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Animeboy975 wrote:

Troll pasta to hold you over (NEW STORY COMING SOON.)

THIS ISN'T LAME CREEPYPASTA I SAW A OLD MAN AND HE GAVE ME A TAPE. I PUT IT IN MY VHS AND IT WAS CREEPY THERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWHERE AMD HYPER REALISTIC EYES. IT WAS SO CRAZY I WATCHED IT WITH MY FRIEND AND HE DIED THAN  I WAS SENT TO SCARY CAMP AND THE ADRESS WAS 666 AND I WAS SCARED ALL THE ANIMALS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND ALL THE TREES HAD 13 CARVED INTO THEM. THE TREES GREW HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND THEN THEY CALLED BEAVERS TO KILL ME THE BEAVERS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND BLOOD SPLAT EVERYWHERE. I DON'T KNOW HOW THIS WAS WRITTEN I THINK THE BEAVERS DID IT

Try to read it without laughing, or even giggiling. I dare you.

Uhh...

That was pretty unfunny, actually. It was really easy not to laugh.

Guys, I think we need a usermade troll pasta thread. 

777w wrote:

banana500 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Troll pasta to hold you over (NEW STORY COMING SOON.)

THIS ISN'T LAME CREEPYPASTA I SAW A OLD MAN AND HE GAVE ME A TAPE. I PUT IT IN MY VHS AND IT WAS CREEPY THERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWHERE AMD HYPER REALISTIC EYES. IT WAS SO CRAZY I WATCHED IT WITH MY FRIEND AND HE DIED THAN  I WAS SENT TO SCARY CAMP AND THE ADRESS WAS 666 AND I WAS SCARED ALL THE ANIMALS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND ALL THE TREES HAD 13 CARVED INTO THEM. THE TREES GREW HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND THEN THEY CALLED BEAVERS TO KILL ME THE BEAVERS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND BLOOD SPLAT EVERYWHERE. I DON'T KNOW HOW THIS WAS WRITTEN I THINK THE BEAVERS DID IT

Try to read it without laughing, or even giggiling. I dare you.

Uhh...

That was pretty unfunny, actually. It was really easy not to laugh.

Guys, I think we need a usermade troll pasta thread. 

that would really, really hurt

I was joking.

777w wrote:

banana500 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Troll pasta to hold you over (NEW STORY COMING SOON.)

THIS ISN'T LAME CREEPYPASTA I SAW A OLD MAN AND HE GAVE ME A TAPE. I PUT IT IN MY VHS AND IT WAS CREEPY THERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWHERE AMD HYPER REALISTIC EYES. IT WAS SO CRAZY I WATCHED IT WITH MY FRIEND AND HE DIED THAN  I WAS SENT TO SCARY CAMP AND THE ADRESS WAS 666 AND I WAS SCARED ALL THE ANIMALS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND ALL THE TREES HAD 13 CARVED INTO THEM. THE TREES GREW HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND THEN THEY CALLED BEAVERS TO KILL ME THE BEAVERS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND BLOOD SPLAT EVERYWHERE. I DON'T KNOW HOW THIS WAS WRITTEN I THINK THE BEAVERS DID IT

Try to read it without laughing, or even giggiling. I dare you.

Uhh...

That was pretty unfunny, actually. It was really easy not to laugh.

Guys, I think we need a usermade troll pasta thread. 

that would really, really hurt
but if you say so

Please no.

I was playing Skyward Sword.  Then everything went blank.  Normally my little brother Stewart shuts things off as a joke, but this was different because he was gone for a week.  Then everything came back on; completely randomly.  But this was different.  Everything was different: I had no hearts,the screen was a shade of red,and I had no control.  Yet the game still kept on going. I tried to turn off my Wii. It wouldn't stop.  I tried to break it but it wouldn't.  That night I heard sounds from everything that was hostile in the game. I told my family about it but they told me I played the game too much.  So after school I played some more.  All of the enemies were gone.  When I went back upstairs, everything was gone.I slowly started painfully fading away.


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opiegs wrote:

I was playing Skyward Sword.  Then everything went blank.  Normally my little brother Stewart shuts things off as a joke, but this was different because he was gone for a week.  Then everything came back on; completely randomly.  But this was different.  Everything was different: I had no hearts,the screen was a shade of red,and I had no control.  Yet the game still kept on going. I tried to turn off my Wii. It wouldn't stop.  I tried to break it but it wouldn't.  That night I heard sounds from everything that was hostile in the game. I told my family about it but they told me I played the game too much.  So after school I played some more.  All of the enemies were gone.  When I went back upstairs, everything was gone.I slowly started painfully fading away.


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That was...really bad. I'm sorry. Too cliche.

By the way guys, this is a true story. One time, I was playing Star Fox on my SNES. And on the first stage, Corneria, the sky was red. No, seriously. I resetted the console, and the sky turned back to blue. But still, I was sorta freaked out for a second. 

Muuurrrp
I might post something I've been working on 

Animeboy975 wrote:

Troll pasta to hold you over (NEW STORY COMING SOON.)

