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#1 2012-10-28 13:33:32

alldaykade28471
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Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Kade Productions, Inc. Stories:

Stories:

The Babysitter |||

Type: Scary

Written by: AllDayKade28471

     Back when I was about twelve, I hated everything about Halloween. I hated scary costumes, even though they never scared me; I hated candy, and I hated carving pumpkins. For me, Halloween was just another miserable day.
When my mom and dad were going to an adult Halloween party, I had to stay home by myself. Of course, my mom and dad obtained me a babysitter. I hated babysitters. They both said that when I turn thirteen I would no longer have babysitters EVER again.
When the babysitter showed up, my mom greeted her. I didn't. I simply rolled my eyes at her. She had long, dark hair and green, creepy eyes. Well, I would tell you more, but that's all I could see. She was in a Joker costume. It wasn't even scary to me. It just looked like a clown costume but with different colors. Boring! Since my mom and dad were going to be gone on Halloween night, they said I couldn't go trick-or-treating. I didn't care. I never participate anyway.
Once my mom and dad left, the babysitter disappeared. I thought she might have traveled back home. I cheerfully cheered. I just vanished into my basement to play video games.    
Immediately, I heard a scream. Probably just someone trying to scare someone, I thought. In my basement, it's dark, tremendously dark.    “Thank God I am not afraid of the dark, or I would be freaked out right now,” I whispered to myself. I suddenly heard knocking.
Being the feckless person I am, I didn't answer it. Minutes after, I heard it again. I became extremely annoyed, so I bolted up the stairs and forcefully opened the door. It was just stupid ol’ trick-or-treaters. I hollered at them, and they scampered away. Hah! Babies, I thought to myself. I shut the door and went back downstairs. The doorbell rang again. I tried to go upstairs, but it was locked. Now my sole way out was the downstairs door. I do have to admit I was becoming a little scared at this point. When I opened the downstairs door, I heard loud footsteps upstairs. I instantly heard the phone ring, but only for two seconds. All of a sudden I heard a boisterous smack. I assumed it was my babysitter answering the phone then hanging up. I walked out the door, and it furiously shut behind me.
I then walked slowly through the tall, moist grass. I noticed a shadow. When I turned around the corner, I saw my babysitter! I was in major relief! I hustled to her and pulled off her mask to give her a titanic hug. The moment I yanked off her mask, I whimpered,     "Wait. You're not my babysitter..."

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#2 2012-10-28 13:41:48

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Is this a true story?  tongue


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#3 2012-10-28 13:43:47

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

stevetheipad wrote:

Is this a true story?  tongue

Yes.

But I have 9 lives. I'm cat/ninja.  tongue

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#4 2012-10-28 14:03:04

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories

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#5 2012-10-28 14:09:18

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories

It already is.

And I don't think it HAS to go in there...

I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.

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#6 2012-10-28 14:15:17

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories

It already is.

And I don't think it HAS to go in there...

I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.

It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.

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#7 2012-10-28 14:19:52

alldaykade28471
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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

LanceOhYeah wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories

It already is.

And I don't think it HAS to go in there...

I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.

It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.

What if I put all my stories in here?

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#8 2012-10-28 14:24:41

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:


It already is.

And I don't think it HAS to go in there...

I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.

It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.

What if I put all my stories in here?

That sounds like a good idea.  smile


http://i.imgur.com/8QRYx.png
Everything is better when you add a little cheddar, because when you have cheese your life is at ease  smile

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#9 2012-10-28 14:44:45

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

cheddargirl wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:


It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.

What if I put all my stories in here?

That sounds like a good idea.  smile

Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...

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#10 2012-10-28 14:45:28

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

cheddargirl wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:


What if I put all my stories in here?

That sounds like a good idea.  smile

Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...

Done!  smile


http://i.imgur.com/8QRYx.png
Everything is better when you add a little cheddar, because when you have cheese your life is at ease  smile

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#11 2012-10-28 14:48:11

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

cheddargirl wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

cheddargirl wrote:


That sounds like a good idea.  smile

Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...

Done!  smile

Thanks!

You can ignore my report.  tongue

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#12 2012-10-28 15:04:40

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...

*cries*

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#13 2012-10-28 15:09:47

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...

*cries*

tongue

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#14 2012-10-28 15:17:13

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...

*cries*

:P

D-D-D-DON'T LAUGH A-AT MY F-F-FAAAILLUURRRESSS ;_;

Ooooh 100th post :D

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#15 2012-10-28 15:21:55

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

LanceOhYeah wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

LanceOhYeah wrote:

Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...

*cries*

tongue

D-D-D-DON'T LAUGH A-AT MY F-F-FAAAILLUURRRESSS ;_;

Ooooh 100th post  big_smile

You went from mad to happy. Interesting.

Anyway, we should probably get back on Topic.

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#16 2012-10-29 14:21:50

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

ImagineIt reporting for duty!

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#17 2012-10-29 14:50:44

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

ImagineIt wrote:

ImagineIt reporting for duty!

Could you please fill out the form?

(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)

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#18 2012-10-29 15:02:13

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

ImagineIt wrote:

ImagineIt reporting for duty!

Could you please fill out the form?

(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)

Ok.  tongue

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#19 2012-10-29 15:06:55

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

ImagineIt wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

ImagineIt wrote:

ImagineIt reporting for duty!

Could you please fill out the form?

(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)

Ok.  tongue

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#20 2012-10-29 15:19:17

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Do you like writing: Why else would I be here?

Have many stories have you written?: I got into writing around last year, so I have only written about two others that are good. I got a perfect score on my first one(it was grade) though.

Write a one paragraph story: I'm being pulled in by the most viscous creature ever, the spider. He’s a horrible menace who wants to trap all of us in his web and devour us one by one. He has eight red, devilish eyes. He is a giant who can kill any creature, no matter what. Wait, he just got squashed? I’m sav— Oh no… There’s a foot coming down onto me to… AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

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#21 2012-10-29 15:20:23

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

I'm writing a story right now. It's about an alligator.  tongue

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#22 2012-10-29 15:25:22

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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

Nice! You're in!  wink

Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?

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#23 2012-10-29 15:34:09

ImagineIt
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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Nice! You're in!  wink

Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?

Ok. I have pretty good grammar. My mom is an editor.

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#24 2012-10-29 15:36:02

alldaykade28471
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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

ImagineIt wrote:

alldaykade28471 wrote:

Nice! You're in!  wink

Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?

Ok. I have pretty good grammar. My mom is an editor.

Whoa, sweet!

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#25 2012-10-29 15:36:56

ImagineIt
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Re: Kade Productions, Inc. Stories

I haven't found an error. Great!

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