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cartooncreator · 2012-02-08 18:13:37

Amazing! Great job! You are great at writing. smile

brettman98 · 2012-02-08 18:26:11

Nice! But you have to add a comma after dialogue, not a period. "Like this," person said.

KalinaStar · 2012-02-08 20:34:22

Wow! That's good! I'd like to see more, as I can't really tell where is goes as of now.

bananaman114 · 2012-02-08 21:54:32

KalinaStar wrote:
Wow! That's good! I'd like to see more, as I can't really tell where is goes as of now.

Any more of the story would ruin the ending!

veggieman001 · 2012-02-08 21:56:03

KalinaStar wrote:
Wow! That's good! I'd like to see more, as I can't really tell where is goes as of now.

It's not the beginning.

jslomba · 2012-02-08 21:57:50

oh cool
I was gonna write something like this

bananaman114 · 2012-02-08 21:59:57

jslomba wrote:
oh cool
I was gonna write something like this

really nao? :O

maybe if you read more of it you would realise that maybe it's not so much like this because this is not like the rest of the story it's a like weird part :O
this shows very little about the main storyline :OOO

jslomba · 2012-02-08 22:02:15

bananaman114 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
oh cool
I was gonna write something like this
really nao?

maybe if you read more of it you would realise that maybe it's not so much like this because this is not like the rest of the story it's a like weird part
this shows very little about the main storyline :OOO

okay whatever

bananaman114 · 2012-02-08 22:03:17

jslomba wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
oh cool
I was gonna write something like this
really nao?

maybe if you read more of it you would realise that maybe it's not so much like this because this is not like the rest of the story it's a like weird part
this shows very little about the main storyline :OOO
okay whatever

what would your story be about or like

jslomba · 2012-02-08 22:05:24

bananaman114 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:

really nao?

maybe if you read more of it you would realise that maybe it's not so much like this because this is not like the rest of the story it's a like weird part
this shows very little about the main storyline :OOO
okay whatever
what would your story be about or like

I was gonna make it about some creepy dude who escapes from a mental hospital and lives in a cave and lives with imaginary friends and stuff, and then this kid comes and finds him and I don't know what's gonna happen next.

bananaman114 · 2012-02-08 22:07:18

jslomba wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
jslomba wrote:
okay whatever
what would your story be about or like
I was gonna make it about some creepy dude who escapes from a mental hospital and lives in a cave and lives with imaginary friends and stuff, and then this kid comes and finds him and I don't know what's gonna happen next.

nope nothing like mine whatsoever

exept the creepy guy in the cave

trinary · 2012-02-08 23:21:28

Wow...that's actually quite good for 12 minutes' worth of writing.

bananaman114 · 2012-02-09 15:46:45

trinary wrote:
Wow...that's actually quite good for 12 minutes' worth of writing.

lol usually it takes me an hour for two pages yikes

bananaman114 · 2012-02-11 17:09:24

bimp

PlutoIsHades · 2012-02-11 18:25:09

That's good!
Except wasps don't make honey.

soupoftomato · 2012-02-11 18:53:34

I think it's been cleared that wasps aren't making delicious sugary sauce anytime soon.

bananaman114 · 2012-02-11 20:08:22

I understand that wasps don't make honey
but they might enjoy it yikes

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