THIS ISN'T LAME CREEPYPASTA I SAW A OLD MAN AND HE GAVE ME A TAPE. I PUT IT IN MY VHS AND IT WAS CREEPY THERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWHERE AMD HYPER REALISTIC EYES. IT WAS SO CRAZY I WATCHED IT WITH MY FRIEND AND HE DIED THAN  I WAS SENT TO SCARY CAMP AND THE ADRESS WAS 666 AND I WAS SCARED ALL THE ANIMALS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND ALL THE TREES HAD 13 CARVED INTO THEM. THE TREES GREW HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND THEN THEY CALLED BEAVERS TO KILL ME THE BEAVERS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND BLOOD SPLAT EVERYWHERE. I DON'T KNOW HOW THIS WAS WRITTEN I THINK THE BEAVERS DID IT

Try to read it without laughing, or even giggiling. I dare you.

I GIGGLED. I'M A BOY AND I GIGGLED.
minor fixes:

THIS ISN'T LAME CREEPYPASTA I SAW A OLD MAN AND HE GAVE ME A TAPE. I PUT IT IN MY VHS AND IT WAS CREEPY THERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWHERE AMD HYPER REALISTIC EYES. IT WAS SO CRAZY I WATCHED IT WITH MY FRIEND AND HE DIED THAN  I WAS SENT TO SCARY CAMP AND THE ADRESS WAS 666 AND I WAS SCARED ALL THE ANIMALS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND ALL THE TREES HAD BOBBYBOB3'S LUCKY NUMBER CARVED INTO THEM. THE TREES GREW HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND THEN THEY CALLED BEAVERS TO KILL ME THE BEAVERS HAD HYPER REALISTIC EYES AND BLOOD SPLAT EVERYWHERE. I DON'T KNOW HOW THIS WAS WRITTEN I THINK THE BEAVERS DID IT

PS: WE, THE BEAVERS DID NOT DO IT. WE JUST KILLED YOU AND YOU CAME BACK TO LIFE AS A TROLL.

Like the fixed version?

samid11 wrote:

gumigirl wrote:

Muuurrrp
I might post something I've been working on 

MARIA.

MARIA, YOU'RE ON THE FORUMS.

HOW DID YOU GET HERE.

wait-is that you putting her real name out, or are you quoting something?

samid11 wrote:

gumigirl wrote:

Muuurrrp
I might post something I've been working on 

MARIA.

MARIA, YOU'RE ON THE FORUMS.

HOW DID YOU GET HERE.

A WIZARD SENT ME

gumigirl wrote:

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

samid11 wrote:

MARIA.

MARIA, YOU'RE ON THE FORUMS.

HOW DID YOU GET HERE.

wait-is that you putting her real name out, or are you quoting something?

It's my name. :B

What I thought

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

Garr8 wrote:

BOBBYBOB3 wrote:

*rolls eyes* oh, THAT picture. I eat potatoes. Go inside a potato. I will eat you.

I like your new sig, there's me in the background.

No, that isn't you. Because the person in that picture is hanging out under my bed right now eating spiders and considering ME for dinner.

now i'm hungry

Animeboy975 wrote:

My new project. "Fort building camp the week of June 18th, and going to california June 23rd were all in my life BTW.)

TOM by Animeboy975

I've always had a 3DS since launch in early 2011. It was blue, and i always loved playing it.

But one June day, everything almost changed.

Well, more specifically, i had camp the week of June 18, 2012. It was a fort building camp, and it was very fun. We swam, and made a epic fort. But that's not what i want to say. I went to California to visit family for fun on the following Saturday. Like any sane person would do, i brought my 3DS. It had StreetPass on, and Mario Kart 7 in the cartridge slot. I loved both, and went on the plain ride. After a tedious 4 hour plane ride, i left the airport and got to where we were going to stay.

It was my grandpa's house in San Jose. He loves humor, and a nice guy. Where we usually stay in his house was under construction (it was a tiny guest house behind his.) we stayed in a trailer. Now on to the story. The trailer was in the parking lot, and it was nice. I went to the back room, which looked like any normal sleeping cabin on a train. Guess what? There was no internet access. So, i played my 3DS.

Mario Kart 7 turned on. I went to go see who i got during the plane ride.

It just showed up, a blonde Mii smiling on one of the slots. I selected him, and his name said "TOM"

TOM? What. Anyways, he had a custom cup. I played it and it was normal. Without that weird freak (possibly) i went to play normally. I had beaten every cup, so i just picked "Mirror Special Cup"

"MIRROR SPECIAL CUP" 1ST COURSE: DK JUNGLE. TOM HAS JOINED.

Oh jeez, TOM. Let's see how much of a pathetic driver this guy is.

Anyways, he dissappeared. I raced first lap. I swear i was in 1st. But the game said 2nd. This obviously means TOM is a hacker.

Ugh, he just kept hacking into all my stuff. I just kept playing, eventually beating every cup twice.

Anyways, i was way too bored. I turned off my 3ds and heard a faint voice....

"Sucker......."

Ehh, wasn't very pleased with how it turned out. 

Meh, it's a good concept, but it could use a lot of work. Get rid of some irrelevent details and shift the central focus to the game. Put in some creepy details in regards to the game and something to bring the story to a neat conclusion, for example you need something unique to identify the voice at the end.

Just some advice. *stomps off to give more totally wise advise to other people because i know everything*

ok guys stop going off topic here