imnotbob wrote:
Agentpieface wrote:
It's good, just one thing. The first paragraph sounds EXACTLY like a simpsons episode I saw. Lisa and this girl went to a world of Equality, called equalia xD
lol, like I said, I missed that one.
:3
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DisasterMaster wrote:
Can I haz preview?
Sure.
~Chapter 1~
"Mom, do we have to leave without dad?" Elaine whined. She was heading for New York city from Vietnam.
"Yes," Elaine's mom replied monotonously. She kept her eyes transfixed on the road, but could hardly see past the tears welling up in her eyes.
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