You should also learn metaphorical language.
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veggieman001 wrote:
You should also learn metaphorical language.
You should learn to be less vague.
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veggieman001 wrote:
You should buy a drum.
I'd rather get a new guitar.
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We're learning tons of Robert Burns poems at school and they're so boring. :c
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Dinoclor wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
I love it.
you spent ages
typing like this
which is actually poetry
so i know you are not lying
i wouldn't really say
that talking like this
is poetry
it doesnt flow
or anything
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I find writing poetry extremely boring. Unless I'm allowed to do it about violence and stuff. Then I love it c8
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Ehh it's okay
I'm more of a story writer, y'know
But I can write some poetry, but I wouldn't say that I'm amazing at it.
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Eh, I prefer stories and books.
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I don't like them,
They are, usually random.
They never rhyme well,
It doesn't, sound swell.
I don't know what swell means,
But it rhymes, so it seems.
I can't recite poems,
Even, if I know them.
Wait that doesn't rhyme,
I think it's time.
To end this poem.
Forever.
I hate... to leave it.
Even if it was really- em, er, bad...
I wasn't about to cuss,
Trust me, you must.
I can't think of any rhymes,
I'll go eat some limes.
Or maybe an orange.
Nothing rhymes, with orange. :c
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werdna123 wrote:
I don't like them,
They are, usually random.
They never rhyme well,
It doesn't, sound swell.
I don't know what swell means,
But it rhymes, so it seems.
I can't recite poems,
Even, if I know them.
Wait that doesn't rhyme,
I think it's time.
To end this poem.
Forever.
I hate... to leave it.
Even if it was really- em, er, bad...
I wasn't about to cuss,
Trust me, you must.
I can't think of any rhymes,
I'll go eat some limes.
Or maybe an orange.
Nothing rhymes, with orange. :c
Poems don't need to rhyme or make sense.
Lewis Caroll wrote:
`Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
"Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The frumious Bandersnatch!"
He took his vorpal sword in hand:
Long time the manxome foe he sought --
So rested he by the Tumtum tree,
And stood awhile in thought.
And, as in uffish thought he stood,
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,
And burbled as it came!
One, two! One, two! And through and through
The vorpal blade went snicker-snack!
He left it dead, and with its head
He went galumphing back.
"And, has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!'
He chortled in his joy.
`Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
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I don't like writing it but I like reading it if it's good.
Once I wrote a poem about squirrels being slaughtered for school lunches (well, with another person).
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Garr8 wrote:
i like to write poetry but i think its kind of sissy to actually read aloud and recite it
Uh... why?
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