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#27 2011-12-05 03:32:47
Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
banana500 wrote:
Hm...
I'd actually have to rate it merely 3. It could really use a lot more description.
I rated it that as well. 
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#29 2011-12-05 03:48:24
Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
08jackt wrote:
why is that bath magic and where can i get one
It's not actually magic; it's a space ship. And you cannot get one, sorry.
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#30 2011-12-05 09:18:41
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Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
calebxy wrote:
08jackt wrote:
why is that bath magic and where can i get one
It's not actually magic; it's a space ship. And you cannot get one, sorry.
Don't write misleading titles.
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#31 2011-12-05 09:26:35
Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
videogame9 wrote:
calebxy wrote:
08jackt wrote:
why is that bath magic and where can i get one
It's not actually magic; it's a space ship. And you cannot get one, sorry.
Don't write misleading titles.
I was six. 
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#32 2011-12-06 03:16:33
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calebxy wrote:
videogame9 wrote:
calebxy wrote:
It's not actually magic; it's a space ship. And you cannot get one, sorry.Don't write misleading titles.
I was six.
you have ruined my hopes and dreams
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#33 2011-12-06 03:22:57
Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
08jackt wrote:
calebxy wrote:
videogame9 wrote:
Don't write misleading titles.I was six.
you have ruined my hopes and dreams
I'm terribly sorry.
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#34 2011-12-06 11:17:28
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Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
Don't take it personally, I'm just reviewing the story:
2/10
It's stiff and unappealing, and it has no flow. It's interesting but it doesn't really retain reader interest. The dialogue is off, lacking in some parts and unnecessary in others. I don't think anyone would talk like that in real life. There's not enough description either.
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#35 2011-12-06 11:28:14
Re: What do you think of the climax to The Magic Bath 2?
Andres-Vander wrote:
Don't take it personally, I'm just reviewing the story:
2/10
It's stiff and unappealing, and it has no flow. It's interesting but it doesn't really retain reader interest. The dialogue is off, lacking in some parts and unnecessary in others. I don't think anyone would talk like that in real life. There's not enough description either.
Thank you for that review. 
And I agree.
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