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Hey! So, I had this dream last night and I made a song about it. Would you lot look over the lyrics and tell me what you think? Thanks!

She looked up at her father
with eyes so wide.
Her words were soft,
intentions so kind.
He turned her away,
and he didn't delay,
to make the lands of Evil,
pay, pay, pay.

He left her alone,
with no where to go.
No body would hear her,
no body could know,
That this was a child of
gold, gold, gold.

The child of gold,
The child of silver.
With no one to hear her.
The child of gold.

Alone she walked,
with a wolf at her side.
And every one to see her
would try to hide.
'cause she was a child
that nobody knows, nobody knows.

With a jump and a smile,
she would turn him around.
But with a flip of his hand,
he would turn her down.
So she had a soul of
pain and hurt, pain and hurt.

The child of gold,
The child of silver.
With no one to hear her.
The child of gold.
The child of gold,
The child of silver.
Why does no one to hear her?
The child of gold.
The child of silver.
Oh~
The child of gold.