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#1 2012-06-10 03:47:39
- bluecat600
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I'll Review Your Projects!
Hello everyone.
If you want your project reviewed, come here.
It is rated out of 100.
Fun (out of 25) How much fun your project is. Animations might not get very many in this.
Graphics (out of 25) How good the graphics were. Art and Animations will do good in this.
Music + Sounds (out of 20) How well the music fitted. Anything with no sound or music will have 0 points for this catergory.
Controls (out of 20) How easy the controls were to get.
Extras (out of 10) If you have extras, you can get some points here.
Projects Reviewed:
Rayman 4, by Borrego6165. (85pts)
Pixel,by ftf841. (73pts)
Amnesia: the beginning, by ExtreamleyGamer. (73pts)
The Level Game, by benjamin2. (71pts)
Cats In Animations Series 1 Episode 2, by JH1010. (66pts)
KianOS, by moretzprogramming. (61 pts)
Last edited by bluecat600 (2012-06-16 00:42:02)
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#3 2012-06-10 04:14:08
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
benjamin2 wrote:
Please review my level game! It's in my sig.
my review:
Fun: 23 pts. It was really addictive. I couldn't stop playing!
Graphics: 15pts. The arrow on lvl8 could of been drawn abit better. Good work.
music + sound: 10pts. It fitted well with the game.(cpumaster930 used that music)
controls: 20pts. Very easy to use! Great job on that. Top marks.
Extras: 3pts. The unlockables.They were quite hard to get. I managed 2 achivements.
Grand Total: 71pts!! Well done.
Really good game.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#4 2012-06-10 04:17:14
Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Please can you review the animation in the link below.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2600488
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#5 2012-06-10 05:26:41
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
JH1010 wrote:
Please can you review the animation in the link below.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2600488
okay. Here!
Fun: 16pts. Really fun to watch, and a high score for animations.
Graphics: 12pts. The animation had good graphics for a newscratcher!!
Music + sound: 14pts. The music was great! You did a good job on that.
Controls: 6pts. I needed abit of help working out how to start it.
extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 48pts!
A really good score for an animation.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#6 2012-06-10 06:53:04
Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
bluecat600 wrote:
benjamin2 wrote:
Please review my level game! It's in my sig.
my review:
Fun: 23 pts. It was really addictive. I couldn't stop playing!
Graphics: 15pts. The arrow on lvl8 could of been drawn abit better. Good work.
music + sound: 10pts. It fitted well with the game.
controls: 20pts. Very easy to use! Great job on that. Top marks.
Extras: 3pts. The unlockables.They were quite hard to get. I managed 2 achivements.
Grand Total: 71pts!! Well done.Really good game.
How far did you get? It gets interesting around level 30-40.
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#7 2012-06-10 06:58:20
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
benjamin2 wrote:
bluecat600 wrote:
benjamin2 wrote:
Please review my level game! It's in my sig.
my review:
Fun: 23 pts. It was really addictive. I couldn't stop playing!
Graphics: 15pts. The arrow on lvl8 could of been drawn abit better. Good work.
music + sound: 10pts. It fitted well with the game.
controls: 20pts. Very easy to use! Great job on that. Top marks.
Extras: 3pts. The unlockables.They were quite hard to get. I managed 2 achivements.
Grand Total: 71pts!! Well done.Really good game.
How far did you get? It gets interesting around level 30-40.
Level 44
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#9 2012-06-10 09:06:08
Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
bluecat600 wrote:
JH1010 wrote:
Please can you review the animation in the link below.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2600488okay. Here!
Fun: 16pts. Really fun to watch, and a high score for animations.
Graphics: 12pts. The animation had good graphics for a newscratcher!!
Music + sound: 14pts. The music was great! You did a good job on that.
Controls: 6pts. I needed abit of help working out how to start it.
extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 48pts!A really good score for an animation.
Thanks for the review.
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#10 2012-06-10 09:46:11
- ExtremelyGamer
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
"Submarines are like water like underwater airplanes" O_o
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#11 2012-06-10 09:49:39
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
ftf841 wrote:
pixel it's in my sig
My review
Fun: 22pts. The programming was great and the velocity makes jumping realistic!
Graphics: 13pts. I like the retro pixel graphics.
Music + sound: 20pts. It's perfect music for a scrolling platformer!
Controls: 18pts. The controls are very easy to use, making the game simple.
Extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 73pts!! (Deserves a love-it!)
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#12 2012-06-10 10:02:20
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
My review!
Fun: 21pts. Really well done maze game, one of the best I''ve seen.
Graphics: 20pts. The space ship drawing was really good. So was the background.
Music + Sound: 15pts. I like the adventurous music, it fits really well.
Controls: 9pts. WASD confused me at first, I was pressing the arrowkeys alot.
extras: 8pts. I like the way you added a multi-player mode.
Grand Total: 73pts! Nice job.
The before one: 845 views?? That's loads!!
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#13 2012-06-10 10:20:21
- ExtremelyGamer
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
bluecat600 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
My review!
Fun: 21pts. Really well done maze game, one of the best I''ve seen.
Graphics: 20pts. The space ship drawing was really good. So was the background.
Music + Sound: 15pts. I like the adventurous music, it fits really well.
Controls: 9pts. WASD confused me at first, I was pressing the arrowkeys alot.
extras: 8pts. I like the way you added a multi-player mode.
