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Grammar needs to be fixed before my brain explodes... *little fuze on one side of head lights* Umm... HELP ME!

Anyway, in simply seeing a lack of pictures or anything to tell you what it's about, I don't want to try it. That's just me having been on other forums before where the more you enthrall your audience, the more they play. The grammar thing contributes because unless there's a language barrier, your english should be perfect. Bad spelling drives people away.

um in case you havent noticed, im a NEW scratcher. NO DUH MY PROJCTS ARENT AS GOOD AS YOURS! NO WONDER NOBODY ENTERED YOUR LAME CONTEST THE LAST TIME I LOOKED. and bad grammar does NOT "drive your people away". i dont even have bad grammar. i just dont use these ' thingies because they make it slower. now go away because if you dont have anything good to say, then dont add yourself to the conversation and annoy everybody! now go annoy somebody else, i know your just doing it to annoy me!

boogernator wrote:

frizzlepuss893 wrote:

um in case you havent noticed, im a NEW scratcher. NO DUH MY PROJCTS ARENT AS GOOD AS YOURS! NO WONDER NOBODY ENTERED YOUR LAME CONTEST THE LAST TIME I LOOKED. and bad grammar does NOT "drive your people away". i dont even have bad grammar. i just dont use these ' thingies because they make it slower. now go away because if you dont have anything good to say, then dont add yourself to the conversation and annoy everybody! now go annoy somebody else, i know your just doing it to annoy me!

WOAH!!!!! Why did you just flame me! I didn't say it was bad, I just thought with a little cleaning it could be even better! I'm sorry if you took it as though it was an insult, and my contest isn't lame, it's just related to Starwars which I guess is why people hate it. I'm not saying it's not good, I'm just saying it could be better because there is always room for improvement! No need to flame me for it! (And bad grammar does actually lessen howmany people want to play, it happens on a site called atmosphir alot. Levels with a good cool levels thread and good grammar generally get more plays than levels with terrible grammar where shoes is spelled shoozz.) Again I appologize, it just needs a little work, and when you become the great scratcher I know you can be, you'll be able to redo the jumpathon series better than ever before. Keep going and you'll get good at what you're doing. Are we OK with eachother now?

oh, dude im really sorry i thought you were insulting me. and on this other site called roblox that i quit i was pretty famous and i didnt use grammar that much. yes, i guess we are ok with eachother now. but you couldve said something a little less critic-like. something like yeah, it was ok, except for yadayadayada. but that comment on the actual game was a little flame-deserving. and im sorry i called your contest lame. when i get angry like that i cant stop. i hope you can forgive me for flaming you like that, and taking it wrongly

It's good as a basic game, if you want it to be better just add some more taste and originality.