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#1 2011-11-19 19:55:13
New Song
Just my first song!(Well first that I wrote.)
Any who; here is the song:(WARNING! This is in fact; a love song! Please leave any criticism, but don't be to harsh.)
My lonely nights By Black Fire
Verse One: Jake:
I first saw your beauty on the back of the bus.
I should make a move, I guess I don't have the guts.
Everything is as good as right,Only you have crossed my mind
Although I guess I've been wasting my time
Chorus: All
My mind is devoted only to you, day and night.
Although I pray we'll be all right
Everything of you is perfect, everything is right.
I need you baby to warm my lonely nights
Verse Two:James:
A life with you would be magical, just give me one chance.
The way I hold you tonight should make it clear.This thought has crossed my mind
We will be together until death, I couldn't imagine life without you.
Now i hope you know that i never felt this way before about anyone until I met you, And I hope you feel the same way too.
Chorus Two:
My mind is devoted only to you, day and night.
It just feels to good to be true,holding you tight
Everything of you is perfect, everything is right.
We won't be alone, another night
You Can't spell slaughter with out laughter
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#2 2011-11-19 22:08:30
Re: New Song
One by James:
Winter Love By Blackfire
Written by James Sweeney and edited by Jacob Gartlan
Verse One:
Snowy, sitting on a park bench.
All over again
It ain't so easy
They hated her, and now I know why.
Did it ever make you cry?
Chorus:
I had to force myself to move along the rest of the day.
And all you'd ever hear me say.
"We swore we be together for the rest of our time.
But i guess that was a lie."
But now It's over, was the best thing to happen to us!
I found my winter love,
Was a love like Christmas
Verse Two:
I used to like you, but now I've found my love.
Came to me when I had the gun, like a blessing from above.
I'd like to thank you, If you hadn't of dumped me i wouldn't of fell in love with her
And I couldn't be happier!
Chorus Two:
I use to have force myself to move along the rest of the day.
I am so much better off this way.
I almost forgot to say somes thanks,
I guess this song should be filling up our banks.
Our breakup was the best thing to happen to us!
I found my winter love,
Was a love like Christmas
You Can't spell slaughter with out laughter
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