My full name is Jack Rowan Kront. I live in Georgia, with my two sisters. Yes, you heard me right. I am a middle child.

Animeboy975 · 2012-01-01 17:12:34

Here are the other Kront's:
Emily (his mom)
Cameron (his dad)
Karen (his older sister, who is 14 and in 8th)
Lauren (his little sister who is 9 and in 3rd grade. She is a tomboy, that is why Lauren and Jack are such good friends)

2 SEQUELS COMING OUT SO FAR:
Homesick
Summertime Boredom

Austin (Jack's best friend.)
Alex (Another one of his freinds)
LATER EVENTS:
Jack and Austin throw a party at Austin's house while his parents are gone.
Christtmas
Getting a new computer
Halloween
His "secret" (revealed later)
A TCG craze
Lauren's birthday
Cameron and Jack's mall adventures

Last edited by Animeboy975 (2012-01-01 17:20:28)

AnimeCreatorArtist · 2012-01-01 17:19:49

I tried that once, but it turned out terrible. tongue
But it seems like your doing good big_smile

bananaman114 · 2012-01-01 17:34:18

You've already planned sequels
dear lord
plus uh
doawk wasn't that good
it was aimed at younger audiances had little to no real story
ect

Last edited by bananaman114 (2012-01-01 17:36:55)

fire219 · 2012-01-01 17:34:51

Sounds way too much like the beginning of DOAWK.

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