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Lolkid332 wrote:

veggieman001 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

More to come.

That doesn't seem like a creepypasta, just violent

That's like calling Cupcakes not a creepypasta.

this is honestly just cupcakes fluttershyified

Cupcakes doesn't deserve to be called "Creepypasta". Neither do Rainbow Factory or Sweet Apple Massacre. They're just nasty fanfics.

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

veggieman001 wrote:

That doesn't seem like a creepypasta, just violent

That's like calling Cupcakes not a creepypasta.

this is honestly just cupcakes fluttershyified

Cupcakes doesn't deserve to be called "Creepypasta". Neither do Rainbow Factory or Sweet Apple Massacre. They're just nasty fanfics.

Look at my post above.


DID I SERIOUSLY JUST START A FLAME WAR?

Lolkid332 wrote:

777w wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

That's like calling Cupcakes not a creepypasta.

this is honestly just cupcakes fluttershyified

creepypasta is supposed to be creepy, and i dont find that particularly so
and if its a copy of another creepypasta its no good, its unoriginal

Well Cupcakes isn't  creepy.

And I'm not copying,

so first you say its cupcakes "fluttershyified" then you say youre not copying
lol thats umm yeah

777w wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

777w wrote:

creepypasta is supposed to be creepy, and i dont find that particularly so
and if its a copy of another creepypasta its no good, its unoriginal

Well Cupcakes isn't  creepy.

And I'm not copying,

so first you say its cupcakes "fluttershyified" then you say youre not copying
lol thats umm yeah

I couldn't find a good description so I used that.

777w wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

777w wrote:

so first you say its cupcakes "fluttershyified" then you say youre not copying
lol thats umm yeah

I couldn't find a good description so I used that.

but now you may subconsciously rip it off due to the mere mentioning of it and maybe even this post im writing now 

Yeah no.

777w wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

777w wrote:

but now you may subconsciously rip it off due to the mere mentioning of it and maybe even this post im writing now 

Yeah no.

you never know
the human brain is very powerful
if you close your eyes on a swingset and imagine youre high up in the sky you can really freak yourself out

Hmmm.

Feeding Time


The carrot hit Fluttershy in the face for the 48th time today. She sighed and set a carrot in front of Angel.
"Oh, please, um, Angel, just take a bite." Angel kicked the carrot away yet again while Fluttershy
"Just two bites?" Angel refused.
"Just one?" The bunny refused.
"Just a tiny nibble? For me?" Fluttershy put on her pleading eyes, but Angel just walked away. Fluttershy flew to get her and set her on the floor again in front of the carrot. Angel spit on the carrot and kicked it away for the 50th time.
Fluttershy was losing patience. Her left eye and right wing were twitching as she walked over to get a different carrot and bring it back to the defiant bunny.
"Take... a... BITE." Angel noticed her change in attitude as she set the carrot down.
Angel stuck out her tongue and tried to hop away, but something grabbed her. IT WAS SLENDYFluttershy was standing behind her and picked her up.
"YOU WILL EAT THE CARROT!" She yelled at the bunny, causing all the other animals to peer out of their homes to check what was happening. Fluttershy flung Angel over to the couch, where she landed on her back, stunned by what just happened. Fluttershy grunted, got the carrot, and threw it at the couch. Angel dodged the carrot and gaped at Fluttershy, along with all the animals.
"EAT IT, ANGEL!"
Angel still was defiant. Fluttershy rushed her and everything went black.


   Angel woke up hanging from the ceiling upside-down.
Fluttershy was standing at the far corner of the room pacing. Her eyes were bloodshot and she was laughing manically. She noticed that Angel was awoke, and said in a creepy voice, "Will you eat the carrot NOW?"
Angel gulped and slowly shook her head no. Fluttershy came over and slapped the bunny. Angel shrieked in terror as Fluttershy let out a laugh in only a way that an insane unstable mental hospital escapee could speak in. It it also sounded strained and sad. It sounded like she was being forced.
Fluttershy trotted over to a table Angel had never seen and pulled out a knife and walked over to Angel. Fluttershy carefully aimed the knife at the tip of Angel's ears and slowly but surely cut through the ear. Angel moaned like only a bunny can moan and wiggled. Fluttershy ended up cutting her whole ear off too quickly.
"Now now, Angel, I want you to be fresh and last long, okay. And I don't want the ears to be uneven." She trotted over to a box and opened it. Angel could see bloody rabbit ears sticking out. Fluttershy grinned evilly and whispered, "They wouldn't be good for my collection."
Angel couldn't speak(duh, she's a bunny :P). Or move. She was terrified. She was paralyzed until Fluttershy came over and  carefully slowly sawed off her toes.
The pain coursed through her leg until she jerked her leg forward and hit her square in the nose. She yelled and flailed her arm and sliced Angel in the back of the head. Soon Angel could feel herself drifting off. Then she blacked out.