Grand Total: 73pts! Nice job.The before one: 845 views?? That's loads!!
@wasd bit, I am used to playing with wasd, like mine craft, Most people are used to arrow keys, but I used the arrow keys for the end part (did you finish playing it)?
"Submarines are like water like underwater airplanes" O_o
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#14 2012-06-10 10:23:39
- ExtremelyGamer
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
bluecat600 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
My review!
Fun: 21pts. Really well done maze game, one of the best I''ve seen.
Graphics: 20pts. The space ship drawing was really good. So was the background.
Music + Sound: 15pts. I like the adventurous music, it fits really well.
Controls: 9pts. WASD confused me at first, I was pressing the arrowkeys alot.
extras: 8pts. I like the way you added a multi-player mode.
Grand Total: 73pts! Nice job.The before one: 845 views?? That's loads!!
What before one?
"Submarines are like water like underwater airplanes" O_o
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#15 2012-06-10 10:23:53
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
bluecat600 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
My review!
Fun: 21pts. Really well done maze game, one of the best I''ve seen.
Graphics: 20pts. The space ship drawing was really good. So was the background.
Music + Sound: 15pts. I like the adventurous music, it fits really well.
Controls: 9pts. WASD confused me at first, I was pressing the arrowkeys alot.
extras: 8pts. I like the way you added a multi-player mode.
Grand Total: 73pts! Nice job.The before one: 845 views?? That's loads!!
@wasd bit, I am used to playing with wasd, like mine craft, Most people are used to arrow keys, but I used the arrow keys for the end part (did you finish playing it)?
I couldn't pass the first level.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#16 2012-06-10 11:23:13
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
JH1010 wrote:
bluecat600 wrote:
JH1010 wrote:
Please can you review the animation in the link below.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2600488okay. Here!
Fun: 16pts. Really fun to watch, and a high score for animations.
Graphics: 12pts. The animation had good graphics for a newscratcher!!
Music + sound: 14pts. The music was great! You did a good job on that.
Controls: 6pts. I needed abit of help working out how to start it.
extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 48pts!A really good score for an animation.
Thanks for the review.
your welcome.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#17 2012-06-11 02:23:38
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
bluecat600 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Can you review this: Amnesia: the beginning
My review!
Fun: 21pts. Really well done maze game, one of the best I''ve seen.
Graphics: 20pts. The space ship drawing was really good. So was the background.
Music + Sound: 15pts. I like the adventurous music, it fits really well.
Controls: 9pts. WASD confused me at first, I was pressing the arrowkeys alot.
extras: 8pts. I like the way you added a multi-player mode.
Grand Total: 73pts! Nice job.The before one: 845 views?? That's loads!!
What before one?
The first one you created. 
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#18 2012-06-11 13:58:42
Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Please can you review episode 2 of my Cats In Animations series.
Link here: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2602401
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#19 2012-06-12 02:57:24
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
JH1010 wrote:
Please can you review episode 2 of my Cats In Animations series.
Link here: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2602401
Here it is!
Fun: 18pts. Really cool, could you make it a bit longer?
Graphics: 17pts. The crashed car looked 3d!
Music + Sound: 20pts. Awesome.
Controls: 11pts. Maybe you could write how to start it.
extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 66pts! Nice.
Is it ok if I overwrite your previous review, because you can only do 1 per person?
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#20 2012-06-12 12:01:26
Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
bluecat600 wrote:
JH1010 wrote:
Please can you review episode 2 of my Cats In Animations series.
Link here: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/JH1010/2602401Here it is!
Fun: 18pts. Really cool, could you make it a bit longer?
Graphics: 17pts. The crashed car looked 3d!
Music + Sound: 20pts. Awesome.
Controls: 11pts. Maybe you could write how to start it.
extras: 0pts.
Grand Total: 66pts! Nice.Is it ok if I overwrite your previous review, because you can only do 1 per person?
Yes you can overwrite the first review. Again thanks for the review.
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#21 2012-06-15 12:58:48
- moretzprogramming
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- Registered: 2012-04-25
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Mine?
KianOS
Thanks!
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#22 2012-06-15 13:39:28
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
moretzprogramming wrote:
Mine?
KianOS
Thanks!
here:
fun: 13pts. Sometimes the programs would'nt close, that messed it up a little.
graphics: 15pts. Nicely done.
music + sound: 10pts.
controls: 20pts. Very easy to use!
extras: 3pts. I liked the web page!
grand total: 61pts. great!
Overall, good OS.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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#23 2012-06-15 14:51:43
- Gokurox296
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- Registered: 2012-01-08
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
can you review my Control scratch cat game and my Jacob's worst fear animation?sorry i don't know how to do links but they're on my profile
Clicky Clicky:http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?pid=1199265#p1199265
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#24 2012-06-15 16:05:52
- Borrego6165
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Rayman 4 Please!
Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!
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#25 2012-06-16 00:33:27
- bluecat600
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Re: I'll Review Your Projects!
Gokurox296 wrote:
can you review my Control scratch cat game and my Jacob's worst fear animation?sorry i don't know how to do links but they're on my profile
Can yo choose one to review? I only review one per person.
I gaze off into the boundless skyline, noteblock choirs playin in the sunshine, turn round pick up my sword and wield the blade that once forced evil mobs to yield, if this battle shall leave me slain, I know Herobrine still calls my name, better just take a stand, that was when I ruled the land.
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