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ellscharstark wrote:

I am starting a collab about a girl called Maisy and her friends. I need voices, art and writing/ideas. Myself and some Scrathers that I really (not just from the website) know, will put together the scripts and be in charge of voices, art and writing.

Currently the people in charge are:
Scripting: Me
Art: Me
Story writing: Me
Ideas: Me

Voices
I currently need voices for three people. They are Maisy's mum, (minor character, heard but not seen), Jessy (crazy but sometimes angry) and David (pronounces all words correctly). I have a voice for Maisy (brilliant singer).
Look at this project for more info.


Writing/Ideas
I would like ideas of what can happen in the story. I have an idea of the general plot:
 

Maisy and Jessica (Jessy) are "best" friends, but Jessy doesn't take it seriously. David saves/helps Maisy and they become friends. Everyone calls them girlfriend and boyfriend, which embarrasses Maisy but not David. Maisy tries to talk and play with them seperately but Jessy interferes when Maisy and David are talking/playing. Maisy and Jessy have some kind of argument.

There are a lots of possible endings:

The three solve the argument.
Maisy and David are friends together without Jessy.
Maisy and Jessy are friends without David.
Maisy stops being friends with David but Jessy won't be friends with her.
Jessy makes David become her friend, leaving Maisy.
The three main characters die - problem solved.
Some mixture of the above.

If you would like to help with the story, submit ideas.
The ideas need to follow these guidelines:

The story is set in an ordinary town in England.
The characters are mainly children around the age of 10. They need to be in years (grades) 5 or 6, but not any higher.

Include a few ideas of things that could happen. I will use as many ideas as possible
e.g.

Maisy and David go to the park alone but Jessy turns up and interferes.
Maisy sings infront of a group of people but messes it up and Jessy tries to comfort her, only making it worse.

If you would like to help with the script, reply to this topic and include a few sentences about why you want to help.
I will give credit to everyone who submits ideas.
More info on this project.

Art
I need characters drawn for the project. I need three/four costumes of them: standing, one or two walking and sitting.

Maisy - long, light brown hair hanging round her shoulders. Pale skin. Pretty clothes e.g. frilly pink t-shirt and light blue leggings.
Jessy - blonde hair in two high ponytails, giving a mad effect to her. Rosy cheeks and freckles. Scruffy jeans and boyish coloured top.
David - fairly formal clothes. Black hair.
Everyone else - how you imagine them.

I also need places. They are:

A park (but no playground)
A hall with a stage and chairs.
A sitting room with pictures, a fireplace and a door, but no furniture.

Please audition and/or sumbit some ideas and/or submit some art.

View the project here.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/ellscharstark/1982932

I don't think you should make them die. You could make M+D boyfriend and girlfriend and then you could make Jessie their friend eventually. I am redoing my art of the characters. Shame you didn't like them too much. I can edit them on scratch and they work well on there.

I can do David and some audience when Maisy's singing (if there are people).

I think that David could leave the school (leaving the town as well, not leaving year 6) and there could be an epilogue where in about 8 years, David comes back and they get married. Jessy had been friends with Daisy and left to go to college so she never knew David came back.

SpiritMaster wrote:

I can do David and some audience when Maisy's singing (if there are people).

That's not definitely in the script, but I do need a stage and chairs in a hall. Abigail1101's in charge of art.

ellscharstark wrote:

SpiritMaster wrote:

I think that David could leave the school (leaving the town as well, not leaving year 6) and there could be an epilogue where in about 8 years, David comes back and they get married. Jessy had been friends with Daisy and left to go to college so she never knew David came back.

If you weren't my brother, I would say:

Those are brilliant ideas, but I might do more episodes, and that would mean doing them in between. I'll save the ideas for the future.

Gosh, I get confused. There's SpriteMaster AND SpiritMaster. That's ANNOYING!

ellscharstark wrote:

Gosh, I get confused. There's SpriteMaster AND SpiritMaster. That's ANNOYING!

Yes. I think my brother deliberately made that a account so people would think he's SpriteMaster, until they look closely and see that it's SpiritMaster.
SpiritMaster also has an account called SpriteMasterr.

Grr... I AM ANNOYED!

ellscharstark wrote:

Please audition! Help needed!

I have!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abigail1101 strictly approves of Maisy's Month.

ellscharstark wrote:

Abigail1101 wrote:

Abigail1101 strictly approves of Maisy's Month.

Huh?

I thought that's what you called it. I thought it would be FUNNY!

ellscharstark wrote:

Bump. Please audition.

Do you want me to hit you?