   She woke up with a shock. She could see her fur standing up on end. She coughed out something unidentified. Fluttershy was holding a bowl that was steaming hot. "Mmmmm, rabbit soup." She grabbed Angel off the rope and dunked her in the broth. The bunny had given up all hope of escape. She felt herself burning, burning, burning, until she was lifeless.

hours later, Fluttershy was in the bathroom washing her face. She was grinning. But then she had a better idea to be able to smile longer. All she needed was a knife and a lighter.
You like?

Last edited by Lolkid332 (2012-06-02 17:52:16)

samid11 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

Lolkid332 wrote:

The carrot hit Fluttershy in the face for the 48th time today. She sighed and set a carrot in front of Angel.
"Oh, please, um, Angel, just take a bite." Angel kicked the carrot away yet again while Fluttershy
"Just two bites?" Angel refused.
"Just one?" The bunny refused.
"Just a tiny nibble? For me?" Fluttershy put on her pleading eyes, but Angel just walked away. Fluttershy flew to get her and set her on the floor again in front of the carrot. Angel spit on the carrot and kicked it away for the 50th time.
Fluttershy was losing patience. Her left eye and right wing were twitching as she walked over to get a different carrot and bring it back to the defiant bunny.
"Take... a... BITE." Angel noticed her change in attitude as she set the carrot down.
Angel stuck out her tongue and tried to hop away, but something grabbed her. IT WAS SLENDYFluttershy was standing behind her and picked her up.
"YOU WILL EAT THE CARROT!" She yelled at the bunny, causing all the other animals to peer out of their homes to check what was happening. Fluttershy flung Angel over to the couch, where she landed on her back, stunned by what just happened. Fluttershy grunted, got the carrot, and threw it at the couch. Angel dodged the carrot and gaped at Fluttershy, along with all the animals.
"EAT IT, ANGEL!"
Angel still was defiant. Fluttershy rushed her and everything went black.


   Angel woke up hanging from the ceiling upside-down.
Fluttershy was standing at the far corner of the room pacing. Her eyes were bloodshot and she was laughing manically. She noticed that Angel was awoke, and said in a creepy voice, "Will you eat the carrot NOW?"
Angel gulped and slowly shook her head no. Fluttershy came over and slapped the bunny. Angel shrieked in terror as Fluttershy let out a laugh in only a way that an insane unstable mental hospital escapee could speak in. It it also sounded strained and sad. It sounded like she was being forced.
Fluttershy trotted over to a table Angel had never seen and pulled out a knife and walked over to Angel. Fluttershy carefully aimed the knife at the tip of Angel's ears and slowly but surely cut through the ear. Angel moaned like only a bunny can moan and wiggled. Fluttershy ended up cutting her whole ear off too quickly.
"Now now, Angel, I want you to be fresh and last long, okay. And I don't want the ears to be uneven." She trotted over to a box and opened it. Angel could see bloody rabbit ears sticking out. Fluttershy grinned evilly and whispered, "They wouldn't be good for my collection."
Angel couldn't speak(duh, she's a bunny :P). Or move. She was terrified. She was paralyzed until Fluttershy came over and  carefully slowly sawed off her toes.
The pain coursed through her leg until she jerked her leg forward and hit her square in the nose. She yelled and flailed her arm and sliced Angel in the back of the head. Soon Angel could feel herself drifting off. Then she blacked out.

   She woke up with a shock. She could see her fur standing up on end. She coughed out something unidentified. Fluttershy was holding a bowl that was steaming hot. "Mmmmm, rabbit soup." She grabbed Angel off the rope and dunked her in the broth. The bunny had given up all hope of escape. She felt herself burning, burning, burning, until she was lifeless.

hours later, Fluttershy was in the bathroom washing her face. She was grinning. But then she had a better idea to be able to smile longer. All she needed was a knife and a lighter.

You like?

FLUTTERSHY IS NOW JEFF.

GO TO PONY

Lolkid332 wrote:

I hope you enjoy, but can you help me make a name? BTW, there is some invisible text here. 


The carrot hit Fluttershy in the face for the 48th time today. She sighed and set a carrot in front of Angel.
"Oh, please, um, Angel, just take a bite." Angel kicked the carrot away yet again while Fluttershy
"Just two bites?" Angel refused.
"Just one?" The bunny refused.
"Just a tiny nibble? For me?" Fluttershy put on her pleading eyes, but Angel just walked away. Fluttershy flew to get her and set her on the floor again in front of the carrot. Angel spit on the carrot and kicked it away for the 50th time.
Fluttershy was losing patience. Her left eye and right wing were twitching as she walked over to get a different carrot and bring it back to the defiant bunny.
"Take... a... BITE." Angel noticed her change in attitude as she set the carrot down.
Angel stuck out her tongue and tried to hop away, but something grabbed her. IT WAS SLENDYFluttershy was standing behind her and picked her up.
"YOU WILL EAT THE CARROT!" She yelled at the bunny, causing all the other animals to peer out of their homes to check what was happening. Fluttershy flung Angel over to the couch, where she landed on her back, stunned by what just happened. Fluttershy grunted, got the carrot, and threw it at the couch. Angel dodged the carrot and gaped at Fluttershy, along with all the animals.
"EAT IT, ANGEL!"
Angel still was defiant. Fluttershy rushed her and everything went black.


