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#1 2012-03-02 18:33:28
- wolvesstar97
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My Twisted Life
A webcomic I'm making! The characters are Jay, Dan, Lizzy, Ricco, Malcom, Rebecca and Jed. Jay is the main character. Dan is Jay's best friend. Lizzy is a smart girl who likes to adventure. Ricco is the annoying kid who just likes to interfere with things and acts like he's the boss. Malcom is the evil little kid. Rebecca is the girly-girl who likes frills and hates adventures of any sort. Lizzy is her enemy. Jed is the friend of Jay and Dan, but he's completley insane.
Here is the link: http://mytwistedlife.thecomicseries.com/
There is 2 comics up already!
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#4 2012-03-02 20:18:11
- videogame9
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Re: My Twisted Life
It needs better drawings.
QUOTE OF THE RIGHT NOW: why are we arguing about dead babies? -videogame9
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#6 2012-03-03 02:09:30
- wolvesstar97
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Re: My Twisted Life
jslomba wrote:
videogame9 wrote:
It needs better drawings.
agreed
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#7 2012-03-03 07:45:29
Re: My Twisted Life
wolvesstar97 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
videogame9 wrote:
It needs better drawings.
agreed
Its just an opinion.
I agree.
The drawings are at a weird, tilted angle, and the panels seem cluttered which makes things hard to read. To be honest, most of the time, I don't know what is going on in the comic.
Do you draw all your panels before adding the characters?
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#8 2012-03-07 00:51:04
- wolvesstar97
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Re: My Twisted Life
wiimaster wrote:
wolvesstar97 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
agreed
Its just an opinion.
I agree.
The drawings are at a weird, tilted angle, and the panels seem cluttered which makes things hard to read. To be honest, most of the time, I don't know what is going on in the comic.
Do you draw all your panels before adding the characters?
No.... I draw the panels as I go, freehand. I've actually worked on it, and realized that the first one is bad...
But now everything is much neater. Will post new ones soon.
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#10 2012-03-07 10:20:58
#11 2012-03-07 22:02:03
Re: My Twisted Life
wolvesstar97 wrote:
wiimaster wrote:
wolvesstar97 wrote:
Its just an opinion.
I agree.
The drawings are at a weird, tilted angle, and the panels seem cluttered which makes things hard to read. To be honest, most of the time, I don't know what is going on in the comic.
Do you draw all your panels before adding the characters?No.... I draw the panels as I go, freehand. I've actually worked on it, and realized that the first one is bad...
But now everything is much neater. Will post new ones soon.
Cool! I think the problem wasn't so much that it was bad drawing so much as it was that it was messy. Really messy.
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#12 2012-03-08 11:24:49
- wolvesstar97
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Re: My Twisted Life
luiysia wrote:
wolvesstar97 wrote:
wiimaster wrote:
Its just an opinion.
I agree.
The drawings are at a weird, tilted angle, and the panels seem cluttered which makes things hard to read. To be honest, most of the time, I don't know what is going on in the comic.
Do you draw all your panels before adding the characters?No.... I draw the panels as I go, freehand. I've actually worked on it, and realized that the first one is bad...
But now everything is much neater. Will post new ones soon.Cool! I think the problem wasn't so much that it was bad drawing so much as it was that it was messy. Really messy.
Yeah... I need to get a ruler to draw panels or something or print off pre-paneled sheets.
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#13 2012-03-08 20:59:51
- wolvesstar97
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Re: My Twisted Life
bumpity bump!
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