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So you actually liked it! Awesome!

That's terrible.
I mean really. The character had to explain the joke and the average adult isn't that stupid. Not to mention the drawings are poor.
Some constructive critiscism. Also, get a tablet.
and change the pen size when drawing facial features, and it should be smaller because of the size of the drawings is compact.

Last edited by echs (2011-08-25 19:46:59)

TheBlueRocky wrote:

echs wrote:

That's *.
I mean really. The character had to explain the joke and the average adult isn't that stupid. Not to mention the drawings are poor.
Some constructive critiscism. Also, get a tablet.

You have 0 sense of humor. The art doesn't matter-it's how funny it was. That's what a comic's for. The character did NOT explain the joke - the "explaining" was the joke. Plus, the kid said he's 9000% smarter than the average adult, so he must be an extraordinarily smart kid, not an average kid calling adults stupid.

Criticism is no longer constructive when you say a word that must be starred out (even though it's not a bad word).

No, I mean that adults wouldn't answer 9x9 incorrectly. And the artwork affects how funny it is. If the characters are poorly drawn, it loses something.
And if he had ended with him saying, "12!" and then just the kid facepalming, it would be funnier.

Number 2 is out!

Ehhh. I don't know, you could try to draw a little better. Stick figures are fine, just make the lines straighter. Also, try to put the punchline in the last panel.

Also, put the text I'm supposed to read first, over the other text. In the 3rd panel, you should switch the positions of the text.

Last edited by johndo77 (2011-08-26 10:32:49)

echs wrote:

And the artwork affects how funny it is. If the characters are poorly drawn, it loses something.

If it's a funny comic, it won't matter to some people. 

Last edited by kimmy123 (2011-08-26 10:42:02)

brettman98 wrote:

Oh heaven, no.
These are just, ugh.
I'm sorry, but it hurts me to read them.
I mean first off, the art is bad. Not just tetris bad, like 2nd grader drawing bad.
The jokes are pretty simple, and not very funny.
It looks like you took 2 minutes to make this.
And they are all targeted towards adults being stupid. Au contrair, my friend, I know several very smart adults.
Confucius
Mark Twain
Jesus
Laozi
Franklin Roosevelt
Abraham Lincoln
Socrates
The Stoics
Julius Caesar
J.K. Rowling
Catherine Fisher
Alexander the Great
Ptolemy
Isaac Newton
etc.

Adults are not stupid. It is just a joke.    If you don't like them, then fine, that's your opinion.