   Angel woke up hanging from the ceiling upside-down.
Fluttershy was standing at the far corner of the room pacing. Her eyes were bloodshot and she was laughing manically. She noticed that Angel was awoke, and said in a creepy voice, "Will you eat the carrot NOW?"
Angel gulped and slowly shook her head no. Fluttershy came over and slapped the bunny. Angel shrieked in terror as Fluttershy let out a laugh in only a way that an insane unstable mental hospital escapee could speak in. It it also sounded strained and sad. It sounded like she was being forced.
Fluttershy trotted over to a table Angel had never seen and pulled out a knife and walked over to Angel. Fluttershy carefully aimed the knife at the tip of Angel's ears and slowly but surely cut through the ear. Angel moaned like only a bunny can moan and wiggled. Fluttershy ended up cutting her whole ear off too quickly.
"Now now, Angel, I want you to be fresh and last long, okay. And I don't want the ears to be uneven." She trotted over to a box and opened it. Angel could see bloody rabbit ears sticking out. Fluttershy grinned evilly and whispered, "They wouldn't be good for my collection."
Angel couldn't speak(duh, she's a bunny :P). Or move. She was terrified. She was paralyzed until Fluttershy came over and  carefully slowly sawed off her toes.
The pain coursed through her leg until she jerked her leg forward and hit her square in the nose. She yelled and flailed her arm and sliced Angel in the back of the head. Soon Angel could feel herself drifting off. Then she blacked out.

   She woke up with a shock. She could see her fur standing up on end. She coughed out something unidentified. Fluttershy was holding a bowl that was steaming hot. "Mmmmm, rabbit soup." She grabbed Angel off the rope and dunked her in the broth. The bunny had given up all hope of escape. She felt herself burning, burning, burning, until she was lifeless.

hours later, Fluttershy was in the bathroom washing her face. She was grinning. But then she had a better idea to be able to smile longer. All she needed was a knife and a lighter.
You like?

Maybe "Feeding Time"?

samid11 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Friday Afternoon

I got off the bus, and it was strange not seeing my mom on the street's corner. I am a normal 5th grader. I was in a total rush to get home because it's Friday, my personal favorite day of the week. But when i ran to my house i went to find the little flip thing to open my garage door, which i do when my mom isn't usually there. I entered the code, and it didn't work. I tried it again a few times, but still didn't work. When that happens, i usually go through my back door. My back yard looked normal, but i was still suspicous about the empty back yard with the usual tall grass growing and my treehouse. I went up onto the deck, and the door wouldn't open. I realized it was locked, which i turned the knob, and it was unlocked. I screamed for my mom, which is always home when i get back from school. I decided to go up to my room where my fellow computer is, and i have my phone and my mom and my dad's cell phone numbers on a piece of note book paper. I decided that the logical thing to do is to call them. I wanted to call my 13 year old sister, which i didn't because i don't know her number and her school gets out a lot later than mine. I called my dad, which i got no sound from after i called him for about 5 minutes. I called my mom, which i got a message which said "CLA-" The phone hung up.

What did you think?

And has anyone heard of the story of Kate Morgans? It's really scary but really awesome.

...CLA-

Nice.

Bump. Someone rate my story. D:

samid11 wrote:

TheGameMaster1231 wrote:

http://i45.tinypic.com/3586mj9.jpg

Now that's a pasta that's creepy. 

Actually, it's kinda cute.

True.

Working on a sequel to Feeding Time.

Fluttershy was waiting. In the shadows. She had seen the pony get up many times and get drinks. She was hiding behind the bookcase, which conveniently had a space behind it that she could hide behind. She smiled her sickening, stretched smile, staring right at the pony.

At exactly 12:00 PM, the pony was fast asleep. Fluttershy took the chance and grabbed the piggy bank off the desktop. She sorted through it until she found a total of 17 bits. She laid them on the ground and laughed quietly. She couldn't wake up her fresh meat for dinner tonight. She was already hungry.

Blossom woke up five minutes later. She had the strange feeling something was watching her. She got out of bed and saw a grin enveloped by darkness. Slowly a pair of white eyes with no pupils opened and stared at her. She tried to scream but nothing came out. Slowly, the pony formerly know as Fluttershy opened her mouth and said,

"Shhh."