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Projects are in the same order as they are on the main thread.
To avoid any conflicts, please remember i am giving advice and are helping people improve their projects, on;ly without being as sweet or gentle as other reviewers who may give 3 stars and a wish, unlike me who gives 0 stars and as many wishes as needed.

Sorry if I came across as a "Jerk" as two people have quoted, which is kind of like bullying considering it is meant personally to me rather than as a general point, plus both RedRocker227 and DewleafWolf did not complain about their reviews, saying that it did help them, and they did not believe I were doing anything wrong in any-way at all. I hope they will help defend me on this one.

1. SkyPainter-Yoshi789
To start off with, I do like the fact that it is a painter with many options of colours, however, not long ago I reviewed another painting project, which was also 1s1s, and that allowed you to not only see what colour you had picked, but also choose from a moving crayon box, which I thought looked quite cool. It also allows you to load up existing images and colour them in, whereas this project not only does it feature a black background, but it also does not stamp properly, only stamping every point of a second, which is a problem if you want more than a dotty picture.

What I suggest is you allow the player to see the colour they have picked, use something other than a stamping system, and maybe instead of blank images used for colouring-in like on the other one, perhaps make a different feature to make yours unique and special. I did have a quick glimpse at your other projects, and I must say they are immense, so just make sure all your projects stay at that good quality!

2. CarRacing!-RedRocker227
This racing game is very ingenious considering that it is only 1s1s. However, nonetheless the tracks are too simple, and no matter how many scripts or sprites a project has, it should still try to be worthy of a "game" title. The tracks are ridiculously easy and the lack of them makes things even worse. Yes, it is al-right to make a clever project, but no way is it anywhere near being a game. I'd suggest maybe better graphics for the terrain, improving it should not affect the 1s1s rule. Also, the graphics for the terrain do not justify the above-average graphics for the car.

Also, I could not hear any music or even any sound effects? Maybe music would be too much to implement into 1s1s I agree, but surely a screeching noise or engine noise or even crowd's shouting could have been added. All these points put together just prove that this was merely a not very thought out project, which was rushed under the 1s1s title, so that not only it would get tonnes of extra unnecessary interest but also to be used as an excuse to not include the extra details. This to me looks like a 1s1s con to get extra interest, but of course I have never met you and you maybe a genuine person, but there is no evidence for it. So, work on the detail, add more tracks and make this a game and not a little way to get extra fame.

3. Line-RHY3756547
For once I am shocked! This is totally impressive in both visuals and difficulty. Considering this is done in 1s1s too, it is simply astonishing. It puts my 1043-scripted city builder to shame! However, if there's a game then there's always a fault. It's probably one of the most challenging aspects of the game... finding faults. However, I have to admit that the constant movement of green-lines got to my eyes a bit, although changing this to a normal blue sky and green-grass style may spoil the graphics completely. I found the jumping a bit weird, it takes time to learn how to control the little fella properly, nevertheless once you get the hang of it you completely forget about the character because you're too thrilled by the game itself.

So generalisation; the  sound effects are good, but a catchy techno-song in the backy would have been good. The graphics are cool, but a bit nasty on the eyes sometimes. Finally, level design was excellent, but the tutorial did not start till too late, I had to work out what jump was before I could get to the section where it said what you have to press to jump, but it's pretty easy to guess anyway. Overal, an excellent game!

4. 3DAnimalCreator-antimonyarsenide

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Last edited by Borrego6165 (2011-12-16 15:55:09)